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Sorry to just barge in with a criticism, but the height rule seems a little silly to me, never mind unnecessarily discriminatory, and I wanted to point it out.

Even though I'm exactly 5'10", a good deal of men I know are shorter. For men; the average height in China is 5'6", the average height in Kenya is 5'7", the average height in Mexico is 5'6" and a half, the average height in Portugal is 5'8", and so on. So it's not evident that 5'10" should be used as a hard minimum for male height around the world. This doesn't even extend to aliens, which might have a different view on height. You've got the Martians who (I'm assuming in this universe) are shape shifters and thus probably don't care too much, and the Guardians of the Universe who are all about the same stature at roughly half the size of any human depending on who draws them. Obviously there are exceptions to the rule, and super heroes should be exceptional; but expecting every single male character to be taller than a certain height seems a little ridiculous.

Or I'm missing some context? Maybe you have a personal vendetta against short people? It might be an interesting villain motivation, certainly.

Anyway, here's my character.

Interested. Gimme a few days and I'll make a dude.
I'm not going to argue this with you; so I'll just give you the win.
The flare was on the giant's back. Why would he not notice the initial spark? He's also got some telekinesis and can lift 2 things at once. In addition with his actual body, that's potentially 4 things at once.
Shonen physics aren't real physics. That's because writers aren't physicists. Though, the dude who did Fist of the North Star was some kind of doctor...
BOOM! An all consuming flame erupted, setting the entire floating island ablaze in a dramatic fireball. The explosion was large enough that it was certain nothing in the area survived. The island seemed to shake under the immense force, almost splitting apart under the immense force. The fire cracked and sizzled, the horrid fumes filling the air and choking out, clearly whatever breathed. It took a while for the ashes to settle. There were no survivors expected among the wreckage as the fire rose.

The wind blew away revealing the results of such a powerful attack. Standing alone within a large crater, was Pierce Gatsby, still kicking. Before him, rubble strewn about the crater. The muscular man flexed his pectoral muscles, and as soon as he did, the smoke cleared completely out of the way, revealing Pierce's Herculean physique. His plan, flawless. Using muscles, Pierce stamped a hole for himself to hide in. Using his power to LIFT things, he had created a cap made of stone and earth as well as some of the converted metal created by Ivar, protecting himself from the outside explosion. It had taken the cap along with most of the top soil of the island.

Pierce glared directly at Ivar as he stomped out of the crater, finally getting a glimpse of his true opponent, apparently unscathed by the explosion. He lifted a muscular finger. "Hmm... So it was you." Pierce grumbled angrily. "TOMORROW. WHEN YOUR ASS IS IN THE HOSPITAL SCREAMING IN PAIN, YOUR WIFE WILL BE ON HER BACK SCREAMING MY NAME!" he insulted, running toward Ivar. He vaulted up over Ivar's wall, pumping his fist out. Another fist projected out of the first fist, flying at highspeeds toward Ivar. It was aimed directly at his face.
I'd like to help you, but I don't think I really can just by RPing with you. How much do you read?
If you don't mind me asking: What was your first language?
Hey, so you want things to explode right? What's affected by the explosion? Is the ground also exploded? I know I'm making things hard, but please describe this stuff.
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