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@Teknonick
LOL I started with one and I have worked my way up to five. I think my females are stronger, probably because I am one. But I think my males are solid. Katherin was my first. Have you heard of the Game of Thrones?

@Diabolicalrhapsody
If you get a chance you should. I have read all but his last book. It's on my list.


I would love to read his work but Georgie is an awful tease. I'm a rather fast reader and he gets me so curious that I had to consciously hold myself back from indulging in Game of Thrones. The same seems to be the case with Sanderson and Rothfuss. They are all lovely but reading their work I am filled with both awe and envy.

On another note, Till now I have penned about 80 characters. I love writing female characters because of the scope they provide but in situations where I try to play a passive character I go with Males. I frankly, don't know which ones of mine are better. The jury is split down the middle on that one. A few of my buds like my female characters, the others think the males are more convincing.
@Diabolicalrhapsody
I love George R R Martin


Sadly, I haven't read much of his work. But what he had to say about writing female characters struck a chord and I tried my best from there.

[@Technokick]

I usually have the silent bruiser template ready to roll for my characters. They all have varied personalities but share a few traits. Everyone is an incomplete image of me and that's fun to write. I usually don't forsake RPs because I lost ispiration, because getting into the skin of a character for me is pretty instant. I love Leera from what I have read. About others, I guess we'll have to wait to see more light on them.

Josive, for me didn't make a lasting impression. But that's my opinion and I hope you are not offended.
@Diabolicalrhapsody
Oh, no. IDK. I just for some reason can't tell. I've always thought you were male, but then I'm thinking your female because of your recent posts. I'm not sure what exactly made me think one way or the other. So, for now, I guess I'll just call you HeShe like I did with Hexo/Hexa back in the day. lol. Although, He/She was actually brother and sister... so I literally had no idea which was which until I asked (They used the same account.)


Your choice mate. Usually writing female characters I try to follow George R. R. Martin's words. But if from my recent posts you got the idea that I am a female, then mission accomplished.
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I'm sorry if this is personal... but are yuva boy, or a girl? I for some reason can't tell. (Or neither/both, I don't judge)


Why? is there a problem? I'm sorry if there is. I'm comfortable in the anonymity of the internet. But if you still want to know thentake your pick and I'll roll with that XD
Alexei Dragunov | Shirohane Flower Store |


Whether it was the whole setting and the gratitude that he felt towards the Shirohanes or it was his own hidden feelings but tears lined his eyes as he looked at the receipt. Scribbled on it was the outstanding balance by the Elder Shirohane. He felt humbled and guilty at the same time. Thinking that his slip up may have had him milking his sorrow.

Taking a deep breath as he looked around the store away from the smiling patron, he wiped his eyes to snuff out the tears that built up inside. With a brief pause, he said. His voice a bit shaky, not having its trademark composure "I'm already grateful for what you both have done for me, Shirohane-dono. Please do not burden me with favors I can't repay. I don't want to annoy you but I can't accept this. For your effort and care alone, I know that your price would be much higher than the Shiyaki's at the Lake's edge and your timely and punctual delivery routine as been a sense of awe and happiness to my family."

He paused, tears building up in his eyes again as he bowed his head and wiped them again to face the lady. "To me, your effort is not just a bouquet but a ray of hope, something that the best doctors in this country have been unable to achieve. I know it is crass to put price on something so priceless but I know that what you ask is too little."

He looked at the lady with eyes filled with sorrow and gratitude.

"If you doubt that I'll be unable to pay your price, I'm willing to drop out. But please, please don't do this." He took out the envelope which had his salary. All of it, some 370,000 Yen.

"Keep this and let me know what more I have to pay." he said with a bow, seemingly regain his mask back on.
@Takaru

What is the price on the card, mate. I shall get in a reply soon. Just throw me a number, is 350,000 yen all right?
Brigit was unsure on how to reply to her friend, words had left her a long time ago. She didn't know what she could do in this situation, especially her friend too had the handicap of sight. She paused for a moment before trying hard and managing to grunt "Unh...hunh", it was supposed to be a positive reply but how Katherin would take it was something she wasn't sure about. She still hugged her warmly, the ice ran directly from her body into Brigit's, tiny flakes formed on her fiery red hair.

@KatherinWinter
happy birthday to me


Happy! Birthday!!!! Kat.~blows a kiss of good luck~
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But he said good morning and asked if she slept well while they were walking to the gym and kind of just got ignored by both her and Katherin...


I think I wrote in that she nodded. But if I didn't then it means I have to edit that bit because I felt I had replied to his greetings.

@Yami: Sorry, forgot to copy that bit from the notepad. It is updated now. It gels seamlessly with the post you made apart from your inner monologue. I am sorry for the misunderstanding.
@LovelyAnastasia @KatherinWinter

The commotion seemed to have settled down and Brigit released her hug on the tall girl with it, slowly pulling herself away from her as she looked into her eyes with a faint smile. Hopefully, she was calmer now. The housekeeper shouted for things to settle down and it seems that a quarrel was averted, unless she felt a shiver run down her spine.

Ice, brilliant and slick, covered the floor in one endless chunk and slowly it crept up her skin. It had already reached her knees as she stood rooted to the spot. She turned to look at the tall girl, thinking that she may be surprised. In the back of her mind Brigit knew what or rather who could have caused it. Could she talk, she would have definitely helped Katherin in getting the grasp of the situation but she couldn't.

Her body slowly began absorbing the coldness from the ice as it fell off her like flakes dead skin, she now had another job at hand. To get her first friend to calm down. Barefooted she walked on the cold floor and sat down next to Katherin, placing her head on her shoulder which seemed rigid, she rubbed her back to calm her down. Hoping that the ice would recede.
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