Disciple Cain

Overlord: How Like A God

@ShwiggityShwah

Alright, I've looked it over and found no issues with it. I'll also be sending you a PM.

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@VarockSvent I've reviewed your sheet, and I'm really not fond of the backstory. Yggdrasil had limitations that would prevent AO-rated actions from occurring, but just the idea behind the game fantasy he enacted in the Yggdrasil (with a guild, no less) squicks me out. It lays it on thick really early and I wouldn't be comfortable working with it. I'll need you to recreate his backstory.

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@Bright_Ops Note about the Engineering thing-- there's a lot you definitely still can construct, I'm just eschewing some of the more ridiculous things that came from Yggdrasil like... Power Suits (literally Wanzer's/Mobile Suits). Golems and other such constructs are definitely in scope, and I suspect one of your cohorts is also an automaton that you might've designed. I can see that there's a lot to work with here in Bright Ops building their MACHINE DOMAIN or something like that with their engineering, blacksmithing, mining, and researching skills. Because of the amount of crafting levels you have, there may actually be things that you can't go toe-to-toe with so easily, or maybe not at all since those crafting levels don't translate to combat power. Then again, you don't have to. Your metal minions can do the work for you.

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@Lunarlord34 The whole 'Actually 3000 when she looks 12'... I'm giving that a wide berth. I'm going to put my foot down now about a "No Minors, No Loli, No Shota" rule. I've had and seen too many RPs on this site get really weird after a teenager was put in with a bunch of twenty and thirty-somethings.

On another note, Exorcist could work against Undead (Ghosts) and Demons. If you're looking for more magical means of locking down a fight against a Ghost or Demon, that would be the way to do it. Might also help dealing with demonic and ghostly domination effects and other related things.

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I'm actually currently more interested in what disability he has in 2138 that keeps him from working, and now suddenly curious about how Japan deals with disability.

For the Enginseer, I'm not really fond of the idea of putting in future tech or mostly modern tech to the new world because it doesn't really fit for me. I can see its appeal, but it isn't something I want to feature much of.

The Null Pariah I would rather not have featured here. A constant anti-magic field isn't 'too powerful', but it is incredibly uninteractive.

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Now, note that the actual amount of passive and active abilities supposedly in this game, combined with extra 'content' from the new world, is ridiculous. There are some things that aren't worth listing because it would just be a mess of text. I'll fill in those blanks.

@ShwiggityShwah Also, could you xategorize where some of your abilities come from? Which classes provide them, etc.?

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So!

@Lunarlord34 The Sword Saint title is associated (usually) with iaijutsu, which in mythical lore allows them to draw, dash, and swing all in one motion. It's the stereotypical samurai face-off move where one guy gets a cut on his cheek while the other falls in half and sprays blood like he's in a Kurosawa film. Their gimmick may be very strong opening moves, specializing in sword category, not a ton of follow up routine.

Templar is a high class that probably branches from the Cleric class, considering Roberdyck has levels in that class as well as Cleric and High Cleric. It may or may not have more to do with either dealing with undead, or a martial-focused branch for the cleric. Suffice to say, it's probably got divine casting power, and it can just as easily branch from Paladin I bet.

Avenger definitely sounds like a martial-focused paladin branch. They probably come with a specific and gimmicky kit but... I don't want to get carried away and make the whole class right here.

That's about what I've got for now.

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@Lunarlord34 Oh, my mistake. Edgelord is your character. Alright. All is mostly in order then.

I will say to boost the age of Edgelord's NPCs. Conflict of interest to feature minors here.

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I have not been keeping track. I also haven't decided yet so go for it. Until I close applications, I'll accept more.

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@Lunarlord34 I'd still suggest only having up to 2 rare classes. Also, are you sure Paladin is a basic class? I'm not and I'll have to check. I remember someone in Nazarick having paladin levels but they were novel only I think. I'll get back to you on that.
I'm getting a feeling for this character. Though, you might want to level down your NPCs. You might not have been able to get them up that high after going lone wolf, or you'll at least have to explain why one of Edgelord's NPCs is with her after she left.
I'll help you with abilities best I can at my next break. Unfortunately, my phone service shit the bed at work and I was unable to reply earlier.

@ShwiggityShwah Sounds a lot like your backstory is going to be describing a roleplayer. Don't forget to tell something in the context of him playing the game with friends or guild mates! Your character can definitely tell that story to the new world, though. The right people will eat up that creation myth like it's a bountiful feast.
I can think of an antagonist for this character already. I think you'll like it.
Also, I think you might need to rebalance some racial and class levels. Most facials max at 10 or 15, and it's assumed you need to max one to advance to the next stage. You might go 15, 10, 5 for your racial levels, so you'll have to prune (haha) some job classes. I'd suggest pruning one of the rare classes to drop your rare class number to 2.
Squeeze is... a fantastic name.