Amartia has driven the entire populace of Xerxes insane with mad orgasmic pleasure from doing sinful shit. He makes this even worse in preparation of an attack because SOMEBODY TIPPED HIM OFF. *Glares at Illunabar*
Eh. He was going to figure it out anyway, it was more of a plot tool to justify why Xerxes isn't defenseless, and Ilunabar's tip wasn't even about this fight in particular. Again, I'm just a bit unhappy with how that one turned out, I feel like the original dialogue in the scrapped version drove the point better, the new one is just so much more blunt.
But anyway, Amartia doing what he did with the heartbeat stuff helped her a lot, even if Amy has yet to realize what he has done.
@KhoI was just thinking the same thing. But I think the lack of training is the only way to justify the battle in Xerxes lasting more than a second.
@FrettzoTake your time, no rush. Furthermore, that storyline is currently only holding back Makeda, I can still write Susa and Divas stories.