Makatsume Haru said
Alright, time for CS feedback! :DDraco: I think it is well versed and you aren't going overboard with the Persona and the story seems very credible for the Beowulf verse, or as I'm just seeing it now after making some quick research, it seems it actually is part of the Beowulf story, you just put it a name. Clever. Ken is in!
It is the exact Dragon of Beowulfs story. my AP lit class was good for something!
Though yeah, named and with a bit more history otherwise. It's cool I'm playing an almost literally pure evil character right xD