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Naruto - Legend of the Bijuu's - Part I - OOC

I read Brass Knuckles and was like "Ohhhh shit!"

Also, Masaki, Kaminari (Black Lightning) is canon.

Naruto - Legend of the Bijuu's - Part I - OOC

Current Line-Up is as Follows:

Leaf Village:
Aiko Uzumaki - Genin
Kota Uchiha - Genin
Sharaiyu Shyzu - Genin

Kokai Ekirei - Tokubetsu Jonin
Ria Uchiha - Jonin

Stone Village:
Kii - Genin
Ryou Hozuki - Genin
Shira Aburame - Genin

Sand Village:
Daisuke Fukui - Genin
Tamiko Mai Adachi - Genin

Saiyaka Sandeiyoshi - Tokubetsu Jonin

Missing Nin:
Kai Yatoma {Leaf}
Marashi shimoto {Iwagakure ~ Zetsu}

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Jinchuriki:
Shukaku/One-Tails - Daisuke Fukui
Matatabi/Two-Tails - Kota Uchiha
Isobu/Three-Tails - Open
Son Goku/Four-Tails - Open
Kokuo/Five-Tails - Open
Saiken/Six-Tails - Open
Chomei/Seven-Tails - Shira Aburame
Gyuki/Eight-Tails - Kai Yatoma
Kurama/Nine-Tails - Aiko Uzumaki

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Hokage(Konohagakure) - Oda Uchiha
Tsuchikage(Iwagakure) - Open
Mizukage(Kirigakure) - Open
Raikage(Kumogakure) - Atlas "A" Hakumo
Kazekage(Sunagakure) - Open

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Naruto - Legend of the Bijuu's - Part I - OOC

Naive. There was no other word for it. Even Kii, a kid, could see that she was being naive.
Did she think this was a game? That this was some moment for her to show off?

'All we do were D-C rank missions...'
'Usually then when I spy I'm serious...'
'You highly underestimate the main child of the remaining Aburame Clan...'

No. This was all the argument of a spoiled child that was happy to receive some special gift that she didn't even know how to use. If she couldn't take a D-Rank mission seriously then she couldn't be expected to take an S-Rank one any more serious. She lacked the practical experience in this field, no matter how gifted of a Aburame that she was. The same was said for Kii and for Ryou. They were all Genin. They were all kids. Did she not see this? Clearly, Shira wasn't understanding the implications of what she'd been asked. She thought this was just some moment for her to show off her skills. Her words and her reaction was all too arrogant...Then she even thought to tell Kii to leave, which honestly hurt his feelings. He'd been looking out for her. She may have taken it as an insult, but in the end he'd been saying the things he had said for her protection. He hadn't said anything that was meant to purposely hurt her, but to point out that this situation was way over their heads. Yet, she told him she was fine without him then compared him to some village exploding freak...

For what? Kii didn't understand what she was saying. He didn't see how what she was saying made sense.
Yet, he had to respect that it was her choice, as a Jinchuriki, and her privilege to decide what she wished to do. This collective offer was for the Jinchuriki in the end and Kii had barely any right to even be here...So, in the end, his opinion was washed away and he was swept under the table.

"Fine..." Kii would say, relaxing. He'd unclench his fist and sigh, looking away from the General and from Shira, "But i'm not leaving," he said low, almost mumbling. "There's no way I'm going to let you do something this dangerous without me." Kii was going to stick to that. Even if she didn't want him around he didn't want her to do something irrefutable and get herself killed or worse, caught. He could swallow his own pride and bite his own tongue if she wanted him too. "I am sorry..." Kii would add, looking over at the general a moment. Kii wasn't going to dignify the apology with a bow. Instead, he'd just take a few steps back, feeling the cool wall through his mantle.

Still...Even playing the defeated card, Kii didn't lose his reservations.
This mission was stupid and pointless and would end horrifically. She was being ignorantly optimistic if she figured random people who hardly knew each other could join hands and work together to accomplish such a badly planned mission like this...But, well, it was that trait that he did like about Shira. She was hopeful, positive and bright. So bright that he couldn't see how she could say half the things she said or think the way she did. Kii didn't trust these Jinchuriki, he didn't trust Konoha and, most importantly, he didn't trust this General that would send a bunch of Genin into S-Class enemy territory just for a bit of information.

Sighing and looking away, Kii decided that it would be better if he just didn't say anything else for the duration of this meeting. He'd gotten himself scolded by Ryou and Shira already. No point in making this any worse on himself.

Naruto - Legend of the Bijuu's - Part I - OOC

Explosion buddy!

Also, Shira did not just go there!

Naruto - Legend of the Bijuu's - Part I - OOC

Yeah. Then the Leaf team could forcibly have Ekirei adopt them...Against his will.
I mean, who wouldn't want two Bijuu Babies?

Naruto - Legend of the Bijuu's - Part I - OOC

You should :0
Then it would have a full team!

Naruto - Legend of the Bijuu's - Part I - OOC

I'd also like to add that Kii ordinarily doesn't lose his cool.
So that outburst is actually out of character for him. Especially to the point of being disrespectful. The only reason he's so angry is because it's about his team member.

Naruto - Legend of the Bijuu's - Part I - OOC

Why not make a team with Aiko, Kota, and Sharaiyu?

Naruto - Legend of the Bijuu's - Part I - OOC

Bad idea! Bad idea! Kii couldn't help but repeat the words over and over in his head. If Konoha really didn't want the support of the Republic and, possibly, were planning a war then sending weapons to them was probably the worst sort of idea. What if Konoha did have evil intentions? Then they would catch all the Bijuu then wage war against the entire alliance. There was that then the fact that someone like Shira would be a terrible spy. She didn't have the right sort of tact. She'd give herself away almost immediately. Kii knew that this plan just smelled really bad all around. Sending all the Jinchuriki into the village, all at once, to see if Konoha was truly an enemy was like throwing your life savings into a cave of bandits to see if they were really money hungry.

If the Jinchuriki were caught they wouldn't simply be killed...The Bijuu inside them would be assimilated into Konoha Jinchuriki so that this war could finally start. Kii knew that any sane person in this room would outright refuse. There was no way that this idea was safe and, assuredly, they valued themselves enough to realize that they'd be more harm to their villages if they went along with this.

Kii watched the general, eyes intense.
There was something about this man. Something...Unsaid...Unnoticed. Kii felt like this man was trying at something entirely different here. Was he purposely trying to endanger the Jinchuriki? Maybe he wanted to send them into Konoha so one of them would go berserk and destroy half the village. Was his aim at starting this war? He seemed really focused on power. Why else would he think that because two Bijuu were in Konoha that it was a bargining chip to getting the Jinchuriki to invade? Did he want those Jinchuriki on his side? Was he the one building power? For what purpose? Why was he so interested in Konoha's relent? If Konoha didn't want to be apart of the Republic then wasn't a better idea to just let them be independent? Why did all the village need to be under his beck and call like this?

This man...Was too suspicious.
"You are an idiot," Kii said, outright, "And if you think Shira is stupid enough to go along with that retarded plan then I should smash your face in right now," Kii said, clenching his fist. His fist started to glow red as his hot chakra boiled at his knuckles. There was no other way for Kii to express his distaste in what the man was offering. He was basically playing with Shira's life. He'd send her in there, despite the fact that higher ranked, more experienced, talented ninja had already been caught and killed trying to do the same thing, and all for what? Some motivation to go to war with Konoha?!

Kii was way too smart to just sit quiet and let this man manipulate the minds of a bunch of Genin kids. He knew better. He'd been suspicious of this sort of thing from the start. There was no way he'd let Shira be put in danger. This man's chaotic plan was far too unstable and, all the more, Kii didn't trust the other Jinchuriki to go along with this plan. They could be stupid, inexperienced, or as haphazard as Shira. If they blew the cover, were caught, and gave her name...Then they'd all be caught and turned into Konoha's ballista.

"You can go die in a ditch, moron...." Vehemently, Kii kept his intense gaze on the general. What Kii really didn't like, couldn't stand, was that this man was so carelessly offering to put Shira in the ultimate sort of danger and the only incentive was finding two missing Jinchuriki that he honestly didn't even care about!

Though, in the end, it was Shira's decision.
It was all her decision.

Naruto - Legend of the Bijuu's - Part I - OOC

Tell me if she is overpowered or not. I tried to place plenty of weaknesses in the techniques. I desiginated her S-Rank though, if that helps my grade.

Whirling Ninja

Appearance:



Name: Saiyaka Sendeiyoshi, Whirling Ninja
Age: 23
Gender: Female
Village: Sunagakure
Village Rank Tokubetsu Jonin, former ANBU Sealing Captain
Ninja Rank: S-Rank
Release: Wind
Tools(Optional):
Biography: Saiyaka Sendeiyoshi came from an ordinary family. Her mother was a florist, who had dreams to one day own her own shop, and her father worked as an electrician and labor for hire. He was a hard working man that would do any job he could get his hands on. He was the sort of guy that could juggle 3 jobs at once and still have plenty of energy the breif moments he was home. He was a skilled man that was a quick learner, had a marvelous memory, and had almost mechanic efficiency. It wasn’t a surprise that their first and only child would hold her father’s talent for work.

Saiyaka was uncommonly intelligent, even from a young age. She was gifted with some insight that seemed almost supernatural. She was a quick learner, a studious student, and she was attracted to learning. This, combined with her natural aptitude with manipulating her own chakra, made her more than a rightful candidate for ninjutsu. When she was 8 she was recruited to be a ninja and she was trained by a ninja known as Kurana Kurogane. With his training on top of her academy training she blew through the academy. She was graduated early, at the age of 11, and was placed on a Genin team with two others.

Saiyaka was beyond the level of genin when she was placed with her team mates, however. Though, from a physical aspect she had ways to go, she could mold chakra and cast ninjutsu far beyond the level of her teammates. It was up to Sumoshi Durana, her Sensei, on whether she would take the Chuunin exams, only 4 months after graduation, and he allowed her, alone, to participate. Her other two teammates were too green to participate. It was no surprise to Sumoshi or Kurana that she completed the Chuunin exams and, even better, came out on top.

Saiyaka was called the Demoness and the Whirling Ninja. She was so talented and so specialized that she was able to turn the entire Chuunin exams to her own favor. She even invented her own technique in the middle of it to best a challenging opponent, who was years more experienced than she was. In the end, she came out without a scratch. This incited some fear in her peers, specifically her teammates, and summoned excitement out of her superiors.

She was going to be someone extraordinary.
Saiyaka’s expertise was in sealing ninjutsu, techniques typically deemed far too complicated and intricate for ordinary ninja of her age. It was due to this specialization that she was eventually removed from her team and placed in Kurana’s specific care. It was with Kurana that she fine tuned her abilities and started to blossom as a ninja. She spent 5 years under his care, enduring tumultuous training exercises. Sometimes her screams and the explosions could escape the forests and seep into the village.

Her parents were always worried, but they were assured by many that she would be just fine. What her parents didn’t know was that she was brought to the point of death many times over. She was being specially prepared for a very dangerous job. One that she happily accepted. She was going to become a master of her abilities, even better than the Kage, in the art that she excelled in.

When she was 16 she resurfaced. No one had seen her for the 5 years she’d trained. Many questioned where Kurana was...She would coldly explain, to her former Sensei, that he was dead. She’d killed him at the height and end of her training. The Demoness became her permanent brand after that day. Even the Kazekage had to recognize her incredible ability and he rewarded her with the rank of Jonin without her even have to take a single test.

She would join ANBU for a time. Many wanted to see just what the fruits of her training had gained. They were incredibly surprised. Her ability to manipulate chakra was masterful and her demonstration as a Kekkaijutsu and Funijutsu master enabled her to be exactly what she was bred to be. While apart of the ANBU she was in charge of trapping targets and sealing techniques, though her level of power was hardly warranted. Especially in these peaceful times. She was the ultimate last resort as a teenage girl.

A two years of being with the ANBU she was promoted to Captain. She gained extraordinary experience in leadership and tactics. She made sure to take as much information from her fellow ANBU as she could to further her own experience and strength. She had many Sensei and had many more she was training. After exactly 6 months she was deemed ready for her assignment. The very assignment she’d been training all this time to accept.

Saiyaka was to become the handler of the Ichibi.
She studied him for a long time. She watched him in the academy and recorded his life. She was honestly disappointed. He was an ordinary, lonely, sheltered little boy with terrible insomnia. She’d been expecting something his total opposite, yet that didn’t sway her away. In fact, it only encouraged her to do better. She planned to utilize her unparalleled training to make the Ichibi, Daisuke Fukui, into the greatest ninja of the Sand.

If not...She was more than qualified to kill him.

Jutsu List:
Chakra Chains - Able to materialize her chakra into powerful chains of restristing chakra. These chains are so powerful they can restrain even a Bijuu, however they are more than able to be cast upon a living opponent. Those bound in the chains will find their bodies, minds and chakra heavily restricted. It takes a great deal of power to break them. Although powerful, they are slow and predictable. A swift enough ninja could dodge them.

Blocking Technique • Absorption Seal - A specialized technique onced used by a mighty Rinnegan user. This technique allows the user to absorb chakra into their body and render oncoming ninjutsu ineffective. This technique is Saiyaka’s most powerful technique and her epithet as the Whirling Ninja. She uses this technique by extending her hand out and oncoming ninjutsu will spin as they are consumed into her body. Should the user get close enough to grab the opponent, the barrier can absorb chakra right out of an individual's body, effectively draining them. It is also because of this technique that she is rightly feared. The only real weakness in this technique is that in order for the user to use it they must remain in one place and concentrate. It is a fair defense, but it requires absolute stillness.

Five Elements Seal - Focusing chakra to five fingers, the user has the power to greatly harbor and restrict the chakra of those they strike. Saiyaka has enough proficiency that she can almost fully block the chakra flow of a target that she lands a hit on. She could, due to her capability, isolate a Jinchuriki from their Bijuu using this technique.

Five Elements Unseal - Focusing chakra to five fingers, the user has the power to release the Five Elements Seal as well as release various other sealing and barrier techniques by disestablishing the technique she places her hand upon. Her Five Elements Unseal is so specialized that she could destroy fortified techniques with a single strike and cause the to disintegrate into nothing. She could even use this technique to release a Bijuu from its Jinchuriki.

Kekkei Genkai: None

Other Info: She is an exceptionally powerful and specialized ninja and one to be rightfully feared. She is Sunagakure’s ultimate defense against the Bijuu and a rampaging Shukaku and the most talented Fuinjutsu user in all of Sunagakure. She was raised and reared to become the ultimate weapon to best a powerful beast. As such, most of her training is focused on chakra, chakra control, Fuinjutsu and Kekkaijutsu. She, specifically, holds no capacity for healing, taijutsu or nintaijutsu. Although powerful and versatile, in a fight against an opponent that doesn’t need chakra to fight, such as a hand-to-hand specialist, she would fair poorly.

However, a hand-to-hand specialist is her one and only real weakness.

She is an exceptional teacher. She knows a great deal about assassinations, ninja tactics, politics, and combat training. Even if she may fail or be weak in a certain area she knows how to teach others to be proficient in them.

It is assumed that, due to her knowledge, experience, and powerful sealing techniques that she could be the next Kazekage. The only reason she’d shirk this responsibility is because she enjoys travelling.