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Name: Bill Ding
Gender: Male
Job: Firefighter
Setting: Can we get a creepy abandoned hospital or asylum?
If you look at how he is as of now, yes, he is very strong. Chidori as an assassination technique, why would he be taught it? And all these variations? Is there a reason he has them all? You just hardly put any amount of work in. It's all generic; literally, I could replace someone else's Bio with yours, replace the names, and it would seem to work. You just come out as a cookie-cutter character, like some kind of background or Filler character I would see in the anime. Sorry, like I said, my opinion.
"Oh, right, I'm sorry for that. I just get a little bit ahead of myself, heh! Nice to meet you Kokai-san, I'm Kota of the Uchiha clan, genin rank!" The boy was friendly, a trait not common among Uchiha, and it was a pleasant surprise. "I know you're a Tokubetsu Jonin....but....please train me in Wind Release!" Kota bowed before Kokai, a gesture of humility, and pleaded with him. "I'm lacking in ninjutsu and all I have to make up for it is my Kenjutsu..."

Kokai looked at the blade by the boy's side, skeptical of the proceedings. The two just met, and already the boy was asking for knowledge. Kokai would have been offended, had he not have been interested in the boy's chakra. 'Someone with such untapped power could be a great friend,' Kokai thought, 'or a mortal enemy.'

Kokai stood in the street, watching the boy for some time. After around a minute, Kokai let his curiosity make his decision. "Kota. If you truly wish to learn what I have bled to learn, what I have wielded to kill with, and what may be my end, I will humor you." Kokai was done being friendly, taking on his Shinobi attitude. "If you truly wish this, you are to meet me in the forest outside Konoha in an hour. It is there we may practice safely, and you may begin your studies if you pass my test." Kokai walked around the boy, not willing to wait for an answer. If the boy was serious, Kokai would take the time to teach him to be stronger. After all, it seems the boy was genuine in learning. Continued his walk to his lonely apartment, to take some time and think.
It's just theres so little work put into it. I mean, how does he learn all these variations of Chidori? There is little reason an ANBU would teach his son such a dangerous move. And since Storm Release is a Kekkei Genkai, shouldn't there be more work put into it? I have Wind and Water, but that doesn't mean I can use Ice Release
I'm just trying to make people giggle. Don't like it, don't read it
And these standards aren't allowing jokes, but they allow a drunk AMA?
Kind of a weak app for such a strong player. I mean, you have one paragraph for your bio. Just my opinion, but I'll be a little bummed if it gets approved as it is
Drake the type of nigga that takes a picture of another nigga to the barber and say "This one please"
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