Eklispe

Reign: Kingdom Come

That is not what was said. Pro noted that the way things are now IC the main group has little reason to actively interact with Favian. They have no idea who he is, want to move quickly and avoid trouble, and aren't looking for new party member, and Favian is acting strangely. Thus there is very little reason for the group to not simply move on as fast as possible. As things stand Col is actively interacting with him so I should think it's clear that you/we can make something happen from that, and Col's reasoning for his interaction is not unreasonable simply to further Favian being in the group either, he's a nice dude on principle.

Yu-Gi-Oh!: Harmonia United

Jokes aside, while I'd have liked a little more creativity in the card choices.

I kind of don't get how your number 1 relates to his deck, though, if I may be entirely honest. Nor dancing, nor the moon nor cute monster girls seem to be a key part of Lance and I don't feel like someone who only tries as hard as they need to for their goals falls in line with that deck. If anything I'd see him play something a lot slowe.

@Ammokkx

In terms of constructive criticism I'm interested in what card choices you might have made for the deck. Your criticism on both points is definitely valid, I did make Lance and then give him a deck that I found fun. With that in mind I might re-arrange my characters a bit, not entirely sure what I want to change it to but I know I want to change it.

Yu-Gi-Oh!: Harmonia United

Okie Dokie, wasn't quite sure how the rank thing worked but figured I'd give you my general idea for how it went down and have you correct it from there.

Yu-Gi-Oh!: Harmonia United

Ah but you can prove that that hider doesn't exist independently of the other hider?

like so

prnt.sc/iu6lui

Yu-Gi-Oh!: Harmonia United

Youuuuuuuuuuuuuuu can't prove that. Unless you took a screenshot. Which I'm hoping you didn't.

Yu-Gi-Oh!: Harmonia United

A Wild Duelist Appeared!

Name
Lance Ristof

Age
18

Appearance
Lance is a lanky fellow, standing at 6 feet two inches, not quite thin but certainly not muscled. His silver hair sprawls out over his shoulders and seems to be only lazily kept in check. His pale blue eyes seem reminiscent of a clear sky and can be seen filled with good cheer. As a member of Light Dorm and a natural performer he tends to look rather flashy, which accessories similar to that of his monsters.

Personality
Lance is a great person to be around. He's always fun to talk to, never takes anything too seriously, and speaks his mind. Always ready with a joke or a bit of advice. One might say he's a bit eccentric as he tends to over-bling himself. He lives for the thrill of a duel, watched or played, and enjoys announcing them, either out loud or to himself. He's nearly impossible to anger but he can be a bit annoying if you aren't ready for him. He can of course, also be a bit of a flirt, though he's quick to back off if reprimanded.

Dorm
Light

History
Lance grew up on watching videos of dueling so it was only natural that he should have an interest in it. But more than that, he grew enamored with the dramatic and suspenseful style of duels he saw. Lance bought some decks and played around to find what fit him best. After a bit of trial and error he found a deck that suited his style quite nicely in it's ability to turn the boards on its head. Naturally anytime he dueled to took over the job of new-caster and announced the events of the duel as they happened to make them more exciting. One student found this trait rather annoying and attempted to defeat Lance in a duel to get him to stop. The student in question only becoming more angry when Lance was able to seemingly fend him off with ease. Even more so when Lance wouldn't respond to his angry insults and jibes, save for with more commentray. In general Lance found dueling, both watching and playing, to be the greatest thing ever. He took to watching a student named Akane who seemed to try quite hard but never seemed to have much luck. Lance tutored her a bit and pointed out some strategies she could use to preform better. He also avoided dueling her directly, pointing out that it would be better to test his strategies on someone other than himself. The two began to hang out together, even while not talking about Duel Monsters. At some point he found out that Akane was planning on attending Haromnia academy and decided to go himself.

The exam wasn't too troublesome but Lance didn't try very hard either, nestling himself comfortably in 5th place, where he remained until the end of the 2nd year. Gaku, having known him since elementary continued his tradition of dueling constantly, but never officially, during which time Gaku slowly pulled his rating up until he made it to 3rd. Akane didn't really know why Lance didn't bother trying to get rated when he could clearly make it into the top 5 but dismissed it as one of his eccentricities. At the end of the 2nd year Lance made his move and dramatically ascended to 1st place from practically unknown near the end of the year, climbing past Gaku and Akane, both of which were upset in their own way. He planned on being 1st for his entire 3rd year, as it made for a rather entertaining story. Some might say spending the entirety of his time at the school plotting for this was excessive, but those people didn't properly appreciate a dramatic tale. The underdog who managed to climb his way to the top in his last year from obscurity and hold it against all comers. Yes, this was to be his story!

Battle Dance: Dramatic Duel!

Examples

Monsters
-Lunalight Archetype Monsters

Spells
Fusion Support
-Polymerization
-Fusion Recycling Plant
-Battle Fusion
-De-fusion
-Flash Fusion
-Fusion Recovery
Dark Eruption
Lunalight Perfume
Wild Nature's Release

Traps
Lunalight Reincarnation Dance
Escape From the Dark Dimension
Waboku

Extra Deck
Lunalight Fusions

The 4 NPC's

Remaining top 5

Akane Revol

A duelist that puts a lot of thought into what she does and greatly admires those who have skill at the game. Inversely however, she can be scornful of those who lack such skill and don't show sufficient talent, desire to improve, or sheer lack of thought. She's very interested in the game from a mechanical point of view but also enjoys the act of dueling itself. She finds Lance to be rather strange but his skill at the game keeps her around and, well he is a fun guy. Aside from his annoying flirting, that he never seems to do with her.


Appearance: Akane is fairly average height, standing at 5 feet and 5 inches tall. Her brown hair is separated into bangs at the front and it hangs down loosely behind her to the small of her back. She is nearsighted, and wears her red-rimmed glasses most of the time. She tends to wear a sweater as she gets cold easily. When put into a corner she responds with quiet, but fierce resolve.

Deck: Crystron

Gaku Kubo

A hot-blooded duelist who believes that the battle phase is the most important phase and plays accordingly. He doesn't think his actions through most of the time but usually comes out on top regardless. If he losses expect an immediate rematch offer. Gaku has challenged Lance numerous times but fallen short every time. To not see them battle at least once a day is an irregularity. Despite this he's not a bad person and can be seen helping out other students by practice dueling and encouraging them. If he sees something wrong he'll be sure to try to fix it himself.

Appearance: Gaku is a 5 foot tall bundle of energy, rather well muscled, such that he clearly does some sort of exercise regularly. He can always been see moving, even if it's something as small as tapping his foot up and down impatiently in class. His short spiky brown hair makes one think of an energetic hedgehog and his brown eyes match accordingly. There's a small scar on his right cheek from who knows what and tends to wear short, non-restrictive and simple clothing; despite the luxuries available to him in light dorm.

Deck: Amazon

Tina Lori

A cheery girl that seems like a bit of airhead at times. She has a bubbly personality and loves to talk, even if no one is listening. She doesn't dwell too much on the game, taking it very lightly, not concerning herself too much with wins and losses. Despite this, she's quite good at the game, enough to place her comfortably in 5th place. Tina is rather kind and makes sure to congratulate her opponent after a duel, regardless of outcome.

Appearance:

Tina is a bit on the short side at 5 feet and 1 inches and light for her size. She tends to wear frilly or extravagant clothing, taking full advantage of her light dorm privileges and bending the rules of the dress code as much as possible.

Deck: Red Dragon

Hiroji Ono

A light dorm student with a flair for dressing as royally as possible. Don't be fooled by his dashing good lucks however, as those are about the only good thing about him. he can be quite cruel to anyone not from light dorm, or who he feels doesn't belong there with harsh backhanded compliments and outright insults. In a duel he constantly belittles his opponent. He is only 5th because he enjoys crushing anyone who wants to climb the ladder.

Appearance:
Hiroji stands quite tall at 6 feet and is a bit on the thin side, though that often isn't noticed amidst is clothing. His pale yellow hair is slicked back and doesn't make it past his shoulders. He has a charming demeanor, until you get to know him that is. Expensive outfits and jewelry are found on him at all times, as well as a smile that edges on creepy.

Deck: Monarch

Capes of Denver: A Worm RP

Sofia Stien - Train yard

Sofia tried her best to pay attention to what was going on as evil Chatterhead kept talking. They were... linked? Sofia spent a moment pondering this as Thunderbird and Heartless gave their responses. She didn't quite know what to do. Of course she didn't get to spend much time thinking it over because there was a sudden pressure in her chest and Sofia dropped the ground with a pitiful whimper, hands reaching to her stomach. Why? Headhunter was a 34 year old man trained in killing people and was very fit. Sofia on the other hand, was a 15 year old girl who ate like a bird and hadn't so much as participated in sports. It was very clear that a kick from the larger party would involve the smaller party losing their ability to function properly for a good minute and that's just about what Sofia did. She was practically keeled over on the ground alternating between gasping and coughing for breath. Her eyes, and thus herself, were closed off to the world even as tears leaked out of them; far too preoccupied at the moment to listen to, much less carry out Headhunter's orders.

Pokémon: Start

Dawkin Trustram

_{@PlatinumSkink@Joshua Tamashii}

They kept moving, avoiding the various hazards of the route. It become clear to Dawkin how one could profit off running a transportation service this route, it was not only long, but also full of hazards. Still, everything seemed to be going all right. That was, until a Hippowdon (not native to the region, trainer controlled?) erupted and basically ate the back end of the truck, tipping it over. Even more surprising was the torrent of ancient pokemon that flooded out of it. The driver and Rapidash owner nearby quickly tried to contain them, but the Hippowdown cause more chaos by whipping up a sandstorm that blinded and hindered everyone by the ancient Pokemon who happily kept running. Directly towards Amelia and himself. Dawkin shielded his eyes quickly and considered what was best to do. There wasn't exactly much time for discussion. From what he saw, it could be assumed the Hippowdon, trainer owned or not, was disrupting what was likely an illegal operation of some sort. As much as Dawkin might like to take the chance to capture one of these Pokemon, there was a nagging voice in the back of his head suspiciously similar to Proffesor Kalmia that said doing so would be unethical. At this point it would probably be best if the ancient pokemon simply dispersed and he didn't get in their way, so he began running out of their path, "Hey Amelia, let's retreat to a better vantage spot for now!"

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Inventory

Items:
x1 Potion
x4 Pokeball
x2 Super-Potions
x1 Escape rope
x2 Repels
x1 Awakening
x1 Paralyze Heal
x1 Antidote
x1 Moon Stone

Pokédollars: 5545p.

Pokémon

Aron

100%

Atlas
Gender: Male
Type: Steel/Rock

Species: Aron
Level: 11
Personality: A stubborn and sometimes disagreeable little fellow, he likes eating. A lot. He's smarter than he looks and can be quite devious in order to get what he wants.
Quirks/Talents/Aspirations/Other: Fill in as we go. Probably
Moves: Tackle, Harden, Mudslap, Headbutt, Metal Claw
Ability: Sturdy. Allows the pokemon to survive an attack that would otherwise knock it out.
Held Item:

Wooper

100%

Gender: Female
Type: Water/Ground
Personality:
Quirks/Talents/Aspirations/Other:
Level: 9
Moves: Water Gun, Tail Whip, Mud Sport, Mud Shot
Ability: Water Absorb, will regain health upon being hit with a water-type move.
Held Item: None.

Pichu

100%

Gender: Male
Type: Electric
Personality: (Up to player.)
Quirks/Talents/Aspirations/Other: (Up to player.)
Level: 9
Moves: Thundershock, Charm, Tail Whip
Ability: Static, may paralyze other Pokémon on contact.
Held Item: Dragon Scale.

Green Lantern Corps iCheck

I'm gonna try and get an IC post up today to kick things off but my son and I are both sick and out of school/work today and tomorrow both.

>5 days later

I'm trying to finish what I've got for an IC post but my son and I have both been pretty sick the last week and work's been kicking my ass

@Omega Man

Not working hard and sick enough to not make another rp while you're stalling on one you've already made and committed to aye?

Capes of Denver: A Worm RP

Alrighty thank you for the information, be happy to pick you up at a later date if you feel so inclined.