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Life can be...just wow. Lessons learned from my hiatus: it's ok to be vulnerable with those you care about, the people who love you will always remain in your life and be true to what you want.
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6 yrs ago
Aaaaand work got busy again. Breaking my rule of posting on Friday, but that'll be when I have time again.
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Tied up at work! Be back tomorrow.
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In the words of a famous Scottish king; "T'was a rough night". Taking off early for the weekend. Posts back on Monday!
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"She'll make soap out of you. That's what she does. Makes soap out of people."
-Little kid, Big Fish

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I can see why! Man alive that's powerful. As someone who lost his father, I can somewhat empathize with Aria's plight.

Aaaand I love the Tuk'ata. They need to be around for a long time xD

Happy you made them so sentient! It gives us a fresh perspective from time to time to look through.
Done! Tried to give Ari some time to process Roan/Bracknell before Saresh came. I can put her in next post :)
DON'T PEEK! NOT FINISHED! XD

Also, do you want me to get Saresh on world?
The horrific, gruesome display that Aria put on through the vengeful Tuk'ata would have normally been a bit excessive for the young Knight's tastes, but after everything that Bracknell had done to them, after he had robbed the galaxy of hope and tried to stamp it under his heel, the punishment seemed fitting. Her steely gaze met his and a moment of understanding passed between them, wordless and undefined. Within seconds, Bracknell was cut down by the duo, his already mutilated body splitting further into viscera and gore. He stood there next to her, attempting to absorb the gravity of what they had just accomplished. They didn't speak for a while, nor did they hear Abbeth's hurried footsteps towards them. It was only until he called out that Yerbol tilted his head upward:
"We need to head back! Just got a message from planetside." The Kel-Dor's face was obscured by their trademark breathing apparatus, but the smile in his next comment was visible all the same:
"They've surrendered. All of them! Neta said something about Saresh, but didn't catch very much of it...still! Surrendered!" Wiping sweat from his brow, he examined the remains of Bracknell for a brief second.
"He deserved no less." The stillness of the ship prompted Yerbol's eyes to widen.
"Cheriss! Where is she?!"
"Back at the shuttle." Abbeth chuckled.
"She looks almost as bad as Bracknell, but she's alive and just as...Cheriss as ever. She moaned something about you two owing her a great deal before passing out on the seats." A small half-smile formed on Yerbol's face.
"Sounds like she'll be fine." He sheathed his saber as he walked to the still corpse of Roan, kneeling before the father of his best friend and whispering:
"I promise you I'll keep her safe. No matter the price I have to pay."

______

"YES! YES YES YES YES!!!!" Shirt in tatters, blaster shot to pieces, blood weeping from a gaping hole in her shoulder and other assorted wounds didn't stop Neta from jumping enthusiastically in central command, those around her celebrating with cheers and roars of approval as the galaxy map, which once heralded their doom, began to display a slow retreat from the fleet, shuttles rocketing up through the now clear atmosphere that Jungze and the youngsters allowed, the group of Force users nearly collapsed in the same room they occupied for the battle from sheer exhaustion. It had happened so quickly that Neta found it hard to believe, but after Voldon secured the front of the base by defeating Soto, Alliance forces beat a hasty retreat back towards the transports they came in on. She had been at the rear of the base, helping the scant forces and one remaining turret fend off the endless invasion of troopers when the firing just...stopped. As fast as they had appeared to close in on the base, they disappeared back into the forest, the reeking scent of engine fuel seeping even more into the atmosphere as the Alliance beat a hasty retreat. She had sprinted back into the command center when a communications aide put Saresh's strained and somewhat mortified face on the holocom unit in the center of the room where the galaxy map once stood.
"Chancellor! Nice of you to finally get in touch with us."
"We need to talk."
"Wish you could've mentioned that earlier." Saresh glared at the pilot, answering:
"We were misled. I was misled. This latest campaign by Bracknell only confirms what I've suspected."
"Oh, what? That Bracknell was using you people to-"
"Like I said, we need to talk. I've ordered Alliance forces back to Coruscant and I'll be on the first shuttle out there along with a delegation...well, some of the delegation. You have the others." Neta couldn't help but smirk.
"We'll see you soon, Chancellor. By the way...don't mind the mess. Cleaning up after a needless battle can take time."

Their shuttle landed in the hangar, although the scorched walls, dead bodies and fractured weapons were all new touches to the decor.
"I'll get Cheriss to the med bay. I'm sure Neta and Elara are going to want to see you both." Once both were off the ship, Yerbol leaned forward in his seat, eyes boring into the ship's interior. What was there to say? Congratulations, we stopped the galaxy from falling apart? I'm so sorry about your father? Man, you sure know how to rip someone apart with Tuk'ata! Remind me not to get on your bad side!

What came out felt like the right thing to say:
"He loved you, Ari. I know he did." He took one of her hands into his, squeezing it gently.
"And I will-" He cut himself off, fully aware that what was ABOUT to roll off his tongue was something that he was in no position to say at the moment nor would it be the right time even if he WERE prepared to. Instead, he added:
"I'll do all I can to help you through this." He did crack a smile as he withdrew his hand and placed the same arm around her shoulders, rocking her gently as he added:
"I think I proved that I'm pretty good at helping you over the past six months, right?"

_____

The conflict might have been over, but the clean up was just beginning. Bodies were buried, tears were shed in copious amounts, walls rebuilt as much as they could be, weapon parts smelted and reformed into tools and preparations made for the incoming Chancellor of the Galactic Alliance, which made the diplomats on base very excited. Being able, as some of them put it, to "negotiate from a position of strength like this is unparalleled!" Their negotiations would begin upon Saresh's arrival, which was to be in three days time. During that seventy two hour stretch, most of those on base slept little, ate as much as possible to gain strength and worked tirelessly to mend whatever they could. He tried to check in with Aria as much as he could, but he was tugged in many different directions by those in assistance, so any time they would have had together was swallowed up by others. Finally, though, most of the base had been cobbled back together and with Saresh inbound in an hour, the chair tucked up against the lower right corner of the base became a very nice place to rest. Plopping down in his work attire of shorts and a sleeveless shirt stained with sweat, he placed his head against the wall, shutting his eyes for a quick second...

He heard sniffing. Then a nudge at his hand.
"Whaaaaat?" He groaned, looking down to find one of the Tuk'ata blankly staring at him.
"Just...stay out of trouble and let me rest, ok?"
Oh no, that was fantastic AND fitting. Very symbolic for Bracknell, who's consumed by his own lust for power(eh? eh? Sorry, the English teacher in me came out for a second xD)

Yerbol won't have a problem with what she just did, as I'll point out in the next post. The others might, but who cares what they say xD

I can't WAIT to have those Tuk'ata around as guard dogs for the two of them. I think hilarity is going to ensue on several occasions!

Will post later today!
Ha, no worries, I just triple posted in our IC xD

Wow, I can't believe this is it...Bracknell's going to die...so surreal
Yerbol knew something went horribly wrong when the Tuk'ata came back from them, that sinking feeling in his stomach growing exponentially when he saw Roan's body collapse to the ground, Bracknell sneering triumphantly over his latest victim. Before the Knight could withdraw his saber to take vengeance for his best friend's fallen father, something tugged at his mind, hard. Again it tugged, even more forceful, his body filling with energy. It shot through his veins, coursing through every muscle fiber, every ligament. His senses were overwhelmed with the breathing patterns of those in the room, the horror of Aria's discovery, the pain and fear that the Tuk'ata emanated, his own anxiety at facing Bracknell...all of it came so quickly that he took a few steps back, his eyes closing momentarily. A voice echoed in his mind, exhorting him:

Fight

Renso? Here?

Fight

His eyes opened, strength gathering in his lower limbs as he shot forward, saber activating mid-dash. Bracknell attempted to throw a barrier between he and the broad-shouldered knight, but acted an instance too soon, forcing the Sith Lord to take a hard blow in the chest with Yerbol's shoulder. As Bracknell reeled backwards, Yerbol threw his saber out in front of him in an arc, the weapon clipping Bracknell's dodging form in the left leg before returning to the Knight's hand. Gripping the weapon tightly in both hands, Yerbol thundered:
"YOU WILL PAY FOR ALL THAT YOU'VE DONE!" The corridor walls trembled at the roar of judgment he pronounced, shifting his weight onto his front leg in a defensive posture and motioning for Aria to join him, knowing full well through this new found energy that she had felt the voice, got the same infusion of power from Renso(he assumed) that he did. Their bond would make them an unstoppable force, one that Bracknell would regret ever tampering with. When Aria sidled next to him, nothing needed to be said; rather, Yerbol knew all too well that she would compliment his first move, which would be to throw up a barrier around the front of his body before he leaped forward, slashing downward. They had executed this combination before, he leaping upward while she flanked from either side. Normally it would've taken out an enemy in a single, graceful motion, but Bracknell managed to pierce through the barrier with a powerful gust of energy, staggering Yerbol backwards in time for Bracknell to counter whatever Aria managed to throw his way. Moving back towards Bracknell, Yerbol slashed at the Lord's legs, which was countered with a block, then another when the Knight tried to go for his mid-section. Another gust of energy was blocked somewhat by Yerbol, but he was still blown back a couple of feet. Undeterred, he went at the Lord once more.

Bracknell wouldn't leave here alive. No matter what the cost.

____

She was getting weaker by the second.

They had been fighting for what felt like years, neither gaining the upperhand. Forces on both sides managed to exchange some light fire, but the battle that raged between Voldon and Jean was so chaotic, so fraught with energy that there were moments where neither contingent could fire a shot without risking the death of a critical member of Bracknell's order. Reinforcements from the Alliance were getting routed around the base by stealthily placed turrets and mines, but their numbers weren't reduced by too large of a margin, many of their forces trudging their way to the base; however, their aim was getting sloppier, their strategies muddling. It was as if they were losing the will to fight.

Voldon, unaware of this fortunate development, managed to block yet another overhead strike before he pushed her off with a kick to the gut followed by a ram to her chest with his shoulder. This finally knocked her to the ground, where Voldon would stand over her, saber at her throat, breath coming in ragged gasps.
"Just finish it." Soto spat, blood and spittle landing on his leg. Voldon raised the hilt of his saber to comply, but then stopped, looking back at where Kira had been just a few moments before.
"Unlike you, I have standards to uphold." Voldon delivered a solid haymaker, knocking the woman unconscious. He spied Alliance troops hesitantly moving forward, some choosing to stay in their positions of cover.
"SURRENDER, ALL OF YOU! NO MORE DEATH NEEDS TO OCCUR THIS DAY!"

Yerbol knew something went horribly wrong when the Tuk'ata came back from them, that sinking feeling in his stomach growing exponentially when he saw Roan's body collapse to the ground, Bracknell sneering triumphantly over his latest victim. Before the Knight could withdraw his saber to take vengeance for his best friend's fallen father, something tugged at his mind, hard. Again it tugged, even more forceful, his body filling with energy. It shot through his veins, coursing through every muscle fiber, every ligament. His senses were overwhelmed with the breathing patterns of those in the room, the horror of Aria's discovery, the pain and fear that the Tuk'ata emanated, his own anxiety at facing Bracknell...all of it came so quickly that he took a few steps back, his eyes closing momentarily. A voice echoed in his mind, exhorting him:

Fight

Renso? Here?

Fight

His eyes opened, strength gathering in his lower limbs as he shot forward, saber activating mid-dash. Bracknell attempted to throw a barrier between he and the broad-shouldered knight, but acted an instance too soon, forcing the Sith Lord to take a hard blow in the chest with Yerbol's shoulder. As Bracknell reeled backwards, Yerbol threw his saber out in front of him in an arc, the weapon clipping Bracknell's dodging form in the left leg before returning to the Knight's hand. Gripping the weapon tightly in both hands, Yerbol thundered:
"YOU WILL PAY FOR ALL THAT YOU'VE DONE!" The corridor walls trembled at the roar of judgment he pronounced, shifting his weight onto his front leg in a defensive posture and motioning for Aria to join him, knowing full well through this new found energy that she had felt the voice, got the same infusion of power from Renso(he assumed) that he did. Their bond would make them an unstoppable force, one that Bracknell would regret ever tampering with. When Aria sidled next to him, nothing needed to be said; rather, Yerbol knew all too well that she would compliment his first move, which would be to throw up a barrier around the front of his body before he leaped forward, slashing downward. They had executed this combination before, he leaping upward while she flanked from either side. Normally it would've taken out an enemy in a single, graceful motion, but Bracknell managed to pierce through the barrier with a powerful gust of energy, staggering Yerbol backwards in time for Bracknell to counter whatever Aria managed to throw his way. Moving back towards Bracknell, Yerbol slashed at the Lord's legs, which was countered with a block, then another when the Knight tried to go for his mid-section. Another gust of energy was blocked somewhat by Yerbol, but he was still blown back a couple of feet. Undeterred, he went at the Lord once more.

Bracknell wouldn't leave here alive. No matter what the cost.

____

She was getting weaker by the second.

They had been fighting for what felt like years, neither gaining the upperhand. Forces on both sides managed to exchange some light fire, but the battle that raged between Voldon and Jean was so chaotic, so fraught with energy that there were moments where neither contingent could fire a shot without risking the death of a critical member of Bracknell's order. Reinforcements from the Alliance were getting routed around the base by stealthily placed turrets and mines, but their numbers weren't reduced by too large of a margin, many of their forces trudging their way to the base; however, their aim was getting sloppier, their strategies muddling. It was as if they were losing the will to fight.

Voldon, unaware of this fortunate development, managed to block yet another overhead strike before he pushed her off with a kick to the gut followed by a ram to her chest with his shoulder. This finally knocked her to the ground, where Voldon would stand over her, saber at her throat, breath coming in ragged gasps.
"Just finish it." Soto spat, blood and spittle landing on his leg. Voldon raised the hilt of his saber to comply, but then stopped, looking back at where Kira had been just a few moments before.
"Unlike you, I have standards to uphold." Voldon delivered a solid haymaker, knocking the woman unconscious. He spied Alliance troops hesitantly moving forward, some choosing to stay in their positions of cover.
"SURRENDER, ALL OF YOU! NO MORE DEATH NEEDS TO OCCUR THIS DAY!"

Yerbol knew something went horribly wrong when the Tuk'ata came back from them, that sinking feeling in his stomach growing exponentially when he saw Roan's body collapse to the ground, Bracknell sneering triumphantly over his latest victim. Before the Knight could withdraw his saber to take vengeance for his best friend's fallen father, something tugged at his mind, hard. Again it tugged, even more forceful, his body filling with energy. It shot through his veins, coursing through every muscle fiber, every ligament. His senses were overwhelmed with the breathing patterns of those in the room, the horror of Aria's discovery, the pain and fear that the Tuk'ata emanated, his own anxiety at facing Bracknell...all of it came so quickly that he took a few steps back, his eyes closing momentarily. A voice echoed in his mind, exhorting him:

Fight

Renso? Here?

Fight

His eyes opened, strength gathering in his lower limbs as he shot forward, saber activating mid-dash. Bracknell attempted to throw a barrier between he and the broad-shouldered knight, but acted an instance too soon, forcing the Sith Lord to take a hard blow in the chest with Yerbol's shoulder. As Bracknell reeled backwards, Yerbol threw his saber out in front of him in an arc, the weapon clipping Bracknell's dodging form in the left leg before returning to the Knight's hand. Gripping the weapon tightly in both hands, Yerbol thundered:
"YOU WILL PAY FOR ALL THAT YOU'VE DONE!" The corridor walls trembled at the roar of judgment he pronounced, shifting his weight onto his front leg in a defensive posture and motioning for Aria to join him, knowing full well through this new found energy that she had felt the voice, got the same infusion of power from Renso(he assumed) that he did. Their bond would make them an unstoppable force, one that Bracknell would regret ever tampering with. When Aria sidled next to him, nothing needed to be said; rather, Yerbol knew all too well that she would compliment his first move, which would be to throw up a barrier around the front of his body before he leaped forward, slashing downward. They had executed this combination before, he leaping upward while she flanked from either side. Normally it would've taken out an enemy in a single, graceful motion, but Bracknell managed to pierce through the barrier with a powerful gust of energy, staggering Yerbol backwards in time for Bracknell to counter whatever Aria managed to throw his way. Moving back towards Bracknell, Yerbol slashed at the Lord's legs, which was countered with a block, then another when the Knight tried to go for his mid-section. Another gust of energy was blocked somewhat by Yerbol, but he was still blown back a couple of feet. Undeterred, he went at the Lord once more.

Bracknell wouldn't leave here alive. No matter what the cost.

____

She was getting weaker by the second.

They had been fighting for what felt like years, neither gaining the upperhand. Forces on both sides managed to exchange some light fire, but the battle that raged between Voldon and Jean was so chaotic, so fraught with energy that there were moments where neither contingent could fire a shot without risking the death of a critical member of Bracknell's order. Reinforcements from the Alliance were getting routed around the base by stealthily placed turrets and mines, but their numbers weren't reduced by too large of a margin, many of their forces trudging their way to the base; however, their aim was getting sloppier, their strategies muddling. It was as if they were losing the will to fight.

Voldon, unaware of this fortunate development, managed to block yet another overhead strike before he pushed her off with a kick to the gut followed by a ram to her chest with his shoulder. This finally knocked her to the ground, where Voldon would stand over her, saber at her throat, breath coming in ragged gasps.
"Just finish it." Soto spat, blood and spittle landing on his leg. Voldon raised the hilt of his saber to comply, but then stopped, looking back at where Kira had been just a few moments before.
"Unlike you, I have standards to uphold." Voldon delivered a solid haymaker, knocking the woman unconscious. He spied Alliance troops hesitantly moving forward, some choosing to stay in their positions of cover.
"SURRENDER, ALL OF YOU! NO MORE DEATH NEEDS TO OCCUR THIS DAY!"

Aw nuts...I really wanted Roan to make it. Really did. I do love how in his dying moments, he's going out with a smirk. I request that you have him come back somehow...someway! Force projection? Force ghost? I don't know, something xD

I also want the Tuk'ata back as you said. They're so darn cute in an ugly sort of way

So quick question: should I have Yerbol start fighting Bracknell and then you can finish him with Aria? Also, I feel like at this point, the Master would infuse them with strength? I can write that in if it fits
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