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Life can be...just wow. Lessons learned from my hiatus: it's ok to be vulnerable with those you care about, the people who love you will always remain in your life and be true to what you want.
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6 yrs ago
Aaaaand work got busy again. Breaking my rule of posting on Friday, but that'll be when I have time again.
6 yrs ago
Tied up at work! Be back tomorrow.
6 yrs ago
In the words of a famous Scottish king; "T'was a rough night". Taking off early for the weekend. Posts back on Monday!
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"The more we know, the better prepared we'll be for tackling whatever faces us on that moon." He attempted to calm their furry companions by scratching behind one of their respective ears, but in an abnormal behavior for them, they slunk away, eyes locked on the flickering map.
"Vano, think you could point us in the direction of information about Quensu itself? I like your idea of there being something important of the planet that links to our vision. It was their homeworld, after all; surely they left records behind?"

Vano left them in one of the many small study rooms that had been built in as private retreats to do the kind of intensive research they were forced to do, sifting through holocrons, scrolls, cracked datapads and physical books for any mention of a moon laced with Force sensitivity. The duo bounced potential ideas extracted from their individual findings every so often, neither of them finding anything truly relevant until the newly appointed Champion came across a datapad, the owner's signature in the bottom left corner:

"Yusef Malagna, Chronicler of the Whispers." An eyebrow quirked upward before looking to Aria.
"You mentioned finding something else about 'Whispers' before, right?" He flipped through some of the initial notes, all of which extensively detailed the credibility of the account as well as warned readers about attempting to find the moon without first discussing their intent with a Master. Such admonitions were common in the work they had come across, which might have meant many of those reading would want to prove themselves worthy to their Masters or possibly desire to test themselves in order to progress their abilities in the Force(both schools of thought were brought up in a speech that Jungze had found when they brought their initial haul of findings, the speech given by a Master Kinwu, who warned the younger among them to stop "needlessly throwing themselves into danger for the sake of glory!") After the warnings, Yerbol found an entry with a few numbers in the upper right hand corner that probably was a date...or some kind of marker; more importantly, Yusef began to discuss the "Whispers" in extensive detail. He read aloud:

"There are many planets within our sector of the galaxy that retain Force energy, which was more than likely a purposeful choice made by those who came before us. While the Force energies on these planets enhance our abilities and techniques, there are strange side effects, some of which include the 'Whispers' or imprinted life force signatures of those who died on the planet. From what we have gathered, the largest concentration of these Whispers are on the moon Nuncata, where entire chunks of forest and swamp are filled with the fragmented memories and echoes of those long gone. We have recently encountered some on Quensu in a grove not too far off from the Academy. I will update this log after our encounter."

Flipping to the next page, he continued:

"We were contacted by a team of scouts from Nuncata that stumbled onto a glacial formation with dense concentration of Whispers, most of which, according to the scouts, were uttering what sounded like phrases or chants. Master Renso quickly told them to hold off on investigating further and return. Soon after we lost contact. Master Renso seems even more agitated than normal about a situation like this, which leads me to believe there's something on that moon he knows about that we don't."

Another page:

"Reports from the grove indicate similar 'chanting' that was heard on Nuncata. No one is allowed into the grove, but I saw Master Renso heading down that way. I will se-" Grimacing, he tried to flip through more data, but nothing showed up.
"Well, that should give us...something." Looking over to his companion, he continued:
"I have a feeling that grove might be a good place to start. Maybe these 'Whispers' on Nuncata somehow manifested themselves on a smaller scale? Or something?" He chuckled.
"Nothing like reading old diaries to try and meet a dead Master, right? Ah..." Shaking his head, he rose from his chair and planted a kiss on her head gently.
"Someday we're going to spend our days doing normal couple things. Like debating the color of washing machines. Or when to bathe the dogs."

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Before leaving Zinuthra, Vano gave them planetary surveys that were dug up from one of the more recent expeditions, pointing out some potential sites where a 'grove' could thrive. After goodbyes and promises to return shortly, they hovered over the face of Quensu, Yerbol remarking as they descended:
"The atmosphere has stabilized since we've been here. Different season?" That question was answered quickly when upon breaking clouds beneath the freighter they were greeted with torrential rain, lightning occasionally crackling through the sky.
"Right, forget I said anything." With some navigating and piloting assistance from Aria, the duo managed to set the freighter down on a sweeping plain that gently rolled downward towards a thicket of trees that were distinctly marked on the map by Vano with a large question mark. As the ship jostled into it's resting position, a sickening taste formed in his mouth, stomach churning.
"You ah...you feel that too?" The dogs skittered to the cockpit, one of them growling:
"Ouuttssiiddeee. Baaadd."

That's not good.

I got the score required for entrance, so yay! Thanks for the well wishes :)

Gotcha! I'll throw something together in the next hour or so :)
WHAT a day yesterday! Sorry for the lack of posting, but I had to take an exam for graduate school entrance(again xD), so my brain was scrambled egg xD

So, after reading the post, it would make a lot of sense for them to go BACK to the Quensu to get more information, but are we going with the idea that all the information in the libraries was taken already? If so, then I can have Yerbol find a couple of things in the new library, but if not, then we can make a quick stop on Quensu. That would give me an opportunity to introduce some of our new Xiia friends that have already gotten off world 0_0
Sounds good! Don't know if I can reply today due to schedule, but I'll do what I can!
That'll work!

Oh man, sorry for that development! Hope he and others feel better quickly. I know a number of my students/co-workers are coming down with the flu, so I know it's not just there...which isn't comforting :/

Anyway, point is, feel better!
Alright, so I've GOT to think that with the sanctuary cities being built up, the Council would want to at least start establishing "ranks" and protocol.

I've been thinking about the hierarchy and I came up with this. Let me know what you think?

Disciple <--First rank
Apprentice <--Second rank (I always liked that term)
Knight <---Third rank (I'm struggling with this one, seeing as it feels too Jedi-ish)
Champion <---Fourth rank (Sort of like an in-between for foot soldier and Master)
Master <---Fifth rank

Obviously there are specializations and whatnot that we can come up with as we go. What do you think?

Also, the "plans" would be for Yerbol and Aria to be formally ordained Champions.

What do you think of all this? Suggestions? Additions? Subtractions?
The excitement of knowing that she was on the same page as he was kept him for a short while after his partner had fallen asleep, but eventually his eyes closed, his mind stopped racing with possibilities and he found himself in a deep slumber tha-

It was bleak, desolate. He had seen landscapes like it before, but he knew it was different.

Glaciers were melting. No, not melting, but there was heat. Circular red dots staring out from the mounds of ice that were slowly becoming a morbid shade of blue. Blackness enveloped the sky. Screams...so many screams...lurching forward, clawing for her, make sure she's safe.

But he knew no one was. No one would be.

Maniacal laughter. Bouncing off glaciers, ripping his spine in half, knees slamming to the tundra below.

You are the only ones that can. Come and find me, before it’s too late...they are coming.


He sat up violently, eyes wide, breath coming in short, frightened gasps, just like Korriban, except this...this was a herald. A warning, premonition, whatever one could call a vision that inspired terror and ominous language in one package. Yerbol nodded at her question, his anxiety stabilizing as he felt her touch on his forehead, the two of them beginning to wrap their heads around the sudden vision in the next hour. With so many questions and no immediate answers accessible, Yerbol felt the need to see Voldon and Kira. With Aria supporting the idea, he reached out to the Battlemaster at around six in the morning, whose grumpy facade gave way to worry when he saw the younger duo's panicked(his perception) expressions, exhorting them to meet in his private quarters. Bags packed and Tuk'ata on heightened alert due to their owner's dispositions, they entered the kitchen where both parents sat over their morning beverages.
"Well, this is unexpected." Vol said with an amused smile, rising with Tabitha, who asked:
"Where are you two headed?" Yerbol exchanged a quick glance with Aria, understanding passing between the two. They couldn't tell his parents. Needed to come up with something.
"Well..." Ah ha!
"We've been wanting to check on the Sanctuary cities for a while now. Not very intense labor at all, just simple reunions and check-ups."
"Mmmhmm." Tabitha looked to her husband with a twinkle in her eye before saying:
"It's ok to say that you're tired of us."
"No, no, it's not that!" Yerbol drew closer to his parents, a sad smile forming.
"I've missed you guys so much and it's been...it's been so wonderful to be able to spend time with you both again, but..." He shook his head, the smile growing.
"Duty calls, right?" Tabitha and Vol both nodded, drawing their son into a mutual embrace, the former kissing her son on the cheek.
"Be careful out there, honey." She gripped her son's hand tightly.
"And come see us again sooner than ten years, eh?" Vol quipped, both parents going to hug Aria and tell her similar words of encouragement, Vol proclaiming:
"I'm going to miss my exploration partner! We'll have to do some more of that when you come back." He gave her a wink after their hug, telling her quietly:
"Take care of my boy. Please."

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After some more goodbyes, they took a shuttle(many of these were now up and running thanks to generous monies and laborers provided by the Alliance) to the Sanctuary, all the while attempting to console the other poor souls on board that the Tuk'ata wouldn't rip their hearts out of their chests. Thankfully the trip was a short one and within half an hour, they were at the bustling construction site, passing by the temporary shelters and half finished structures before entering the only finished building at the very rear of the settlement. It was a two-story rectangular shaped barracks, complete with individual quarters for those Force users who needed them. There were already a handful of Force users on site, some of which the duo had met with previously and gotten to know on a superficial level. None were in the common area that greeted those who entered, Yerbol silently thankful for not having to interact with anyone, the duo taking a flight of stairs to the right which led to Voldon and Kira's quarters. Before he could raise a hand to knock, Voldon opened the door, his normally tanned skin two shades darker, eyes lively and alert. He motioned them in, shutting the door behind them.
"Sit." He commanded flatly, pointing at four overstuffed chairs, one of which was occupied by Kira.
"Stop being so grumpy, big guy. It's not THAT early." Kira said with a smirk, waving at the duo as they sat, brushing some loose strands of dark red locks away from her forehead. Voldon refused to comment, instead placing himself across from the younger couple.
"What troubles you?"

They shared the vision the best they could, although Yerbol found it difficult to express every single aspect of what they felt. Thankfully, Ari made up for his lack of terminology. After proposing their theory about Renso, Voldon quickly responded:
"I don't like sending you out there by yourselves. I would wait on another vision before going."
"But what if they don't go now? You of all people should know what it's like to get nasty visions from someone long gone." Voldon grimaced.
"True." He looked at the pair with wary eyes.
"You're sure this is the same presence that contacted you before, that said you bonded with him? We don't know if Bracknell conjured Renso as a red herring."
"Fairly sure. It's hard to verbalize, but we know Renso is out there somewhere. He's real. Very real." Silence pervaded the room for a few moments.
"The rest of the Council will hear of this from me. Check in with Aliel, Matt and Cheriss on Zinuthra. I'm sure they'll want to know what's going on...and I'm also certain they'll want to tell you about our plans themselves."
"Plans?"
"They were the ones to come up with it. They should be the ones to tell you. I'll holo-call in when you get there."
All looks great! Yeah, I would assume that they would...well, assume that Renso would be dead. I mean, the guy IS thousands of years old.

I WILL explain that, by the way! xD

I also need to explain Tabitha's Force sensitivities, although you kinda did that with the bloodline stuff. Maybe I'll do it later...sometime xD

Anyway, post incoming in the next couple of hours :)
So that didn't turn out like I expected. The post just kinda...wrote itself? If that makes sense? Totally don't mind if you have them fall asleep and have Renso reach out to them, but I just kinda felt like...well, three things:

1. They've never had stability before now and Yerbol wants to keep that up, hence his request for getting a place together
2. I wanted to do more with Renso...and he wanted more screen time, so he just kinda took over the middle part xD
3. And I also needed to give us a reason for Renso to get worked up, hence the intro to one of our main villains. I LOVE LOVE LOVE writing her due to how different of a style I have to adapt.

I also realized that this Act is going SO much darker than Act 1. Kinda like the original trilogy!
Yerbol smirked mischievously, eyes looking over her upper body and positioning before telling her:

"Well, if that's the case, then I dare say that we ought to test that theory out." He used his hands to prop himself up onto his elbows, naturally forcing Aria's grip on his wrists to loosen and finally release before he continued at a quieter decibel level:
"Sometime...sometime very soon, we can get ourselves a private room somewhere, away from parents, Tarisian settlers and ah..." He elevated himself a bit further up, to where their faces were within a few inches of each other.
"Have a little tussle. With all that room and me not holding back, I think we'd have a pretty good time." The smirk grew wider as he kissed her on the lips, sitting up fully before moving his lips down to her neck, then collarbone before whispering:
"But now's not the time, eh? I don't need my parents listening to that-" He plopped back down onto the bed before finishing:
"Or anything else we want to do, for that matter." Reaching for the floor, he grabbed his former fluffy weapon of choice and stuffed it back beneath his head.
"Don’t get me wrong, I love them to pieces and the past two and a half months have been awesome, but I do think it might be time for us to find our own place. Never actually HAD an apartment or a house to myself, you know? I bet you didn't either, seeing as the Academy probably didn't want their Acolytes to get too uppity." A broad smile, one of hopefulness and optimism rather than twinkling playfulness, framed his face.
"What do you think? I don't mean we get a place right this second...wait, am I pressuring you? Is that too fast?" A slight flush of red as he looked up at the ceiling.
“I mean, just think about it? At least?” He gulped.
“Sorry, I just…” He shifted uncomfortably on the bed, looking down at Aria with embarrassment in his aqua blue eyes.
“I’m so excited about us and where we’re at and where we’re going and…I just think it would be nice to have a place we can call our own. Well, us and the dogs. I think they’d appreciate having a safe space away from people other than us.” A contented sigh escaped his lips before he kissed her on the forehead, head fully crashing on the pillow, eyes closing.
“Just tell me you’ll think about it? We can talk more about it when we’re both not exhausted…unless you have thoughts now?” Yes he was tired but yes he would love to hear Aria talk about his idea. While they had discussed a lot of possibilities for their future, this was the first time he could remember trying to act on their litany of premises.
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They’ve had enough time.

Renso’s eyes snapped open, bile churning. Rising from his folded position, the gaunt Master walked out of the dimly illuminated chamber into the empty stone corridor that held several branching hallways into the tombs. It had been so long since he had explored the echoes of the past, let his fingers trace over the cool, sticky stones, allowing his mind to flood with the river of events that had cascaded around and through him. So much has happened. So many mistakes. He had to correct them.

A sudden pain coursed through his torso, forcing him to one knee, gasping for breath, sweat beading on his forehead. It wouldn’t be long before his connection would fade into oblivion. She had warned him about this. They had all warned him of the consequences and they were all right. So very right. It bothered him how right they turned out to be. Maybe that amplified the pain. Knowledge. Knowledge is pain.
No. Knowledge is the essence of the Force.

No. Knowledge is power that balances the Force.

Yes. No?

The pain subsided and Renso finally was able to get to his feet, running both hands over the smooth, fraying skin of his skull. Yes, Knowledge Is the essence of the Force. He still knew. Yet it was fading. He needed them. They would be the only way he could ensure that the mistakes of his past and present were wiped out. They were atonement incarnate.

They’ve had enough time.

“Fulfill your potential, young ones.” He mumbled, looking towards the end of the hallway.

“Before we all are dust.” Another shock of agony filled his system, this one more precise, acute.

Xiis.
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A wicked cackle bounced off the walls as she stood over the feeble opponent, his eyes wide with fear. Her deathly blue pallor pulsed with vivaciously moving blood, energizing her body and mind like it never had before. Sleep had been good to her and the followers that eviscerated the weaklings in other chambers, screams of savory, sumptuous pain filling her bones with life. Her purple tongue coursed over her lips as she hoisted the armored soldier effortlessly into the air, black pools of madness searing into his consciousness.

“I want you to remember this feeling, human.” She hissed seductively, one hand tracing over a bloodied chestpiece.

“Remember the fear. The horror. And embrace it.”
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