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Character in next post, sorry xD

Edit: So in the embassy, I was assuming they could find some stuff that directed them to the ruins beneath Nar Shaddaa's infrastructure? From there, they could meet the psychotic leader of the Xiis, who flees and leaves cronies behind for them to deal with. After being dealt with, return to embassy to restore communication and attempt to trace the Xiis' movements.

sound ok?

Also, in terms of the overall plan of the Xiis, I assume it would be to destabilize government so that "only the strongest" could be intermingled with them to recreate their savage/brutal culture across known space. In order to destabilize, infrastructure would need to be crippled. I suppose it would be sort of a manhunt across populated worlds, right? Cause if Coruscant, Dromund Kaas and a few other Alliance key worlds were totally destabilized, prompting the population to fight over resources, the Xiis could take advantage of the chaos.

Ugh, that sounded like word vomit, sorry xD

With this only being his second time on Nar Shaddaa, he didn't like he was in the position to comment on how strange it was to feel the vacuum of emptiness that hit them squarely between the eyes when they landed, but it was still a surreal feeling nonetheless, that feeling reinforced when they descended to the lower promenade. The "glitzy" gleam of commercialism was intact through the recurring advertisements proclaiming that sales would be in effect until two days ago, scantily clad female holograms beckoning potential patrons to various shady looking establishments and a constantly running banner of headline news scrolling across a screen that wrapped around the balcony that overlooked the spectacle of death they were entrenched in. Overkill was a massive understatement. This was borderline psychotic.

He could feel Ari's concern tighten as they continued their patrol around the square, mirroring his own. Slicing through the stillness with his senses, he reached out, attempting to grasp any hint of what had occurred. There was some muttering behind a few of the locked shop doors, but after a few attempts at knocking and establishing themselves vocally as non-threats, it was gone.
"You would think they'd be happy to see us." Zora muttered, vibranium daggers gripped firmly in hand as she walked away from yet another stonewalled attempt at coaxing civilians to exit their secured(so they thought) location.
"Would you want to come out here?" Bex retorted, blaster rifle parallel to the ground as he examined an exit from the Promenade just north of where they stood.
"All dark down that way." He commented as he rejoined the group, which was now rallied at the southern edge of an inactive and massive fountain that dominated the center of the square.
"Right, so we're going to get nowhere down here." Elara bit her lower lip in thought, looking towards the northern edge of the upper promenade.
"And I have a feeling that if we keep going down without any intel, we'd be walking straight into a trap." She thought for another moment before pointing to where she had focused her attention.
"We ought to head to Alliance embassy located just over there. I'm sure we'd get a much warmer greeting."
"Wait, Chief, why didn't we head there first?" Elara motioned for them to slink upstairs as she answered Abbeth's question:
"And ignore getting a first look ourselves? I wanted us to confirm my worst suspicions before attempting to get inside the embassy."
"Attempting to?"
"Alliance embassies aren't just your normal run of the mill shops. If security protocols were activated, we'll probably be dealing with ballistic droids programmed to shoot on sight. Not to mention circumventing the lock down by finding a working terminal and...well, you get the point."

The group walked around the right hand side of the upper promenade, spotting two Alliance flags in tattered shreds flanking the entrance. Human and droid carcasses littered the entrance, but it was the pacing figures that brought Yerbol's saber to his hand. They were of the same mold the duo fought on Quensu: defined musculature, powerful frames, deathly blue skin color, jet black hair and a frenzied animosity that defined their every step.
"Well, they look like murderers." Zora twirled her daggers as she bent her knees, ready to spring into action.
"Give support to Yerbol and Aria as much as possible. Check your crosshairs for friendly fire and use cover." Elara ordered in hushed tones, which was a moot point considering that the two Xiis were now staring the squadron down with hungry grins.

Let's play decoy.

Another of their strategies to deal with powerful enemies was "decoying", which basically had Yerbol distract one or more enemies while the rest of the assigned squadron(usually including Aria) dealt with other forces. In this case, he would distract one of the Xiis while they fought the other.

Don't worry. I'll be fine. Just like an earthquake, right?

One of Renso's many pithy sayings echoed in his mind as they informed Elara of their strategy, the Xiis charging towards them not a fraction of a second later. Yerbol dashed towards them both, dual bladed saber slashing horizontally so that both Xiis dodged in opposite directions to not get slashed in half.
"One on the right!" The Champion gripped the saber hilt with both hands now, slashing vertically only to hit air, the Xiis rolling right and connecting with a blow to his sternum, Yerbol thankfully avoiding another blow that would have sent him flying over the safety railing to the lower promenade. He thrust a hand forward, blowing his fellow combatant back towards the entrance of the embassy, sprinting forward and slashing diagonally, managing to clip the alien on his left shoulder before he dodged and threw himself at Yerbol. The sudden action caught the Champion off guard, saber spilling from his hand as he hit the ground. Before he could get up, the Xiis had his foot on his chest, threatening to crush his ribcage in spite of Yerbol's strongest efforts to remove the appendage.
"YOUR HEART WILL BE MY TROPHY!" His glistening teeth bared in a grin for a moment, but was replaced by a contorted look of pain as Yerbol slammed his eyes shut, concentrating on the strands of Force energy that the creatures emanated, tearing them away from his enemies body.

Sever the connection with the Force. Rip it to pieces. Make your enemy realize that his very essence is being torn away from him.

The Xiis stumbled backwards just long enough for Yerbol to rise, saber flying to his hand and activating for him to stab the Xiis through the gut, flinging his body off the promenade, crunching on the bloodied floor beneath.
"And that was just one of them..."
Again, good point. There are street gangs, but they're all competing against each other...well, except for one. More on that in a bit xD

Response will be a bit later in the day, seeing as I'm drawing up some stuff over Hamlet now. Will get it soon :)
It's so creepy to think that a planet like Nar Shaddaa could be decimated that quickly, but you bring up a good point through your mercenary: EVENTUALLY this sort of thing would've happened. The Hutts couldn't control that sector of space forever.

#huttblood

Also, mind if I throw in a NPC I've been thinking about in my head? He seems like he'd fit well here :)
Heh, well, I have a feeling that a lot of our Jedi NPCs are going to start expressing their romantic inclinations now that they're not forbidden to, you know, have a heart xD

Hey, NO worries there. I'm feeling rather similar. I've talked so much about Frankenstein that I think I'm turning into the Creature xD
Wanted to kill hutts, but I suppose we'll just have to feature Ari, Yerbol and Havoc finding their remains.

Feel free to get to Nar Shaddaa :)
While change had been a recurring motif in their lives the past eight and a half months, it was still a jarring experience. An academy? A formal Council that blended together former Jedi and Sith that were not only getting along, but working together for the true betterment of the galaxy? Younglings being taught in the ways of the Force that encouraged harmonization rather than polarization? Yerbol had contributed as much as he could to their retelling of events in regard to Renso, but he let Aria and the rest of the Council do the talking while he soaked in the order of events. He hadn't been the only one quiet, Voldon not uttering a word until the room's collective curiosity was directed towards him. A sarcastic smirk broke across his dusk colored face.
"To be fair, we DID derive the word Jedi from High Sith, did we not?" Matt nodded.
"We did. According to the archives, historians claim that the Sith were the ones to name the Order as a label of condescension. The Jedi were a faceless, nameless band of rebels until that point." He continued to muse:
"That name must've arisen after those 'radical Sith' broke away from the original philosophies and began teaching the Sith Code we know today. Maybe there were Sith who took the opposite stance? If only the archives were still available to search."
"And even if they were, they stand as a monument to a past we'll need to forget." Voldon surveyed the room with his eyes as he continued:
"We need to move forward. I can't think of a better way to do that than to have a strong, powerful name for what will define who we are. Whether it be in High Sith, Basic, Twi'lek, I don't care. It needs to be emblematic, though, of a new beginning."
"Then may I suggest something?" A chair scooted next to Aria's, said chair occupied by an all too familiar blonde Miraluka.
"Always with an entrance, eh, Malu?"
"I missed you, too, my dear Voldon." She patted Aria on the back, looking to her with a knowing smile before glancing around the room.
"Oh come now, you can't be surprised that I'm here."
"The last transmission we received from you was three months ago! We were bloody worried!" Matt proclaimed, some of the others nodding in agreement.
"Yes, and what did I say in the transmission, Matthew? I said I would return as soon as I could with the help we needed. You'll want to meet the retinue I brought back...after they clear the med bay, of course."
"Med bay? What-"
"I thought we were trying to name ourselves, not socialize with an old codger like myself." She giggled slightly as she sat back.
"I promise I'll explain everything after this little meeting is over. But, I digress from my original point. In my travels I had a bit of time to do some reading on the language of the High Sith. Without Roan, I thought it would be necessary for me to at least have some working knowledge of the language in case I wanted to pick up where he left off. I came across two words that I found enticing that, when spliced together, form the basis of a powerful message." She cleared her throat.
"Qyaari. Qya meaning Lord and Ari meaning Force. So, in Basic, Lords of the Force." Voldon jutted his chin out in approval, nodding.
"That'll work for me." Matt stroked the small tuft of hair on his chin that was growing out(Cheriss made fun of him for it far too often...he liked it).
"Neutral, yet powerful. Depicts our new found appreciation for controlling the Force, not others." He looked to the others with an appreciative smile.
"I think we've got ourselves a legitimate name." There was a bit more discussion on the name, but in the end the Council of Elders agreed that from here on out, the galaxy would not know Jedi or Sith no longer, but the Qyaari, the Lords of the Force.
"Well isn't this all an exciting time?" Malu rose from her chair, but not before Voldon asked:
"Alright, spill, Malu: where have you been and who's in the med bay?"
"Well, I collected myself on Hoth along with a few other things before traveling to more populated planets in search of those of our Force using brethren who may have hidden themselves in 'plain sight'. Two were in the underbelly of Dromund Kaas, living in a cave(former Sith). Another was on Coruscant, a former Jedi Knight who was protecting several younglings that were thankfully not too beat up. Those three put together informed me that there was a kind of...well, for lack of a better term, underground network of Force users on several worlds that had formed out of necessity to survive. Most of this network was caught by Bracknell's lackeys, but some, like these fortunate souls, managed to stay off the figurative grid. They scavenged, foraged and knocked off minor Alliance supply caravans in order to survive. Resourceful ones, they are."
"Why hadn't they reached out to us?"
"They're afraid, darling. Afraid that Force users are going to be hunted again, that it would only be a matter of time. Thankfully the ones that came with me were more than willing to subscribe to our new philosophies, but others will need more convincing. For now, we can be thankful we have more experienced Force users onboard." She looked to Cheriss, asking:
"Cheriss, would you happen to remember the last name Lugansa? One of the cave dwellers told me that they served under a Lord Lugansa, but I can't quite place the name..." Before Cheriss could answer, the holo terminal recently installed in the Council chambers(now official) came to life, Saresh's face betraying concern.
"Chancellor! We weren't expecting a call at..." The chronometer next to her projection said that it was two in the morning on Coruscant.
"This late."
"An urgent matter has come up that I feel you should know about. As you may have heard, we had been in negotiations with some of the more powerful Hutts in the Outer Rim for full control of Nar Shaddaa. Those negotiations are now on hold because the entire planet has gone dark." Yerbol spoke for the first time in probably half an hour:
"Dark, Chancellor? As in, no communication with anyone?"
"Correct. Hutt Lords off world have alerted us that they sent their own task forces to investigate, but no reports came back...and neither did their squadrons."
"Why not send in a fleet?"
"A show of military force that strong might send the wrong impression to the Hutts, that we want to assert control. We need the Hutts on our side, which they will be if we send in Force users who can investigate."
"It just so happens that our newly appointed Champions are here with us." Voldon nodded to the duo.
"Think of this as your first official mission as Qyaari."
"As what?" Saresh furrowed her brow quizzically.
"We'll explain in a moment. For now, what would you like them to do?"
"Send them along with Havoc to Nar Shaddaa, collect intelligence and do whatever you need to in regard to restoring the planet."
"Right...so saving a planet." Yerbol nudged Ari playfully.
"We've had to take on worse, right?"
No, that's a perfect opportunity for me to get Malu back on world...cause it's about time she came back with some bloody help xD

So, to clarify:

Decide on a name, contact Saresh about the new academy, who approves and then turns right around to say "Get to Nar Shaddaa cause the planet basically just went dark" ?
Oh I know. It's awful. I laughed too

Qyaasik...unique. Difference. Good translation(How much more awesome can "Lord of the Force" be? xD)

Any other suggestions or shall we go with that name?

High Sith language indeed! Good idea.

Ok, so let's take the last bit of Qyasik and fuse it with the word for "Embodiment"...

Which would result in: Tsasik.

Ew xD

How about...the word for lord! Lords of the force. So...

Arisik

Hmmm...that sounds better. How about...

Qyaari?

What do you think of the last tow?
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