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6 yrs ago
Life can be...just wow. Lessons learned from my hiatus: it's ok to be vulnerable with those you care about, the people who love you will always remain in your life and be true to what you want.
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6 yrs ago
Aaaaand work got busy again. Breaking my rule of posting on Friday, but that'll be when I have time again.
6 yrs ago
Tied up at work! Be back tomorrow.
6 yrs ago
In the words of a famous Scottish king; "T'was a rough night". Taking off early for the weekend. Posts back on Monday!
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"She'll make soap out of you. That's what she does. Makes soap out of people."
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With the explanation of the Guardians were, Yerbol had a sinking feeling that Voldon had something to do with their appearance, Cheriss confirming the notion before summoning the Champions to her side and asking for their assistance. The Mystics, who had remained silent during Cheriss' explanation, exchanged looks with one another before the Mystic who first spoke uttered:
"You must ensure the health of your allies. We will tend to our own. It would be most beneficial for your Elders to convene with us at an opportune time. There is much we must discuss." Cheriss acknowledged the invitation before ordering the recovering Alliance squadrons to salvage what they could before requesting air transport off-world. Yerbol wanted to ask about the consequences of what Voldon had done, but Aria beat him to it. The short, somber exchange between Elder and Champion all but confirmed Yerbol's suspicion about Voldon's actions: he sacrificed himself for their own good. Not shocking for his character, but for one of the most stabilizing forces within the Qyaari to suddenly be gone was...well, it was hard to define the term, but Yerbol knew that the knots tightening in his gut were only a mere sign of things to come without the presiding Elder.

He was snapped back out of reverie when a couple of Alliance soldiers asked for help clearing rubble from the entrance of the Temple, Yerbol complying with the request and within a couple of moments the rubble that once acted as makeshift cover against the Gormak was swept aside. As he turned, he found his partner approaching, her near ebony colored irises that normally gleamed with joy tainted with sorrow.
"Hey." He muttered quietly, taking the wobbly hand that gently rested on his arm in one of his own. When no words came, he wrapped his arms around his partner, kissing her on the head as he told her:
"We're going to be okay. I promise you that we're going to be okay." Knowing that probably sounded trite and unconvincing, he quickly tried a bit of grim humor:
"Don't think Voldon would want us to think otherwise, right?" No, that didn't sound right either. Sighing, he released from their embrace and slid his hands up to her shoulders.
"So we focus on the people here that need our help, do what we can to make sure that what Voldon did can be honored through our actions." Already he could hear the whine of engines roaring through the sky as Alliance ships began to descend in the rolling hills that stretched out in front of the Temple.
"I think I heard some of the troopers talking about needing our help getting the wounded out in one piece. Mind helping?"

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It took several hours, but all Alliance troopers that managed to stay alive through Manus' brutal assault were evacuated to shuttles along with debris cleaned up and disposed of. Voss healers and commandos who had been on the front lines at Voss Ka were diverted back to the Temple where they began to carry out their own fallen along with tending to those who still had a chance to survive the carnage Manus had brought upon their normally picturesque planet. When Yerbol wasn't busy helping Alliance or Voss forces, he would lean against one of the support pillars just outside the entrance, some variation of arms folded across his chest as he watched the sky, awaiting the arrival of the scattered Qyaari forces that were deployed to other planets. They hadn't heard anything about how Hoth or Taris did in the assaults, but he could only hope that there wasn't as much resistance there as they faced here. His first rumination session featured thoughts of his parents, but he then disposed of them. Surely they're alright. If anything, Manus chose those two planets to try and stretch their forces in vastly different directions so he could accomplish whatever he was doing on Voss. It was a miracle that one of the Alliance communications officers that came from the wreckage of the capital city managed to get a hold of forces on both worlds, relaying the message to come to Voss as soon as possible. He hoped that the message was actually heard.

It wasn't until night had fully descended upon the planet and the Temple cleared of almost all collateral damage did two shuttles shoot out of the night sky, coming to rest on the knoll in front of the Temple where so many other ships had landed over the course of the day. Their loading ramps ejected, allowing Yerbol to spot the forms of the other Elders and-
"Kira." He muttered, throat drying as he dropped the Faceless helmet in his hands that he had been examining and walked to the threshold of the Temple.
"Good to see you in one piece." Matthew shot him his trademark lop-sided smile, clapping a hand on the Champion's shoulder.
"It took a lot of sacrifice for that."
"So we've heard." Malu came alongside her fellow Elder, surveying the Temple with cloaked eyes.
"Something...powerful was here. Even more than Manus." She cocked a brow, demanding further explanation.
"That's a long story, one that I think Cheriss should tell you." Kira squinted, looking past the younger man as she asked:
"Where's the big guy? Is he trying to coordinate 'war efforts'? Goodness, he never knows when to stop, does he?" Blowing out a contented sigh, she followed up with:
"He'll be happy to know that Hoth was a complete waste of time. A few Faceless troopers and some weird ice drill that they were trying to use to bore into a cave that, according to Malu, had little value."
"Taris was a waste as well." Aliel joined the company now, her normally flowing blonde locks a tangled mess, bags underneath her eyes.
"Although not as easy as disarming a drill." She shot Kira a teasing look, to which she only chuckled.
"Where's Cheriss?"
"I don't...." Yerbol turned back, relieved to find that the Elder was approaching, although he didn't know where his spouse was. She ought to be here.
I know...that'll be a difficult scene to write. I think it might be appropriate for Cheriss to be the one to tell her. You ok with that?

Also, for my next post, what do you think of this:

Recovery efforts on Voss force the Champions to stay planetside for a few days. This would allow Kira and the other Elders to converge on Voss to not only meet up to discuss the damages on other planets, but discuss with the Mystics what Manus was trying to find. That'll be quite the revelation, won't it? 0_0

Once the Elders find out that Manus was trying to find Revan and the Exile...well, we should probably cross that bridge when we get there? Because then the galaxy just cracks WIDE open...as if we haven't done that already xD
Yeah, seriously. I'll have it set up to where there's some time to process in my next post.

Aw, I know. All those memories from the Jedi Knight storyline in SWTOR came flooding back and I too got sad as I wrote it. But, if we know Voldon, he would've gone down in the fashion he did: stoically sacrificing himself for the good of the galaxy. Well, maybe not so stoically, but you know, he wasn't exactly the most emotive person in the world overall xD
Aaaaand done. Sorry for the abrupt ending, but I left it open for Cheriss to explain something that I probably should've mentioned...but I just got the idea a few minutes ago, so feel free to modify it:

These Guardians are similar to the spirits of the Nightmare lands, except these are Voss who served at the Temple of Healing and volunteered to have their Force ghosts/spirits "bound" to the Temple as a way of protecting it. Over time, however, the spirits grow more restless due to the Voss insisting that they are only there as a last resort, hence their bloodthirsty ritual of sucking Voldon of all the energy he had to strengthen them for the final fight against the Gormak. I'd assume that Cheriss would know about this, seeing as she had a lot of experience with Voss and spirits. Any changes you'd like to make?

Feel free also to have your post a bit shorter...I'll try and clean up Voss as much as I can before our charries can process all this xD
Alright, so a few things:

1.Not done yet!
2. How do you want to wake the Mystics up?
3. Once I'm finished, let me know if you don't like the way I handled thwarting the Gormak and I'll change it :)

Hey, I also love your avatar! Mini Aria, I presume?
Yerbol protested himself at the thought of leaving the presiding Elder behind, but there was a look in Cheriss' eye that pacified him a bit more quickly than his, at times, stubborn partner. He wanted to warn her about what he saw in the Elder's eyes, the somber and ominous knowledge that shot through her glance on the subject. What did she know that they didn't? It wasn't like Voldon was keen on being buried inside the tomb. Was there something deeper in the temple that had to be disarmed? Was there some strange personal journey that Voldon had to go through? Was th-

THAT'S AN ORDER, MASSANI!

Cheriss' sudden command jolted Yerbol from his ill-timed tangent, conforming to said order with haste, slinging one of the mystics across his shoulders and forcing himself to address the immediate matter:
"Where do we go?" Cheriss and Ashara affirmed that there was a way out of the subterranean area, the latter taking point as they hauled the mystics limp bodies through winding hallways, steep flights of spiral and traditional staircases as well as through sweet smelling common areas fraught with the intermingling scent of bloody carnage. Voss, Alliance and a few Faceless bodies were in almost every area large enough for battle, reinforcing that their arrival on Voss came far too late.

After arriving at what Cheriss claimed was the top of the temple, they spotted a few Alliance squadrons, one commander reporting that they had arrived about half an hour ago just in time to have the Gormak storm both Voss-Ka and the Temple. When Yerbol requested an update on potential incoming forces as the party of Qyaari found an empty room to catch their breath, the commander direly told them that most deployed Alliance forces were concerned about fending off Voss Ka and couldn't spare any other resources. Just as the Champion was about to wonder aloud as to how they were going to pull themselves out of THIS particular potentially world-ending scenario, Cheriss informed them that the Mystics were the key.
"How? There are three of them against..." He motioned to the Gormak marching tirelessly on the Temple, blaster bolts exchanged from the Alliance troopers remaining and the initial Gormak fighters.
"I know that Ari and I have no experience with waking Mystics up, but we know how to fight off enemies. Could you and Ashara work on trying to wake them up? Those troopers are done for if we don't get down there and help." As if to accentuate the Champion's point, another rocket tore through the sky and slammed against the Temple, rocking the structure far too much for his liking.
"So what's the call?"

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He snorted a chuckle at Cheriss' comment, retorting back:
"I've always enjoyed your pleasant demeanor!" The smile that had formed from the laugh vanished, the Elder taking one last look at Manus' fallen corpse. He stood for a moment, sentiment getting the better of him, memories flooding into his mind of times that felt like another life, one that he would have preferred to escape to at times.

Shaking his head to clear the obstructive recollections, Voldon strode through the set of doors in front to find stone stairs that descended even further into the bowels of the Temple.
"Smells like we shouldn't be here." He mumbled with a smirk, looking to his side only to find no one beside him. She had been here the first time they had come this far into the Temple, she a rather spunky, freshly initiated Jedi Knight who was more than willing to voice her opinion on their surroundings, even when her Master didn't ask for it.

He would miss her. Terribly.

"No more." His boots clanked down the stairs, reaching the bottom where a stone doorway opened up into an empty, vast circular chamber that extended into an eternity of darkness above. Torches were ensconced, burning brightly with a greenish tinted flame. Voldon strode to the center of the room, doffing his saber and robe before getting down on both knees, hands on his upper thighs as he closed his eyes. Not a minute passed until the chamber devoid of sound began to have whispers floating through it, swirling around the outer edge of the room. They began to grow in decibel volume and ferocity, fragments comprehensible through the storm.

You dare...

KILL HIM

Destroy them all to...

Cleanse..

DESTROY


Voldon grit his teeth, focusing with all his might on maintaining his position as the whispers edged towards him, malice growing in the tone of the whispers that were now taking shape. Dark shaded shapes that formed into corporeal beings, their hands wrapped around the hilts of their respective blades. They drew within inches of him now, their presence nearly overwhelming, Voldon raising his voice as he cried out:
"I SUMMON YOU, GUARDIANS OF THIS TEMPLE, SPIRITS OF THE VOSS, CONSUME THE ENEMIES THAT THREATEN TO DESTROY YOUR PEOPLE!" The spirits raised their free hands at the same time, pointing at the tiring Champion before each form flickered forward into Voldon's body, infesting every part of his body and mind. A primal scream ripped from his throat as the last of the spirits made their home inside the Elder, Voldon collapsing forward, breathing coming in ragged gasps. Then soft breaths. Then stillness.

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Before Cheriss could answer Yerbol's question, the Force users and Alliance troopers were brought to their knees as a sudden, powerful explosion of Force energy surged through every crevice of the Temple. A cylindrical column tore through the main chamber, flinging troopers out of the way before looming in front of the entrance. Gormak forces halted for a moment, shouts of indecipherable commands being issued right as the column broke apart to reveal spectral forms littering the battlefield, their blades at the ready. Blaster bolts were fired at the forms, but to no avail: they cut through the Gormak with no hesitation, blood running freely over the once picturesque planet surface. The assailants stubbornly stood their ground only to find a quick death at the hands of the potentially endless spectral squadron.

Yerbol was only able to witness the tail end of this spectacle, seeing as the unseen summoning had released such a massive shockwave of energy that the Champion was immobilized, only getting to his feet with some help from Khem Val, who seemed unaffected by the seismic outburst. After helping the others up, they witnessed the slaughter from the balcony, Alliance troopers cheering complemented by Gormak screams of pain. Yerbol couldn't muster the words to say anything in regard to what they were witnessing, but a deep voice behind the assembled party did:
"Why have the Guardians been awoken?!" Turning, Yerbol found the Mystics standing upright, their eyes glowing in what felt like righteous indignation.
"Awoken?" Yerbol looked to Cheriss, asking:
"What are they talking about?" Another Mystic answered:
"Our Temple Guardians, ones that have been bound for ages only to be released in the most direst of circumstances. They were never to walk the face of Voss ever again. Who did such a thing and why was it done?"
Duuuuuuude, life is crazy. But, in good news, I'm four classes away from my second Masters, so there's that! xD

I'm going to do what I can to get you a post this week for sure. My schedule SHOULD clear up over the next week, giving us time to actually develop this new Revan angle. Thanks for the patience :)
Working on homework/doing writers conferences. Should get you a post hopefully by midweek :)
No worries and hope those appointments go ok! Is your mom doing any better?

Oh man, I ate so much pie xD
(So yes, it was great!)
There! Feel free to get the Mystics out. I'll write Voldon's final death in the next post
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