I do have a slightly random question is there a big bad corporate company that is land or money hungry or a giant government that the people can't stand? Jut wanted to maybe a common enemy and if not maybe jut some world flavor.
@Diabolic Just putting in my two cents and maybe it fits your char or not he could be AWOL and jut left the military after finding it didn't really fit but also seeing the discipline of the char maybe not as Shifter aid an undercover op would give him reason to be there maybe investigating connection to smugglers or pirates.
If you want I kept Gus' mother' story pretty blank and free to play with for any plots turn up as a rival crew or smuggler all good to use as an NPC of opportunity same with his sister. I'm up for any plot really right now can't think of anything to start of with right now though.
I like your char, perhaps try take on a differnt role, Henwen had first-dibs on pilot/nav. Perhaps something like the First Mate/second in command owuld suit GUs, since hes charismatic and chatty, its your choice, other than that it looks fine to me. You can make up a role if you have something better in mind.
I'll respect the dibs no worries and yeah First Mate second in command might be fun charismatic guy to keep everyone sorta in line and it goes with the bio too he's been in the business so i'll go with that. :)
Dang it should have checked here first I guess. I can try and tweak the CS already up if that's allright Spud still want to keep the same over all char if that's all right?
Name: Augustus "Chatterbox" O'keefe Age: 26 Sex: M Orientation: Bi Position: First Mate/Second in Command Qualifications: Gus grew up around a single father who ran a small cargo business. Naturally Gus picked up the trade of running a small ship from his father all of his memories were mostly in the void rarely staying on any one planet for long. He's been flying roughly from around thirteen and helping plot his father's route as a childhood game they would play. Most of his training came from first hand experiences with puddle jumper ships and crates on trip away from the scrapyard. When Gus came aboard SIRIUS it was the fastest and newest ship he'd ever been on and he immediately fell in love with it. Appearance: He stands about 5'11 a grizzly unkempt beard and shaved head. He has numerous tattoos on his arms and back mostly of different types of ships he's flown or has a really good story about.He is a little scrawny due to the fact he sometimes forgets to eat unless reminded. He wear thick glasses and has an affinity for bowling shirts and cargo shorts. Personality: Gus or Chat can be kind of talkative to the point of annoyance to anyone near him. He talks when he's scared, happy, excited, sad, and etc. He's a bit of a joker and can't take things too seriously even life and death situations there's a comment to be made. He's also extremely loyal to any crew he's serving with. Likes: Flying, making horrible joke, talking, history, Classic music (basically current pop and rock music.) Dislikes: getting shot or any sight of blood really, Long drawn out plans he's more act now then find out what happens, Being cheated Strengths: flying, navigating, mechanics when needed, guitar, charm Weaknesses: planning, combat, lying, Paper work Open to relationships: yep Relationships/family: Richard O'keefe (Father/Deceased), Sunny Morales (Mother/unknown), Lyne O'Keefe (Sister/ Alive) Biography: Gus was born to an aspiring trader who was focused more on growing a business so his children would be settled and happy that just ended with dragging Gus and his sister around and never being able to settle. Never knowing his mother and every time he'd asked his father would just shut down the conversation so almost nothing is known about her by Gus. He grew up around ships and hard work keeping them going and his sole wish for most of his childhood was to make his father happy and that meant trying all he could to help keep the cargo company afloat. The company was mostly up and up while Gus does has some dealing with minor smugglers there's no love lost there. After his father died in an accident the company folded soon after.
His sister was the one that was always there for him and a protector in his earlier days. She was always there as a friend and the only other person around his age on the ships they kept flying. They were total opposites and that seemed to suit them just fine as brother and sister of course she never wasted a moment in reminding him who was the elder sibling. After their father died Lyne decided she'd' go find their mother and Gus was tempted to join her but he really didn't want to chase that rabbit yet. He hasn't heard or seen her for a few year and he keeps just plugging along and having the best life he can.
What does SIRIUS mean to your character?: It means a family of sorts and a group that'll actually accept him. A.O.B: His tattoos that cover most of his arms and chests, he also has a bit of an obsession with ships and their history Sample post: (It's from an old post and another site if that's all right)
"They call me Professor Mogul!"
The old man exclaimed from the top of his lungs. He looked around the table taking in all of the assorted villains, cutthroats, and assorted riff raff. It was his turn to speak at least he was the next in line around the table he faltered for a moment his outstretched hand that had shot to the sky slowly fell down. He was easily the eldest villain here at least they could tell that if he didn't have the full helmet and gloves and rocket boots on and the tweed suit may have given him away as well. His name was associated with crime waves of Pentagon City year and years ago that is if any of these young types even remember that long ago. When villains had a theme a shtick they stuck too and a made professor villain was the best theme at least to Mogul.
He straightened himself and smoothed out his jacket and swiveled his head back and forth his voice modulated through the helmet came out as a deep almost robotic voice which had helped cover his identity for years.
"I am the master planner of many a crime!True some of it did not exactly go as plan but that is beside the point. This....cabal was put forward as a scheme to bring this city to its knees! And for that my friends you need a mastermind a genius of the ages and that is what I am. For this plan to work you need a million and one back ups and back ups for the back ups that I can provide for a fee of course. Of course we all have a fee we have the Brute and the Man of a Thousand Faces good on the ground men before them I can set this all up."
Mogul reclined in the cheap office chair it squeaked under him and he smiled under the helmet that had gone better then he had thought. He was aging and this could be his last hoorah his last chance to in fact bring down the pentacle of superheroes. It was a candy store he never could rob in full and this plan this last ditch plan from the remaining villains smart and despicable to survive the tightening in sentencing lately could be the ticket. He had laid low for the past years only showing his costumed face as it were to a few prospective job offers but nothing was grand enough, this was all that and more and he wanted in badly. This audition was a bit old school and that suited him fine as well no one had the flash anymore it was all dark and broody where was the fun if you couldn't gloat the hero of the genius of the plan. He shook his head one more time.
"If you want to succeed we will have to work together let the....politics be left for after we are not in danger eh. In my honest opinion class this assorted medley of bedlams have the best chance of complete destruction. Let's make it count yes?"
Dan sat at the far end of the counter his eyes scanning the patrons and roving back to the door periodically seeing people come and go. He only casually scanned the menu to look busy and blend in with the other people either talking or eating. It didn't seem like a total dive and might actually be a good place to grab a bit to eat. Danny had gotten a tip off that this would be the meeting place if he was good enough to get in. He knew he was small time but this was his chance to go beyond that and that was something he couldn't pass up.
Looking up again he saw a waitress move from one booth and then hand out two coffees then head his way. As she approached he flashed a smile and accepted the coffee trying to flirt a bit just to keep her talking. She smiled and walked away back to her work behind the counter. Turning on the stool Dan waved at the two in the booth now three people. Dan ordered a plate of pancakes and decided to wait more or less until he was acknowledged by the two in the booth before approaching plus these cake looked pretty good and he'd been starving lately and the cash was starting to dry up.
It had been hard going in the states so far being new in town everyone was a bit wary without a vouch from a long timer. This was his chance and he was more than ready to prove his worth. Dan received his cakes and drowned it in syrup taking glances at the door still and the booth where his coffee had come from. Raising his cup again to the booth he took a sip digging in happily.
Physical Description: Caucasian he is 5'9 with a shaved head and a beard. He has green eyes he is also described as having a sleeve tattoo on his left arm. Has European features.
Specialties: Surveillance, Explosives, Safe cracking, and lock picking
Criminal History: Convicted in Toronto of breaking and entering also a small time fence in the same city. After being released he moved from Canada and is rumored to be looking to hook up with a crew who needs a safe cracker.
Personal Info: Dan is a small time crook from Toronto his very first heist was a midnight raid on a Mounty station in which he stole one thing the Captain's hat. That gave him his nickname and a reputation of doing off the wall and high risk jobs. He has never worked with a full fledged crew but there are a few that will vouch for him. He has recently escalated from two bit jobs to looking for high score opportunities.