Garrison

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Josh was pulled reluctantly to a table with the others. He brought his tray though unsure why, he wasn't sure if he was going to eat the food on it anyway. Josh couldn't look Iris in the eyes, it was her that pulled him to the table, it was her that just suffered a loss, it was her that reminded him of himself. He hated feeling this way but he couldn't help it. He stirred his strange stew some more with his spoon. His concentration was broken by Jack who was introducing himself. "I'm Joshua Stone." he replied simply to the man with a scar on his chin. His appearance was that of a soldier, now surprise there considering the types of folks this program attracted. With those brief words, Josh did feel himself starting to loosen up, not a lot, but more than the shitty way he was feeling. "I look forward to serving with you." he added, wanting to at least appear that he wasn't a silent jerk.

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I just finished my CS, it's the very first post on page one. I added the last bits of information. It's fairly brief so if anyone cares to look it over and get a feel for what my character is all about, that's it.

The Jaeger Program (Always Open)

Glad you liked them lol. I posted by the way. Truth be told, I didn't plan on playing this guy so depressingly but you threw a curve ball with the Kaiju attack and the death of a pilot. I figured since he lost his parents in a similar fashion, it would hit him hard and not to mention we were waiting on others to post, I thought it best to not jump in people's kool aid and shit.

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Josh woke up early to work out in his room, much like everyone else these days. Staying in shape was the only recreation they had. He cleaned himself up and put on a pair of tan cargo pants with a dark blue long sleeve shirt and headed to the cafeteria to get some chow. He didn't expect anything great and sure enough, he got a mystery stew. He nodded to the guy serving him in a motion that said thank you but he remained silent. Josh was a very quite guy until he got to know people. It didn't help that his first day in the Shatterdome was so depressing. For no reason in particular, he felt responsible for the death of Leo, as if he was a bad omen up them. He found a spot with hardly anyone at the table and sat down, pushing his food around with his spoon. It was weird for him, to be like this. He was a much more lively person, competitive in nature too. To be so down like this was painful for him.

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Well technically we're waiting on a Kingleo guy but he hasn't made a CS yet. Yes, my friend the pyro isn't on right now but I'd like to wait on her if possible. I've almost got everything worked out for us to begin soon though.

The Jaeger Program (Always Open)

Watch these when you get a chance.
How Pacific Rim Should Have Ended
Everything Wrong With Pacific Rim In 9 Minutes Or Less

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Sorry you had to go through all that just to fix it but it looks a lot better now.

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I'll identify everyone's threat level once I further look into them. Not sure when exactly but certainly before the OOC is up that way you can add them to your CS under your power description. Hell, I actually still gotta complete my CS lol.

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Little_ninja said
I see, so it is just that my wording is OP. LolBut I am glad you like my character and like my idea of a scientific nomenclature. Would Evols (pronounced evils perhaps?) be a suitable quick one word?

I suppose if you look it that way, I guess that was my beef with it. Seeing as we currently have no other name in the slot for this topic, that'll do. I'll still browse my mind and see what I can come up with though. Maybe the others will come up with something as well. PM me and we'll figure out what you're saying.

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questionmark693 said
I spent like an hour trying to figure it out.....how do you change line spacing and add line breaks? If I go to edit it and hit enter and ut five empty lines, they don't show in the post, I legitimately don't know how to make it look better :/

Yours looks like this:

questionmark693 said Rilyn wears his prison clothing in the style they were intended to be worn in.

Personality: Rilyn is a slow to anger person, though when his anger is roused, he can completely lose control. In general

though, he has a tendency to be extremely contemplative, letting his thoughts wander, oftentimes giving the impression to

others that he doesn't care about what is happening around him. In truth though, he is paying attention and he notes

everything that he sees for later reference, only in part to augment his power.

History: Rilyn grew up as an average kid in the U.S., playing video games, enjoying time with his friends, graduating from

high school, and getting a job in fast food, eventually becoming a part-time manager. During high school, he developed a

passion for music, and spent nearly all of his time playing various instruments, focusing mostly on the piano, guitar, and

the violin. He spent a year working various dead end jobs, before going to college.

Right before he graduated, he was watching somebody play a song on the piano that he had hoped to eventually learn. Five

minutes later, he played that same song almost perfectly-the only mistake he made was exactly the same mistake made by the

individual he had watched play the song.

I want yours to look like this:

PoisonLillies said Prison Outfit: Her orange prison jump suit is one size bigger than needed making it loose and baggy. Has a small v-cut at the neck with short-sleeves. She wears a body fitting white thermal long-sleeve shirt underneath, having the sleeves pushed up to her elbows all the time. If in her cell she likes being bare-footed but outside she wears plain white no slip gripping shoes.

Personality: She used to be a very optimistic girl. Always trusted people fallowed the rules, never shy to get to know a person. However, now Serenity is closed off from everyone. She trusts no one, she speaks little, and she keeps everything bottled up. Serenity’s moods are always between cold and angry. Even though she feels angry half the time she never lets it get the best of her. She hates people who feel sorry for themselves.

History:Serenity was born in the late winter months to John and Eva Cross. She was six pounds and eighteen inches long. As soon as she hit the age of five her parents took her to her first climb. It was to a small indoor rock climbing class. John and Eva were masters at mountain climbing, they even owned a shop for climbing equipment, and wanted their little girl to grow up with the passion for it. Serenity did not like climbing at first however she stared to feel the rush once she was nine and hit her first little mountain. After that Serenity would climb anything and everything. At the age of fifteen, after climbing Mount Everest, she did not want to have ropes tie her down when climbing anymore. This however was limited as her parents were in fear of her falling.

Just go to your post, hit edit at the bottom of the page and then start from the top, start deleting the double spaced lines until it looks right. Separate topics like Personality and then History and so on. From the looks of it, you typed up your post on the Notepad in the accessories window on your computer.