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Konica said
Yup, I'm definitely interested. Most likely gonna use my Adriana character from that other rp, with some changes of course. I already have some cool ideas brewing.

Whoaaaa! Welcome, Konica! Didn't know how you'd take in all of this and I'm so glad you could join us! You did put a lot of time and effort inot Adrianna's appearance and I look forward to her debut, a la Renaissance! Feel free to float several ideas my way if you feel like you've got cool ideas for any subplots or story additions. The same applies for the rest of y'all 8).

FernStone said
Yup, three characters xD They're nothing spectacular - one already made who I've wanted to rp for so long and fits, and two brand new characters. And she'll probably be around seventeen, maybe even eighteen, so certainly not below adolescent. I couldn't roleplay a character that age anyway I don't think and they certainly wouldn't survive in a roleplay like thisWhat kind of military ranks are there? I'm looking to have a character in the Sarifen army who is not the lowest of low but not incredibly high up either - who has maybe had a promotion or two to make him in the middle. Feel free to wait to answer when you have more time

Fern, think of the existing Sarifen Armies as feudally conscripted fighting forces with very very heavily drilled men-at-arms. Save the Nezām-e Jadīd, whom are perhaps the most well equipped, professional fighting force with existing surgeon/field hospital detachments, most other Sarifen soldiers are simple commoners pressed into meager fighting or siege detachment roles. Cannons and firearms exist, but they are one shot, muzzle loaders with varying accuracy. Firearms are generally only distributed for existing aristocratic retainers, exclusive mounted noble troops, commissioned assassins, or the crack soldiers of the Nezām Corps.

Regarding ranks; yes! There are exclusive ranks, but I'll need to dig them out of my note pad. Until I find that list, all I can say and promise is that military ranks aren't as retardedly simplified as they are in most other fantasy stories. Yes, that's right! There aren't simply just Generals, Captains, Lieutenants, Sergeants, or Corporals. No, no, no … there is still a crude hierarchy within Sarife's levied armies. These consist of upper, middle, and lower echelons with varying degrees of competency based on how talented the aristocratic officers are. Again, the exception would be the Nezām-e Jadīd, whom are trained from birth and swear an oath of life-long service to the Sarifen Empire. For now, just list the character's position as a mid echelon officer within one of Sarife's many divisions and I will list the hierarchy when I've pulled up my list.

I would like to note that although the Sarifens are not exactly known for their close quarters sword abilities, their Foot Archers, Mounted Archers, and Slingers are some of the most accomplished in all of Altaea. Marksmanship is a highly regarded past time throughout Sarife and even during harsh junctures in life, there are weekly competitions in horseback riding and ranged disciplines. To emphasize further, Sarifen mounted nobility are quite ferocious and do not trail far behind their Vorstan counterparts. Also, given that an immense guerilla war has engulfed Valania's former territories, there are various fortresses and checkpoints through out Southwest Carcassonne. A sizeable portion of Sarife's armies also occupy many locations within Valania, keep sizeable standing forces within major urban centers, and are continually supplied and drilled given that they are constantly harrassed by the Valanian resistance. As always, keep asking away and I'll keep supplying information your way; within reason of course 8).

Edit: Wanted to point out that although there will be heavy geo-political themes and consequences, I intend to make this a very character oriented story centered around a strong narrative and cast. Additionally, subplots are highly encourage aside from the main plotline so long as they don't deviate too far away from the main story's location proximity. An example would be if in the middle existing, plot setup in Voltas, certain characters suddenly appeared thousands of miles away in Orad. An exception would be a flashback of sorts, in which case all is fair in love and war 8)

The Last Bastion: Bunker Chicago

We appreciate the input, Brovo 8). I can't say Melonhead's character didn't have it coming, but from what you're telling us, Brovo, I get the sense that you found Melonhead's actions worse than useless. It's a damn shame because prior to Chris' death, not only did I forward multiple PMs Melonhead's way, but I emphasized pointers regarding the Shadow Zone Fog, the Wolves potentially threatening Brucey or Daniel, the mutant tower, combined arms overlapping fire, the dangers of moving alone as well as listing all the major threats that could have ripped Chris to shreads; Limey you can vouch for me on this one because I sent you messages as well, outlining what I saw could potentially benefit as well as harm Southwest Sector's existing squad. Of course, Melonhead ignored me and did the exact opposite of what I advised and eventually, his character basically ate a rumbling chainsaw 8P. I don't mean to sound like a know-it-all because I'll admit; I'm not entirely well versed in infantry-tactics, but ... I did try to give Melonhead my honest two-cents.

In the near future, I can only pray I haven't or won't execute anything comparable to Melonhead because being stupid and alone in the Shadow Zone or wastelands without buddies, backup, or sound tactical decisions would almost gaurantee me shitting my pants. In fact, the moment I noticed that Peter was dropping into Battlezone: Downtown Chicago's Southeast Sector; alone; I already almost shit my pants =_=.

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On my lunch right now, but I'll try to answer your questions to best of my abilities with the time I've got.

FernStone said
Great, that all also helps :) Currently my character total is looking to be maybe 3; two female and one male. Just because that's the amount of ideas I have. Another question this time about age. I was wondering what the minimum age would be? I have a character who I want to probably be a blacksmith apprentice so she would be in her late teens. That possible?

3 characters you say? I can't wait for their debut! Regarding adolescent characters, as long as she's in her late adolescence, I'm perfectly fine with her inclusion, but anything below adolescent is a no go and my reasoning stems from the fact that I don't believe an all adolescent cast would fit the story or prove skillful enough for survival.

Peik said
Has there been political unrest in Sarifen in the past? I wish to make an exiled prince that's stooped as low as to commit banditry after being unable to hold lands, a la Babur.

The Sarifen Courts within Orad (Sarife's capital) are generally more stable than Valania, however, there is growing discontent and immense frustration between Prince Bahramesh II and influential members of the aristocracy regarding Emperor Aryanpur I's iron fisted rule. Sarife's economy is buckling given that there are: widespread famines, economic mismanagement, refusal to disband the colossal, standing army (close to 3 million conscripted warriors at its present condition), prevalent feudalistic way of life, and delayed reforms. PM me, Peik, and we'll work something out 8)

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FernStone said
They most certainly can be xDThank you very much all that information really helps. I needed it to write the backstory for a character, and I think I can now. Looking forward to the more detailed explanations as well!Also another question coming up from character creation: appearance. Is there any typical appearance of the nations? Because obviously in our world there are certain traits common in certain places - eg blond hair and blue eyes in Norway. Also for names (first and last) were would you recommend drawing inspiration from for either Sarifen characters or Valanians? Probably a stupid question but you know...

It's no problem at all, Fern, and no these aren't stupid questions! As always, keep asking away and I'll do my best to brighten whatever you're picture you're trying to paint 8). Some Sarifens generally feature dark hair, dark eyes, and golden skin, while others, particularly some along the coastlines and territories bordering Valania possess a mixture of either dark or blonde hair and dark or blue eyes. Valanians are generally brunette or blonde haired with blue or green eyes. I'll explain more later, for now, I have to work!

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FernStone said
Can't really reply to much, on my phone and its slightly messed upI have a few questions though coming up from my character thinking. First of all, assassins. How do they work? Run by sort of guilds or everyone works for themselves or what? Also are there establishments like brothels in Sarifen / anywhere else?

Phones can be tricky beasts that break on a whim so don't let them ruin your day .

In Altaea, there are no Assassin or Thieves Guilds of sorts and generally the more accomplished Assassins are never caught and under an aristocrat's employ. Some of the best serve under Emperor Aryanpour I or under the other three Carcassonnian rulers. These agents are virtually undetectable, double as spies, and retain a sophisticated modus operandi in that they are very skilled in various disciplines from lying, to counterfeiting, maneuvering quickly without detection, subterfuge, smuggling, understanding the lay of the land, and other traits. If an assassin under the Emperor's contract strikes, chances are the deaths are mascqueraded into seemingly natural mortalities.

There are also existing cartels that operate throughout Carcassonne and usually employ accomplished assassins, so long as they are paid and treated well. Generally the best assassins either under a lord's employ or serving the Emperor, given that they've probably received much greater training and selection.

Further still, street thugs, brawlers, gangers, cut throats, and dirty criminals are generally available for less discreet commissions as are former veteran soldiers. There are also brigand gangs and pirates that operate throughout Carcassonne, though not in Southern Carcassonne given that Ivalis' massive fleets continually hunt and eradicated piracy. Most assassins work for themselves unless motivated towards other lucrative or personal incentives. Brothels also do exist throughout Sarife, Valania, Vectis, and Vorst given that there are no given laws against their existence!

I'll have more detail explanations when I get off work later so until then, stayed tuned!

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Peik said
Late 1500's-early 1600's is for the best mix of them. Mostly matchlocks and early flintlocks, full-plate still exists but will reach an end and so on. And yes, cuirassiers were held for quite some time. Also, to be honest, plated mail armor was used quite extensively in both the Safavids, Mughals and Ottomans even during Napoleonic times (the Ottomans got rid of it by the time of Mahmud II with his army reforms afaik). I just wanted to point out that mail and plate wouldn't be very bulletproof compared to full plate.

Yes, then this time period would be the perfect fit for plate wearers even with matchlock firearms. The Sassanids did not wear full plate, which did place restrictions on user protection. Thankfully, this is not the entirely the case for some Sarifen armies and brings a slew of possibilities for our story. 8)

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Peik said
I've also noticed that the Sarifens are apparently using plated mail, which isn't *that* bulletproof. Now, if you're making the plates bulletproof, I can understand, but compared to a full-plate using (I guess, after all they're based on the Commonwealth and France) Valania they wouldn't be all that good.

Yes, you are correct and make a good point in that wear plated mail armor is very dangerous when confronting firearm wielders. Mushrooming, tumbling, and organ damage are a very frightening. If I'm not mistaken; I believe the French, the Polish Commonwealth, and various European powers fielded Cuirassiers during the Renaissance all the way through the early Industrial Revolution. Cuirassiers are a living incarnation of Knights and did extensively wear plate armor, but as time went on and firearms evolved, so did the need to remove the arm and legging plates. We'll be seeing their appearance in the near future and it's good that you know this. I believe plate armor is also gradually phasing out of popularity during this particular time period so good eye, Peik.

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Peik said
I asked because I believe Sassanid culture has been quite masked and assimilated by the Islamic elements that rushed over them all during the Great Islamic Expansion.It's also funny that the Nezam-e Jadid is based on early Ottoman Janissaries when in real life they were an army to replace said Janissaries.

Ohhhhhh, the irony storytellers accrue to preserve their existing lore. Peik, you are correct in that the Sassanids were completely overwhelmed, decimated, and annexed into the Abassid Caliphate. It was a series of exhausting wars against the Byzantine Empire and a string of misfortunes and incompetence that accelerated their decline, although the same can equally be said about the Byzantines. For our story, I feel that Sassanid culture and their way of life are a better fit for Sarife given the fact the impact the Age of Nobles placed on Carcassonne. Sarife is still largely ruled by petty aristocrats and stranded in the Middle Ages due to delayed administrated reforms, a stubborn bias towards feudalism, and a slew of other unresolved troubles.

Additionally, aside from the presence of the Nezam-e-Jadid, whom simply answer only to the Emperor and his most trusted commanders, there is no standing Sarifen Army. Nevertheless, Sarifen feudal armies are well equipped and possess gunpowder weaponry, pikes, ranged weapons, and armor that few others can match. Some soldiers are also experience and well trained, however, it depends on the military traditions of their respective lords. To my understanding, the Safavids were more capable and organized as opposed to the Sassanids, and we can't have that because that would greatly contradict my detailed accounts of the Age of Nobles! Of course, that being said, Emperor Aryanpour I, a capable military strategist and an expert in both partisan suppression and sophisticated taxation.

Welp, that's my schpiel and again, I feel as if I've unintentionally erected another text wall. Bear in mind, people, that I am capable of much much more, but I've been constantly tweaking my word brevity. I do promise that I'll dedicate a concerted effort to not force all of you to read essays on a daily basis so bear with my uhm ... information storms 8P.

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Wow, this is unexpected; good tidings and welcome, ruler! Yes the first several posts are quite lengthy and it'll take roughly half an hour to fourty-five minutes to fully read the existing information. Don't want to sound like a broken record, but if you have any questions, you are free to ask or PM me about whatever needs clarification.

FernStone said
I don't think roleplaying is gaming really, I agree with collaborative writing more. You can have roleplaying within gaming eg. Tabletop RPGs but gaming implies some kind of mechanics and rules. I mean I do both RPGs and roleplaying and I'd say they're definitely different. Just my opinion though

You're absolutely right, Fern and I second that! I just want reiterate my experiences for clarification's sake and emphasize that roleplaying is a collaborative writing process that makes collective idea sharing just as important as it is to bring justice to the main characters. Provided, I'm still growing as a writer and I sometimes struggle with portraying characters with unique and believable personalities, but it's my privilege to add as much of a fusion between realism and story-telling as possible! Additionally, we as writers can manipulate the story's environment, but if we're true to our character personalities, we should respect the fact that characters will react in different ways and not necessary do what we as writers want. Otherwise, we're really just playing ourselves and that sort of defeats the purpose of telling a story and delivering a memorable tale. But enough of me getting all preachy. If I, at all, sound like a hard ass, please excuse my perceived attitudes because, at the end of the day, I really just want to work with all of you to deliver a memorable and believable tale!

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Peik said
I'm always interested in early modern RPs. Do we have an Ottoman-Safavid-Mughal equivalent?

Greetings and welcome Peik! In answer to your question, the Sarifens are the closest civilization to an Ottoman - Safavid - Mughal Empire counterpart; in fact, Sarife's creation borrows heavily from the Sassanid Empire. Additionally, several traditions and existing fighting corps named the Nezām-e Jadīd, operating within Sarife bear a resemblance to early Ottoman Janissaries.

FernStone said
I'm curious about these other races xD looking forward to on game discovery I think ;) and bending your own rules... Wow xP and I had another question but I've completely and utterly forgotten it. Geez I'm such an idiot. I will remember it sometime. Gonna start thinking about my characters

Take some time, within reason, of course, and come Sunday or Monday, I will launch Altaea in the Advanced Section!

Edit: Ahhhh ... I'd also like to maybe think-tank the concept of roleplaying because ... well ... I've always had a hard time stomaching 'gaming' when describing roleplaying because over the years; from my experience ... roleplaying seems more like collaborative writing than an actual game of sorts. I mean, there are existing MUDs out there and though I know how they work, I just wanted to know your opinions.