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@Sovi3t The sheet and house are both clear for posting in the NS/CS thread. I've pointed out all the large discrepancies that I could see.

Accepted.

Also, feel free to join the chatzy.
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Fixs

- Replace "Continent" with country
- Toned down populations to medieval standards


Excellent, btw I did mention it but it was probably missed. Your overall population was fine in the rural regions. You should easily be in the same league as places like Xandria and Ignis in terms of overall province population. No glaring issues beyond that.

-sniped-


A few details I'd like to clear up. The area you have is not really a continent any more than Spain, Italy or Sweden is. it's on a peninsula, and I mention it so people who read your sheet don't get confused so please change that. Another note is your capital population is insane for a city in the middle ages.

For reference.

Huge/Big Cities of this era range from 12,000-100,000 people, with some exceptional cities exceeding this scale. Some historical examples include London (25,000-40,000), Paris (50,000-80,000), Genoa (75,000-100,000), and Venice (100,000+). Moscow in the 15th century had a population in excess of 200,000 but these are as stated the very rare exception, not the rule. That current level of urbanization would cause mass starvation throughout your province-- given possible arable land available.

So adjust the capital population, aside from that the overall province population level is fine along with the rest of the sheet. Though note no realm on its own really has the funds for a standing army.

Edit: Which is not to say your province does not have some imperial forces funded by the Empire in the region.

I've started work on an area. This is the family template. If anyone cares to look over it that would be great. If any of you think that it won't work in this RP world then I can adjust accordingly. I'll start work on the actual region now!



Just to comment on this thus far. I. Absolutely. Adore these characters. Easily see many possible plots arcs that could develop here. I'm also quite happy that we have a notable dedicated breadbasket in the south. ^^


Alright, @Abefroeman, sorry to hear that. That really sucks. Thanks for letting us know and hope you don't get to buried in work. ^^


Also, just for a quick shout out here.

@Pepperm1nts@gorgenmast@BlackBishop@Abefroeman and @DeadBeatWalking I hope we have not lost you to vilespawn machinations! ^^

Just checking in to see what's up.
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Is that the larger area connected directly to the province just claimed, or the one below it? Sorry to be a nuisance.


You are correct, that dull yellow/beige between green and grey in the east. ^^
@Sovi3t No problem.

@GreivousKhan So the beige area is open too?


Yes, the area east of the map in beige is open atm for players.

There are also tribe spots open I should mention.

Players take precedence over NPC's, at least, ones that have not gotten a single IC post. Told Gowi they were unnecessary. :K

The NPC was just in case no one took that spot.
http://imgur.com/BLe8Enm
this area?


Yup, that entire peninsula is up for grabs, as well as the beige to the west of it.

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