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Tex gave me permission to punch old women.

Yessssss...
Thoris, The Ocean Shore

When life gives you lemons, punch old women.


Well, Grezola had effectively resigned herself to death. Brushing off Ainra? Whatever, she didn't care too much about the prophetic shit. Outright showing direct spite without just cause? That bitch is asking for it. And finally, the fact that this map Lark had sent them to this crotchety old woman to help them with was solved by just opening and reading the fucking thing? Oho, not settling her already-shortened temper well.

"Excuse me, Jenso, if I may have a word with the prophetess..." Ainra gently shouldered past Jenso, and cleared her throat. "YOU WANT TO GOAD ME ONE MORE FUCKING TIME YOU WRINKLED OLD BITCH?! BECAUSE YOUR SHRIVELED UP PROPHETIC CUNT IS ABOUT TO GET KICKED SO HARD YOU'LL BE FUCKING TASTING IT! I AIN'T GONNA STAND HERE AND LISTEN TO THIS SHIT, AND NOW I KNOW ALL YOU HAVE TO DO IS READ THE FUCKING MAP, I DON'T SEE A SINGLE REASON TO NOT RIP YOUR ARMS OFF, CHUCK YOU IN THE OCEAN, AND SEE IF YOU CAN STILL SWIM!" This entire speech was adorned with Ainra's skin flushing with anger, her claws jutting out seemingly more than usual, and a hint of steam rising from the corners of her mouth.

She looked quite feral, and sounded pretty serious about the whole ripping-off-arms bit. In fact, she decided to go ahead and prove she was serious by giving Grezola a seriously nasty left hook right on the jaw.
Diver's Paradise

Central Region


It wasn't funny, but deciding against going to Hyznia turned out to be incredibly fortunate for the Divers, and very unfortunate for the CMAS. Having any sort of social standing above Divers, who cherished freedom, took more than just organizational skills and charisma.

It took power, that vagabonds and wanderers could respect. That pillar was several meters thick. These CMAS magi were not. Even without using a flaming pillar for ammunition, cutting through several groups of foes at a time was a breeze; the hard part was not injuring the Divers in his wake. It was why he told them to converge towards the center. As the Divers forced themselves away, he only became deadlier, taking down dozens upon dozens of them. Eight hundred CMAS, especially mixed with the officers who were more used to leading and strategy than true combat, was a tough fight, but it wasn't impossible for Alvios to handle; just tedious, especially with having to worry about catching other Divers with the Ki waves from his blade. The lack of Luke was also making this far more difficult, as now he had to make the decision between helping the Divers fighting in the center, and defending the southeastern pillar.

He let loose a heavy sigh of frustration, and carved his way through towards the central square. His mind wandered as he made his presence further known, the CMAS who were trying to organize themselves against Par's formation lost their own in fear and chaos, the Head Diver showing that he didn't need a massive pillar to make a massive impact against their numbers.

If this place falls, we can always rebuild; it's more important to protect the Divers now. Who knows... maybe I'll be able to pick out the traitor once this fight is over. Good thing I waited on Tinon's little errand; without Luke or myself here, this place would already be history. Tinon's timing couldn't have been worse... just like the timing of this... Alvios' mind hesitated, but he shook it off. This fight was getting to him. He had no right to suspect Tinon of anything...right?
Thoris, Lark's Chambers

Follow the yellow-shirted guy! Who...broke down a door!


Well, Ainra's introduction, pep-talk, and snacking were finished. Jenso had gone ahead and asked Lark about where to go, Lark handed Jenso a "magical map of fates woo~", and told them to go talk to someone whose name sounded like a mixture between a monster and a condiment. Well, that was fine. Jenso was already rushing towards the door, and she followed...

...Until he stopped for a moment, to kick the bloody door off of its hinges to leave the room. "Wait, why did you kick the door open? H-Hey, are you sure you should be holding onto the Map of Fangs or whatever that treehugger called it?!" She bolted out after him, both entertained by his collateral damage and wondering if it would be their inevitable downfall.
Diver's Paradise

Northeast Pillar


Alvios was in the front lines, but was focused less on the pillar itself, and more along the lines of protecting the Divers present. Diver's Paradise was extremely important, but his priority was towards the Divers. These were all CMAS forces, organized, focused, and numbered. The Divers were panicked, and some of them just not suited to fighting in groups. He wanted to win, but he also wanted to be prepared to lose and retreat, with as many surviving Divers as possible ready to do the same, if it came to that end.

He'd at least put that end off as long as he could, though. Luke would be pissed if Alvios took the safest route for the Divers, and he didn't want to disappoint. As he looked at the inferno surrounding the pillar, he made a risky decision, but one that might pay off. It was safe for them to sacrifice a single pillar.

"Divers! Turn and bear down towards the Northwest pillar! Pincer the CMAS magi over there; they're holding up better than we are! Head straight for the magi and riflemen, and tear down that barrier! Consider this pillar fallen! I'll hold this side off!" With that said, and many Divers wondering how the hell he planned on holding the entire force of CMAS beginning to surround the pillar, his body glowed faintly with Ki for a moment, before he lept up to the flaming portion of the pillar, and straight-up cut out a massive chunk of the blazing pillar, and with another strike of Ki, smacked it straight back at the group of magi that had cast the spell in the first place like a meteor. The entire structure shook and groaned audibly, but now Alvios was standing in the place of the pillar he had cut out, arms crossed, and the remaining flames roaring around him. He looked like a god among Divers and a demon to the CMAS.

"GO!" he ordered, giving the CMAS that had just attacked the pillar very little time to comprehend what was happening as he cut out another massive chunk and broadsided it into another group of the invading CMAS. Some debris fell from the segment of the Paradise above him, but he was using intimidation and surprise as the ultimate distraction for his allies. Plenty of Arcadia's magi didn't even believe in Ki. This was going to be a fine lesson.

"We may lose our home, but we won't lose our hearts! Diver's Paradise is a place of freedom! Should it fall, we shall rebuild! And to the traitor who lead these CMAS dogs here, I thank you; now we can show you and your masters our strength!" Without Luke around, Alvios had to inspire them. The way to inspire was to speak from the heart. And with fire dancing before him, his furious heart was fueled by a single question:

Who betrayed Diver's Paradise to Arcadia?






And was Tinon going to be mad about him actively cutting apart a pillar to use as a weapon?
@texI have done what you asked. Don't make this too awkward for me.
Thoris, Lark's Chambers

Hungry for an electrifying good meal.


"I can't tell if you're just enthusiastic or patronizing me, Lark...but whatever, it works out. It's been a bit too long since I've had a chance to cut loose and break some bones." Ainra stretched her arms and back once, before spinning around on a heel to face her two accomplices in heroism.

And how stark the contrast was. This Jenso guy seemed just a tad overenthusiastic about helping some stranger with an unknown threat, alongside some other strangers he had known for less than a day. Still, he seemed like the type who really enjoyed some roughhousing. She could get behind that, and cracked a toothy grin. "Alright then big man, my name's Ainra. Ainra Maeti. Good to see a fellow patron of vio--erm, I mean justified violence."

On the other hand though, was the other 'gal in the gang. Reiley, who didn't seem pleased about this. The more reasonable type. Didn't seem to want to have a part in any of this, but Ainra was still skeptical herself, so it made sense. However, Reiley mentioned something else that bothered her more. "Hey, what's this now, bookworm? Look, ignore what the treehugger over there says, you don't have to join in on this, but... Ainra have a strange mix of putting one hand on Reiley's shoulder, and the other of jabbing her gently on the other arm, perhaps not quite as gently as intended. "Don't go putting yourself down, Reiley. You won't know how strong or helpful you're gonna be if you don't give yourself a chance!"

With that, there was only one last thing to take care of. The strange little flying fox fluttering about. Ainra turned from the others once her little introduction was done, waited for a moment, then leapt at it, snatching it out of the air. A quick twist of the wrist broke the thing's neck, a quick spit of flame from her mouth charred its flesh, and a satisfied sigh escaped her as she began chewing on the still-burning meal.

So much for a cute animal companion.
Sooo... I'm gonna eat Maple.


A vastly more reasonable, unique, and enjoyable character. I really didn't have anything bad to say about this one, and I don't think Tex will have any complaints that I can think of. Once he gives the thumbs-up I'd say toss it in the characters tab.

Anything I think needs to be changed, or I have questions/comments about, will be in red. My personal comments and concerns (and wisecracks it seems) will be in blue.
@thewizardguyHo boy, where do I begin on trying to even think about accepting this...

Alright, let's start with your History. This was all perfectly fine and dandy, but there was a sentence in here that suddenly began a downward spiral into the rest of your sheet;

Unfortunately their efforts were for naught.


Right here. This is where the nightmare begins.

Since there's a lot, I'm just going to quote your entire sheet, and highlight the areas that need to be "tweaked" in red. My comments will be in blue.



I feel like I committed a murder there's so much blood here.
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