Henzukaya

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1Charak2 said
Yeà thats cause i haven't started changing it yet... From velocity to wind

Ok, after that it'll pretty much be approved.

Speaking for which, the number of entries is quite large, and I want this to be a really fun roleplay, so I'm increasing the number of player teams by 1, meaning 4 more available spaces. I am also hoping to have another co-GM, one for each team. Kiddo, I would be honored if you would fill the position, as you seem to have a great understanding of what a roleplay needs. However, if you decline,and if anyone would like to do the job, let me know.

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1Charak2 said
That the point less op

Ah. It didn't seem that way in your description. It looked like you had complete control over something in midair.

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Forsythe said
Made some polishing edits, hopefully all right now.

Accepted and added

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Termott said
Awesome!Would perhaps something along the lines of a force field, or rather an outward projection of aura to use as a shield work? Like Violet from The Incredibles? Pretty much the same bubble thing, but of course with a time limit and the bigger the object is, the harder it would be to create.

That would actually work beautifully with that character. She seemed more like a tanky character anyways. Go for it.

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1Charak2 said
Ill get to work (lupus argentum is based of the big bad wolf so wind manipulation

Ah, I see. Of course, you do understand that if it were to be wind manipulation, then you wouldn't have complete control over some things. You could disrupt it, alter its course, but you can't completely redirect or stop it. I think that would be too broken

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Termott, welcome back! As for your character... Everything seems really nice, but the Semblance seems out of place. I feel like there could be something better and a lot more useful for your character other than invisibility. can you think of anything else you would want if you couldn't have invis? PM me for suggestions if you need some

AliceZaru, I really like your character so far! Always a pleasure for a blank mind to be filled, taught, and molded by their surroundings. The Semblance I'm somewhat confused by. The description was also somewhat unclear. If you could specify it and what it can do precisely that'd be a huge help.

Edit: Just noticed what Kiddo is talking about. Yeeaaah, a mute character will be weird. It can work, depending on how well you can execute something like that, but I don't think it would go so smoothly. If you could, please remove the muteness from your character

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Kiddo said
I've been hard at work on drawing up my character, but that's going to be at least one more day before that's ready. In the meantime, she's a short octopus faunus with cephalopod eyes and tentacles for hair: the sort of thing that no amount of bows, hats, or makeup can possibly conceal. ;)Also my semblance is totally original man I don't even use time at all! D:

Sweet. There was nothing wrong with your semblance, same with Foresythe. Just a bit of an explanation in consideration of a past argument. Approved, and added

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Scarifar said
Alright, updated Michelle's personality.

Lovely. Approved and added.

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LaXnyd said
I've changed the name to Disturbed Tranquil Lake. The name is meant to be like a chinese martial arts move, and the reason for it has to do with Gerald's past. I hope that that name would be short enough. Other than that, thank you very much!

Beautiful. Accepted and added.

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LokiLeo789 said
How about me, i no ima have to change mine

Yeeaaah, you're gonna have to change a lot. And I mean a LOT lot. For starters, your bio doesn't have to include your past, only your personality, you need to actually add a weapon instead of one plain word, and I'm just flat out rejecting your Semblance. It's just plain old over powered, as well as moderately confusing.

Scarifar said
@Henzukaya I already made the changes to the Semblance. It's small, but all according to what you said.

Try to go into further detail in the personality, totally forgot about that til now. how she is with strangers, how she is with close friends, her usual thoughts on scenarios, overall goals, etc, anything to explain more about her. Aside from that, looking good.