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Termott said
Participants! (Henzukaya) (BrodZ11711) (Forsythe) (Kiddo) (LaXnyd) (Scarifar) (Termott) (LokiLeo789) (pyre101)NPCsI had nothing better to do so here's links to the characters who were accepted (I'll add the rest once accepted). Also some people posted more than one CS so tell me if I got the wrong one, please!

Ah, that reminds me. I gotta get to work on the other NPCs -.-'

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Scarifar said
Hey, you forgot to add me to that list.

Whoopsies! I knew I was forgetting something... Fixed

Aldridge said
Is this still open, or is it full?

Its filling up pretty quickly, but it appears there's still time and available spaces. Although with the current waiting list, it appears I will have to make cuts eventually.

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LokiLeo789 said
That's a food idea, when will we start the IC.

Probably won't be for another day maybe. There's still some openings, and a few people that wanted to submit characters, if I remember correctly.

1Charak2 said
editing done Xd

Oh, forgot to mention probably. Remove the bio and replace with personality, and its accepted.

pyre101 said
I like that idea even more. I shall edit my cs soon with that and add a personality. =P I wrote that up late last night.

Sweet. Approved and added.

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pyre101 said
Okay. The swords will be short swords and this one seemed to work. I will find another one picture that is bigger.Basically, the semblance will have a total of 5 swords come out, ready to be used by anyone. I will also put in some kind of time limit on it. They will be swords that can cut through almost anything.I will implement a few changes to my Cs and get back to you on this.

Ah, I see. That's pretty nifty. I think having them cut through almost anything is a little... No. Also, I think having something like this heavily drain you of energy/aura is a little over the top. If you want my advice, turn it into something that allows any open skin surface excrete a partial blade, the longer the more energy it takes. You can effectively make yourself a porcupine XD. In all seriousness, this seems like a much better idea as you can also catch people unaware with a sudden blade coming out of your palm. There can be a limit of 10 blades. If you don't like it, thats all right, you can go with the other and increase it to 10 blades at once that other people can hold that can penetrate most materials.

1Charak2 said
oh god finally my semblance is finished XD :D

The suction idea is nice and nifty, as well as the air slashes, but the passives are totally unnecessary. Instead of having a section for passives, you can just state that as he uses the Semblance his eyes turn silver, although such a change is needless unless you really want it, then go for it. The 2nd passive is just no. I understand its slight target movement, but its just adding too much to your Semblance, and I request that you remove it completely. Also, the title seems a little contradictory. Zephyr's Roar > roar > an action that requires exhaling > somehow pulls things forward > logic. You could simply rename the whole thing Zephyr's Mastery and shorten the description by quite a bit.

LokiLeo789 said
YESSo do we have any team made yet? If not we could do team 1 and team 2 and if need be team 3, you choose your team and then you and you teammates can make your team name, or we can have team captains if Team 1 and 2, and you draft your teammates and you make a team.Just an idea

What I'm actually doing is having the pairing in the first part of the test completely randomized, and then pairing afterwards determined by the GMs. A team of 4 tanky characters or 4 squishy characters is never a good idea.

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Elrios approved and added

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Termott said
Goodness, I finally finished my character's appearance. I'm also really proud of her symbol!Now to work on her weapon. -cries-

Looks pretty nice. A little undetailed,but I've always been a harsh critic and a Zero Punctuation fan so its most likely fine.

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AliceZaru said
Workin on my semblance... o-o...'ILLISUIONIST!'

??

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Forsythe said
Q:How's this gonna relate to canon, if at all? AU? Before? After? Parallel?

Parallel. The normal RWBY storyline in the anime will occur, ours will just be in the sort of background. We'll catch glimpses here and there of the anime storyline, but our main focus will be on a different route.

LokiLeo789 said Semblance: help me

This made my day.
Overall, though, This character is much better than the past one, I really like it. Just needs fiddling with the Semblance, which I can help you with through PM.

pyre101 said
Semblance: Activates a rune on his chest that will begin to glow a silvery aura that is visible to all who are not blind. From the light flows out spectral swords. These swords can be used to cut through most armor, except for those that are spectral themselves, another ability (phasing), or any special armors made from dust. Once used, Kael will fall onto ground after use, almost out of breath (having the wind knocked out of you, that feeling). This may be upgraded, depending on GM's decision and if yes, may be implemented later.

Is this a Dagger Laser Beam??? It certainly is unique and original, but also insanely confusing. also, the image for the weapon is too insanely small. If you could find a larger image?

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AliceZaru said
I wanted to add a defensive system! So there yah go.

so its more of a support kind of character? that's actually pretty nifty. Although I have a slight issue with the generate lightning, things seem all right, and especially interesting. Could you narrow down what all the robots are capable of when you take control of it?

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Why does so much junk happen while I'm sleeping?? Lots to get to work on again.

Termott said
Pretty much what mine's going to be, lol. Although, perhaps being able to extend it around others or objects, so yeah, as mentioned pretty much Violet.EDIT: I also fixed my bio! Is there anything else I should change? I should also have the pictures done soon.

Great. Approved and added.

LokiLeo789 said
So is it OK if I change my character.

Please do.

1Charak2 said
I m contemplating a idea that instead of creating a shield it creates a slicing vortex of air

If your character is going to be an all out offensive character, and if you're going to continue with a wind related Semblance, then I would suggest something that complements your aggressiveness. Something like it allows you to disrupt projectiles and defenses of all but the strongest opponents.

AliceZaru said
Semblance: This semblance allows the user to telepathically take over any computer or system that is nearby and is within her view. This ability can allow her to communicate with the system and allow her to become one with the system. She can gain data from the computer/laptop/ etc, mostly anything that is computer based. (Watch Dogs Cx) She can also take control of a robotic suit IF the firewall is weak and if she cannot do that she can create little virus and spread through the system. There are many abilities she can do as well, viewing camera through her eyes and as well malfunctioning certain things and which causes things to explode and if she is strong enough she can deactivate technology as well. Though these all seem very op but I will let the owner or admin limit it.

I like the idea, but I can't see much of the use in battle. If you would like to continue using this idea, how about that you can generate/store up to 10 small mobile drones that increase your vision, as well as the hack, although I'd remove the "cause things to explode". you can still hack certain electronics, given the firewalls are low enough, and you can disrupt others, via virus or other means, but can only completely shut something down or deactivate it if given enough time.

Yes, we're still open, although we're currently deciding our characters, there should still be plenty of room.
As for the symbols and colors, I was considering the idea, but figured it'd be too complicated for some. If you want to, go for it I suppose. All the Auras would be similar or match the characters hair or eye color.
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