Henzukaya

RWBY: Deep Blue

Khalis watched as person after person departed the ship. He was leaning on a nearby tree, gazing from a distance. Waiting for something fun to happen, but alas nothing occured. This was boring "Too boring..." He said to himself, eyes narrowing. It was time for him to get down to work. But first, he had to find the right victim, and not only that but decide the perfect set up. Such was Khalis's way of doing things, and he wouldn't want it any other way. Cracking his knuckles back, he thought he had found the target, a little girl with blue hair in ponytails on either side of her head. So young. So tiny. So innocent. Perfect timing to introduce her to the cruel world that was reality! Taking one triumphant step, he began to wonder how her would go about and ruin her day-

He stopped. Then slowly turned the joyful walk into a calm and quiet pace, the smile vanishing, widened eyes narrowing into a dark glare. He then took on a thinking position, one arm upholding his other by the elbow, the other holding its hand over his mouth. No, this is bad. I don't want to get expelled on the first day. He began walking with the rest of the students. The little girl somewhere behind him, unfortunately for his mischievous habits. All of these people are complete strangers to me, and I to them. If I already start dishing out some of the jerk moves I have bouncing around my mind, I'll be permanently labelled as a problem, bully, and possibly looked down upon by even the staff.

He let out a heavy sigh, now slightly depressed. "This kinda sucks..." He passively blurted, walking slower than the rest. And of course, making friends on the first day was kind of a problem too, considering they may be split up from day one. That, and the best way to actually make friends is by almost complete accident. Although it didn't look too bleak. They were being forced into groups anyway. Although that was also bad news for him, considering he couldn't get along with much of anybody, even at his old school. "DAMMIT THIS SUCKS!!" He shouted causing all eyes to turn on him, but he didn't care. Why was it only him that had to actually think about every single possibility in the future?? Why was he the one cursed with premonition of pretty much everything?? Why did everything have to be so predictable?? He was cursed, all right. Cursed with boredom.

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pyre101 said (correct usage, btw. Just like a female dog = bitch)

Just be careful not to use this term on any canine Faunus. It would be amusing as hell, but yeah, you might get the shit beaten out of you and no, I won't be there to help as GM.

RWBY (Opening check/interest check)

Currently Closed

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Zombehs said
Eh, changed it back to this then. Added another weakness.

I don't see any further problems with it. Kiddo, if you don't see anything else wrong with it, its accepted

pyrak

Stop right there. Just no. No. For starters, why are you submitting two characters at the same time? As for the other stuff...
-Your character's appearance is a little too long and unnecessary, mainly the bit with the tattoo. Its just downright confusing.
-Your personality is suicidal. Huh. Well. Guess what. No.
-Your semblance is pretty much another person's Semblance (LokiLeo789's) just edited a little, and even if it wasn't, its just a little overpowered how you can use any kind of force and send them flying, like Goku breathing on Yamcha. No.
-What the hell does being streetwise have to do with anything??
-So. You're a loner. Fun.
To summarize: No. Plain old no. Even if you edited it a lot, just no. There'd have to be something good to anchor it to to change it, and so far there isn't anything. We don't need someone brooding at the window on rainy days thinking suicidal thoughts and glaring daggers at everyone. No.

As for your second character...
-Hair is always a grabbing device, unless its shaved off completely or almost shaved off completely.
-WHY ON EARTH IS YOUR CHARACTER 6'8"?? IS THAT EVEN PHYSICALLY POSSIBLE, AND IF IT IS, IS IT EVEN REASONABLE FOR A CHARACTER TO BE THIS TALL??
-Just because you claim to be a hardcore badass does not mean people will see you as a hardcore badass. Often times others will see you as some all talk, worthless showoff. And others that aren't me would see you as mildly annoying and maybe a little arrogant.
-How on earth is your long and thin poleaxe (Which should be called just a long battle axe) able to turn into a crossbow??
-All your Semblance means is that you're a volatile battery. What are the uses of that??
-Huh, for once something on your characters I all right. For once.
-THAT sentence was arrogant itself. You're saying its justifiable that shes overconfident because she's not overconfident, she's just too skilled. Get on my lvl n00b. No.

Long story short, for both characters, it has come to my realization that there is not enough negative words in the dictionary, and possibly the entire languages spanned across all of mankind to describe perfectly your characters, so I will leave it at a nice and friendly No.

Ok, as of now, character submission is pretty much officially CLOSED. We may open up sometime later, but for now, just no.

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MonkeyBusiness said
So kind of like.... Post a character and wait for an opening.

Unfortunately...

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We have a waiting list now, but yeah still open-ish

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Khalis was still eavesdropping, but now kind of regretted that he wasn't able to see this. A turtle-like person actually falling over and incapable of getting up. This was both hilarious and interesting, although he didn't know how it would affect the person. He decided instead to slither away silently, so as not to disturb them any further. He realized that wouldn't be a problem as the trip was ending soon. The screen that displayed the countdown had reached roughly 5-6 minutes, causing many sighs of relief from nearby to erupt. Guess the agitation and anticipation was getting to them all.

Suddenly, the screen flashed red and orange, with the message "BREAKING NEWS" slid across the screen. It had grabbed his attention, as it had most. The screen then changed to the news reporter from before, who had been explaining about the recent Faunus uprisings. "It has come to our knowledge that Lieutenant Alder, trusted member of General Ironwood's Faction, has been missing for the past weeks. The local authority and even members of the Faction are clueless as to his whereabouts." It showed an image of Lieutenant Alder, a man with golden brown hair combed back, a strong confident face, and obstinate brown eyes. "The local authority are asking for any and all cooperation in determining the location of Lieutenant Alder. In other news-" Khalis didn't care anymore. It went on about some guy Torchwick and the Faunus revolution. He didn't really care much, just an occasional update on stuff was fine.

Glancing out the window, they had almost arrived. The screens had changed to Glynda Goodwitch, apparently a teacher at Beacon, but Khalis's attention was still focused on the outside. Finally... Beacon. A grin spread as he imagined his future days in the academy, which seemed just within reach. A moment later, it seemed, and the ship landed, some poor blonde fellow couldn't hold onto his lunch for much longer and made for the nearby trashcan. Khalis was tempted to laugh, but it seemed the poor fellow was already going through enough hardship. Now there was some opportunity to explore the school grounds.

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Pyromania99 said
I planned on having Francesca evolve through the story. She doesn't like being a lone wolf. It just happens. :(

This, this exactly. These characters may start as rather antisocial, but that would gradually change as they open up more to their teammates.

c3p-0h said
Edited again.

Let me know when you're ready again with the final changes as suggested by Kiddo

Harine, totally accepted. Love the semblance

Zombehs, its really nice, I like the weapon the best, the semblance is used to confine these two? Wouldn't it be easier if it was a visible/spectral chain that only the users could touch? This would allow for better utilization and planning in combat for both players.

Everyone who has had their character sheets accepted, please post said character sheets here

Scarifar said
It's been 3 days since we started this, I think it's high time the ship lands and we go explore Beacon.

thats true, I'll have the ship land in a bit then.

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Name: Khalis Severin

Age: 16

Gender: Male

Race: Human

Appearance:

Khalis

(No image yet, but I promise I will add one once I make it) Khalis is very tall and thin, but still lean in figure. He has slightly spiky pure white hair, sharp cyan eyes, and pale skin. His clothing consists of a black sleeveless shirt underneath a thick white unzipped coat with jet black pants. Khalis wears thick heavy boots, and there is an unusual insignia upon the back of his cloak.

Personality: Khalis is a jerk. Plain and simple as that. He lives purely for spite and his own amusement, often playing little practical jokes here and there, poking fun at people and making snarky sarcastic comments. All this he does with an innocent yet sinister grin. He never means to go too far, however, though he almost always does. When it comes to friends, he is caring and thoughtful, but usually mischievous. Always suave and graceful, he hardly makes any sort of fumble and is difficult to catch off guard.

Weapons:

Touketsu Kanashimi

(Will probably redo later) Khalis' favoured weapon of choice, this scythe is made purely of hardened ice, crafted through use of Dust allowing him to conjure it at will.
He can also change its shape into that of a violin, one which when played emits visible sound waves which rush through the air like an arrow, damaging where it strikes.

Semblance:

Frost Phase

Khalis is capable of making his entire body phase through objects as he pleases, emitting an unusual aura of frost as he moves and freezes whatever he passes through. He can phase through almost any object he desires, and can channel this ability through his hands allowing his scythe and even people he grabs onto to move through objects as he does.

Strengths: Very quick reactions, swift and graceful movements, difficult to taunt and grapple. Very optimistic.

Weaknesses: Moderately weak and fragile, low Aura, trouble making friends

Theme Song:

RWBY: Deep Blue (Character deposit)

This is where we'll be dumping the completed and accepted character sheets. Only post your character here if they have been approved.
The character submission can be found here.

Participants

1: Gerald Tarius (LaXnyd)
2: Schwarz Nacht (Forsythe)
3: Francesca Stahl (Pyromania99)
4: Michelle Kine (Scarifar)
5: Kael Lordonos (pyre101)
6: Ravira Tudios (Kiddo) Co-Moderator
7: Perry Symund (Zombehs)
8: Kuhaku Kuroshi (harinezumikouken)

Waiting List:
1: Khalis Severin (Henzukaya) Moderator and Owner
2: Elrios Chung (LokiLeo789)