@Dark Light Well make sure you put in an approximate power level comparison. Most people have chosen characters around the Namek Saga so you will probably want to choose something around there as well. If you choose a main character for comparison make sure to name the time period you're judging them by. Don't think about it too hard but I will need to see something there before I can accept it.
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Desktop profile login won't work. Coincidence that Windows 7 is no longer supported on same day? Consider me doubtful.
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I'm having way too much fun with my Legend of Zelda Encylopedia. This is the game that got me into roleplaying so have a lot invested in it's lore and stories. Too bad can't have all the games too.
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@Double Returning from another mission is a good enough reason, though it is not like you have to force yourself to have just finished a mission. Maybe you were on the other side of the Scathers' current planet before your got the message and just now got back to the ship. Heck, ya maybe just got back from the small vacation after a mission if ya want. In any event just need to find a way to get back to the Scather to accept the mission and you'll be good to go.
@Dark Light Hmm, yes I think I like this version better than the previous one, nice to see someone going the magic route. Sets up some interesting backstory that could become plot down the road too. The only thing I'm a bit worried about is the ??? power level, which somewhat makes sense for a magical character as their power is different, but just got to make sure this doesn't become an issue down the road. As long as you don't start 'magically' fluctuating in strength, unless a plot point is hashed out before hand, I think this character could work.
Would be nice to at least have a rough idea of what his power level is at though to be better able to write battle scenes, especially if you ever end up PVPing someone else.
Gonna think about it a bit more but certainly leaning toward acceptance.
@Dark Light Hmm, yes I think I like this version better than the previous one, nice to see someone going the magic route. Sets up some interesting backstory that could become plot down the road too. The only thing I'm a bit worried about is the ??? power level, which somewhat makes sense for a magical character as their power is different, but just got to make sure this doesn't become an issue down the road. As long as you don't start 'magically' fluctuating in strength, unless a plot point is hashed out before hand, I think this character could work.
Would be nice to at least have a rough idea of what his power level is at though to be better able to write battle scenes, especially if you ever end up PVPing someone else.
Gonna think about it a bit more but certainly leaning toward acceptance.
@WanderingDragon
The Karkonites at the receiving sight were a bit startled when the human appeared as they were not expecting anyway else; however, once they noticed the Yardrat with him they realized where he had come from. The Karkonite that had been grabbed struggled for just a moment before noticing everyone else had stopped panicking. He settled down and turned to look at the human.
"Oh, you must be reinforcements! Thank goodness I was afraid when had been suddenly attacked from behind for a moment! Anyway, the others have already gone off to Sunshi Village to fight the slavers! Our communications have been jammed so that explains why no information about the enemy has gotten out before now. Oh right you just got here, they went that way!" The Karkonite quickly pointed Spyder in the village's direction.
There was something off about the way the machines acted, it appeared that as long as the Karkonites were alive that was all that matter with the rough way they handled things. With how many had appeared at once it was pretty obvious why none of the even smaller villages had managed to have anyone escape, the riders had radar equipped and communication jamming so escape by the rather low technology level of their opponents was nearly impossible, as long as there weren't too many to capture at once. The riders themselves were not especially strong by a martial artists standards, but they were robust and certainly much stronger than most planet's general population, but it was their equipment that really set them a step above.
Three more bikes were loaded up and sped off toward the cliff side as quickly as possible, the riders themselves stayed behind to run interference and attempt to capture more natives. Brackus crackled with annoyance as he watched the bikes drive off with their captives, unfortunately he had no good way to stop them without potentially killing their new captives, so there was only one option left. He flew after the closest bike, raised a small gun and shot at the bike's back. Instead of a bullet, a small tracker glued itself to the bumper as the bike sped off, as they were machines the best way to keep track of the bike would be electronically, as ki would be no good as the Karkonites' levels were too low to effectively trace.
He returned to the battlefield and started to buzz around the riders, striking out with his sword when he got in range. He dove down on one and quickly lobbed off its head, then turned and fired a ki blast into the chest of another, downing it instantly as it failed to guard in time. A third managed to stick him with a baton, causing him to careen out of control and smash into the ground, the electric impulse causing his muscles to spasm.
"Currsssed machine." He hissed as the rider tried to strike him again with the baton but he managed to grab its arm, holding it in place while he ran it through with his sword. "We should finish this up as quickly as possible so we can chase after those vehicles."
@Potemking@Double
The Karkonites at the receiving sight were a bit startled when the human appeared as they were not expecting anyway else; however, once they noticed the Yardrat with him they realized where he had come from. The Karkonite that had been grabbed struggled for just a moment before noticing everyone else had stopped panicking. He settled down and turned to look at the human.
"Oh, you must be reinforcements! Thank goodness I was afraid when had been suddenly attacked from behind for a moment! Anyway, the others have already gone off to Sunshi Village to fight the slavers! Our communications have been jammed so that explains why no information about the enemy has gotten out before now. Oh right you just got here, they went that way!" The Karkonite quickly pointed Spyder in the village's direction.
Location: Sunshi Village
Event: Battle Phase - Middle
Enemy Difficulty = Fodder
Riders x 25
There was something off about the way the machines acted, it appeared that as long as the Karkonites were alive that was all that matter with the rough way they handled things. With how many had appeared at once it was pretty obvious why none of the even smaller villages had managed to have anyone escape, the riders had radar equipped and communication jamming so escape by the rather low technology level of their opponents was nearly impossible, as long as there weren't too many to capture at once. The riders themselves were not especially strong by a martial artists standards, but they were robust and certainly much stronger than most planet's general population, but it was their equipment that really set them a step above.
Three more bikes were loaded up and sped off toward the cliff side as quickly as possible, the riders themselves stayed behind to run interference and attempt to capture more natives. Brackus crackled with annoyance as he watched the bikes drive off with their captives, unfortunately he had no good way to stop them without potentially killing their new captives, so there was only one option left. He flew after the closest bike, raised a small gun and shot at the bike's back. Instead of a bullet, a small tracker glued itself to the bumper as the bike sped off, as they were machines the best way to keep track of the bike would be electronically, as ki would be no good as the Karkonites' levels were too low to effectively trace.
He returned to the battlefield and started to buzz around the riders, striking out with his sword when he got in range. He dove down on one and quickly lobbed off its head, then turned and fired a ki blast into the chest of another, downing it instantly as it failed to guard in time. A third managed to stick him with a baton, causing him to careen out of control and smash into the ground, the electric impulse causing his muscles to spasm.
"Currsssed machine." He hissed as the rider tried to strike him again with the baton but he managed to grab its arm, holding it in place while he ran it through with his sword. "We should finish this up as quickly as possible so we can chase after those vehicles."
@Potemking@Double
Riders x 22
I'll try to get this back up and going soon, but some things I need to take care of first.
@Double The clothes beam would be considered a magic technique so ya, it would have to be a technique, although now that I'm thinking about it...Namekian regeneration doesn't have to be counted as a technique as pretty much every Namekian has a that ability, Giant Transformation on the other hand does need to be a technique as only a few Namekians have been able to utilize it. So if you want, you can replace regeneration with another technique.
Hm. I have an idea: What if Jaden just wrapped up another mission or task and is sent over? Would be less jarring than just saying he was always there.
That could work, can have the mission as a sort of open status so others can join as long as they have access to the Yardrat instant transmission service.
@Double Hey good to see a familiar face! Liking the background for the character. Looking pretty good, I got no complaints, he's hired!
@WanderingDragon Well at the moment it makes the most sense to find a way for your character to join the current mission. Either we can swap you out with one of my inactives and just say you were there all the time or else find some reason for him to join up. If we go the already there route you can just jump right into the action right away.
@WanderingDragon Ok looks good for the most part, although in your reworked background, might want to fix your first sentence and your last sentence, kind of missing a word or two. Fix that up and I think you will be good to go.
@WanderingDragon I think the character looks good for the most part. The only thing I'm not sure of at the moment is the gravity control part of the powers. Telekinesis is a Dragon Ball power so it's certainly not unusual, well just have to make sure it is not very effective against the tougher opponents and should be fine.
@WanderingDragon Konatsians would work too.
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