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Justric said
Jack is talking to (not "with", just "to" or possibly even "at") Bill in the mining bay about getting help to build a still.


Honestly Justric, I don't know that anyone talks "with" Jack - I don't know there's a single person on the Copernicus who knows his esoteric language!

And that'll be great Idle - looking forward to it. I'll try to get a post up for Pauline tonight, after I finish my homework here. Might not be long, but still... Progress? haha
I'll think about the best way to go about it then, I just know I don't want to have Bree perpetually chasing after Ethan (especially not after the nationwide chase we just wrapped up? But I see you understand that, of course). If she were desperate enough for a lead, she might approach him - I could see that. But he might have to be reasonable right back, and realize Bree wouldn't approach him if the circumstances didn't warrant (not, of course, that there wouldn't be a lot of back and forth on that as well).
Port Orchard almost had her beat. It was here the trail turned cold for a few days more, and Bree was damn near at her wit's end. Whatever else he'd done in that small town beyond dumping the stolen car? Well it was precious damn little, and she was stopped cold with only the smallest breath of a hint running through her head, a conviction she'd already shared with Riddick alone on their motel bed in Port Orchard.

North. The green-eyed man was going north, and there didn't seem to be all that much deliberation in his travels from what she could see. No one he was meeting, no family or friends offering safe haven or help. Just him, the green-eyed man traveling almost as if the crow would fly, first west and now? Now perhaps north, though not to Canada - not yet at least. Well, certainly not by the most direct route that she could see - nor even the fastest. If 'North of the Border' had been his thoughts, why not take the car so much further than he did? Why abandon it in Port Orchard and, by all appearances, move on foot?

Bree had no answers, but at the very least she had a direction, and from Port Orchard it even by-passed the city of Seattle.

So, north. From Silverdale to Poulsbo, all along the little piece of coastline as due north as the small, windy highway would take her and her black cat in their rental car. Port Gamble and Port Ludlow, then Port Hadlock and still, still somehow Bree knew - she just knew - the green-eyed man wouldn't stop until he simply couldn't go anymore, not another footstep more until -

- Well, until he hit ocean. And she somehow doubted even her uncanny green-eyed man could walk on water. Riddy was already safely ensconced in the room of the beautiful seaside bed and breakfast she'd just splurged on. God, she was sick of crappy, bottom-of-the-barrel semi-sanitary motel rooms.

And so Bree stood precariously on the edge of the ferry docks, grey eyes sweeping north, ever north. A cool ocean wind played lightly in the lengths of her auburn hair, teasing the ends about her face as if inviting her to come away, to play a game with the breezes and the zephyrs in the low-hanging clouds overhead. Bree laughed at the thought, and took a deep breath of that sea air in her lungs. The sound of gulls screaming nearby and the gentle roar of the surf filled every last sense and once - just this once and for the first time since she'd begun her obsessive, single-minded hunt, Bree let all fretful worry for the green-eyed man fall away into the tides, like the ashes of a dead man released over the waves.

She knew she had to go back into town, take her grainy black and white photos to the two bars worthy of the name here - probably make a quick stop in the West Coast version of the Mayberry PD as a courtesy at the least.

Best to have a beer first, at the least.

Bree would have preferred to walk the distance from the ferry to the pub - or at least the first of the bars actually worth the name - but some small, professional part of her soul hadn't been lulled to sleep by the sweet peace of the Pacific. And so she drove her rental car to the small parking lot, because you could never be too sure when luck just might break your way, for the first time in a very, very long time.

There was a well-used dart board on the wall, and Bree was half-tempted to try her long-unused skills from her college days when she'd been something of a shark in her time. But a rather pretty young woman emerged from the back, and Bree collected herself quickly with a warm smile and a nod of her head.

Her voice low and warm, she smiled as she approached the woman, arm outstretched as she stood on a knee on one of the stools, one hand offered over the bar. "Good afternoon, I'm glad I caught someone here. Agent Walsh, Bree Walsh. FBI. Just call me Bree... " She reached into the inner pocket of her worn leather jacket, showing her credentials to the young woman. "I'm looking to speak with someone, if I can find him."

Bree put the credentials back into her wallet after the young woman had a moment to reassure herself that yes, yes she really was talking to an honest-to-goodness federal law enforcement agent. She pulled those photos from her other pocket, these copies still fairly crisp and clear and only folded twice thus far. Still, Bree folded them out on the bar, the surveillance photos of the green-eyed man, the clearest of them.

"Have you seen him about, by any chance?" she asked, her voice still pitched just as friendy and open as you please. There were only two reactions to female cops, and one way or the other they almost always boiled down to either 'extremely positive' or 'extremely negative.' After coming off the natural ecstasy of the seashore, she still found it in her to pray for the former.

From day to night, the pretty woman's face fell, and Bree knew two things at once: her instincts had been right, dead on since Port Orchard; and that this was likely to end in the latter, whether she would or no. Bree's soft reassurances seemed to fall on deaf ears, that she only wanted to talk to him, to find him and no, no she really couldn't give her any details because confidentiality, privacy, ongoing investigation and on and on.

She didn't like it, the lie that fell so easily from her lips, startling the green-eyed man's whereabouts from Josie with the firm, unwavering assurance that she would be charged with the interference of an ongoing investigation if she didn't tell her where to find this man. Now. Because there was no ongoing investigation at all - at least nothing official. Nothing she'd lose her job over either, if anyone 'official' found out - but it would certainly be the beginning of the end of her career.

Even so, the adrenaline shot through her body like a bolt of pure electricity, the obsession wrapping its serpent coils around her again and squeezing 'til she was damn near breathless. She was close, so damn close! And Josie caved, giving her the address to some guy named "Tom," the green-eyed man was supposed to be living with for now, sharing a house almost no distance at all from this very bar.

Bree gave the woman a cold 'thanks' and a warning not to get cute about trying to warn anyone off, leaving the bar at a half-run back to her car. The GPS told her she didn't have far to go at all, and she pulled up a door or two down from the house where her green-eyed man was supposed to reside. She knew full well she ought to surveil the place, find entrances front and back, the location of all windows and any cellar egress, and she made a swift pass about the house before finally standing on the porch. Her knock was firm, even if her knees suddenly felt shaky and cold as a glass of icy waters.
Bree absently scratched the velvety soft ears of the black cat beside her, letting the rumble of the purr reverberate through the motel mattress soothe her. Stretched out on her belly, propped up on her elbows as her legs slowly, almost lazily, swung up and then down, she might have seemed more a teenager than a grown woman, reading intently through the latest issue of Seventeen or Glamour.

And though undeniably handsome, the man she studied went well out of his way to stay under the radar, avoiding any notice, any attention like the plague. The surveillance photos spread out before her, her free hand thoughtfully tapped one, and then the other, as she studied the printouts for the hundredth time at least, burning that face into her memory.

The pictures were black and white of course, but Bree's gaze saw those green eyes anyway, whether she would or no. She saw those eyes as she stared at the photos, some shitty cable show droning on in the background like white noise in this no-name motel. She even saw them when she closed her eyes at night, praying for no dreams and too afraid taking any of the drugs to keep them at bay would dull her edge. She saw then through the explosion of blood and bone on the other side of Victor's exploding skull, boring into her own.

Sometimes those eyes were wide with surprise, horror - even fright - and sometimes they bled. Other times they were... Cold. Calculating and alien, inhuman somehow and Bree woke screaming, clutching at the scar on her chest.

The FBI had put her on 'mandatory personal leave.' The department psychiatrist was apparently unimpressed with her insistence they needed to find this green-eyed man, the man responsible for Victor's death she knew - and no, no he didn't pull the trigger, and no, she couldn't explain why no one else seemed to recall the guy, but damn it all he was there... HE WAS THERE!

A few jokes floated around the office about taking a long vacation, lying about on a beach with some umbrella drink and a well-tanned pool boy...

Haha. Yeah. Hilarious. But if her bosses thought enforced leave was going to keep her still? Well, their first mistake had been not taking her badge and creds and gun.

And the green-eyed man's first mistake had been thinking banks really were no more than an amalgamation of automatons, that if he pulled money just under the reporting limits no one would notice, nor report what he was so obviously trying to conceal in the amounts. It had been a serious long shot, checking the financials - and more than worth the face time. Bree had a name, though she somehow doubted it was his real one, and several of these slightly grainy photographs to hold in her hands, real physical proof of his existence, that the green-eyed man was so much more than some phantom fever dream. Almost, almost she was tempted to run these back to her office, leap on her boss' desk and shove them under his nose.

Thankfully wisdom won out over smug satisfaction. Even in her excitement, she knew this was no real proof of anything at all. Bree could almost hear their voices in her head, the incredulous laughter and the condescending concern that made her teeth grate. 'Congratulations Agent Walsh, you've discovered a dark-haired man withdrawing money from his bank account! Great work there, but if you'd really like to impress us? See if you can convince him to join you on that goddamned beach you're supposed to be sitting on right now, and pay for one of those umbrella drinks? Oh, and yeah... Leave the creds and gun on your way the hell outta here... '

The green-eyed man was good. Really good. He understood all the principles of living off the grid, but one it seemed.

Cameras. Videorecording was a fact of life, from the bank to the local 7-11 to Wal-mart parking lots to traffic cameras in work zones. She surmised he'd be staying in the States - this much cash, and no safe deposit box opened for passports and the like? Yeah, he was staying here, just like Victor had. And there probably wouldn't be any planes - the TSA had made customs and security a serious bitch. So bus then... Maybe trains? FBI creds and a shiny badge opened doors that would have otherwise been firmly shut in her face.

Bree remembered the first time she'd seen him again, not on still photographs but on some grainy surveillance video in the DC train station. And it wasn't his face - no, it was the way he moved, furtive movements yet quick and precise as he boarded the train to Chicago. Slowly, tentatively, one fingertip traced his outline on the screen, as if somehow, some way she might actually reach out to touch him now...

Bree had almost lost him in San Francisco, the ache in her chest throbbing with panic she kept well-hidden, buried right alongside the growing obsession she knew damn well had long since turned 'unhealthy' - until the stolen car. The gas station surveillance video told her it was her green-eyed man who'd quit this shitty part-time job, and then inexplicably disappeared yet again, like some hunted animal.

Which he technically was - but how could he know? Or was Bree only flattering herself, that she was the only one pursuing the green-eyed man?

The question simply... Didn't matter. Not anymore. Because the car had been recovered to the north, in Port Orchard. This lovely little town where she and Riddick had landed in this less-than-charming-but-affordable motel that accepted cats, their entire winding, twisting pursuit paid for out of her own savings.

"All the way across the country... Now north... What do you think Riddy? Making for Canada?" She took a sip of her bottled water, looking curiously at her cat with a small, tired half-smile.

For his part, the black cat only glanced up at her, serene amber eyes inscrutable as he purred.
All righty hon, but I have to be honest and say that Bree was never the type to guilt anyone into anything - that's just not the character I wrote. Of course Ethan will come back to work with the FBI one way or another, and then Tanner will assuredly not like it - we may just have to brainstorm a separate idea for how that happens. Bree's not the whiny, needy type What circumstance would bring Ethan himself back into her world perhaps, that he would make the offer to work with her again?
"No really Michael, thank you. You've done more than enough - everything. Really." It'd have been a lie if Bree tried to play like having her baby brother around was a nuisance, the almost bashful little half-smile that lit her face saying all she just... Couldn't. 'I love you Mike, I've missed you. I hate that I only see you Christmas and Easter - if I'm lucky. I hate that the woman you love thinks I'm low-rent white trash, a reminder of a place she wants to pretend you never came from too. And I hate that I can't change that.'

"And thanks for watching Riddick too," she said softly, cuddling the enormous ebony cat in her arms just a little closer to her chest, ignoring the ache beneath the dressings as she bent to kiss the top of his great, fuzzy head. The young woman sank slowly into one of her kitchen chairs, leaning back with a soft sigh, just so glad to be home again.

Well, even if home wasn't much more than a small, one bedroom studio apartment, all exposed brick and industrial, easy-to-clean and maintain, just like she liked to her little piece of the world. Low maintenance, little to mind, everything streamlined and in its place. No doubt some psychoanalyst would have a field day with this little... Quirk? Something about how order kept the chaos at bay. The more of her world she controlled, the less the risk for anything untoward, anything unpredictable, anything uncontrollable or hideously random could ever come from the clear blue sky.

Heh. See how well that had worked out?

A little more than two weeks ago, she'd taken a ricocheted bullet off her witness' brain pan, straight to her unprotected chest. There were just so many things that should have never happened that day, what she remembered of it at least , what she had oh-so-meticulously pieced together of those seconds that had changed her whole life while counting the tiny holes in a single rectangle of white drop ceiling above her. Nothing had been like it should have been, now was it?

Giving Victor her vest - that had been dumb, considering where the bullet wound up after all. But it had just been a... A reassuring thing really, she'd hoped. Anything to get him to stop all the waterworks, to feel a little better. Because any snipers should have long-since cleared out in the face of two separate FBI SWAT, yet they [oh-so] obviously had not. But she might have caught on faster, might have picked up somehow or other on the danger waiting outside, if she hadn't been so distracted inside by the green-eyed man. She should have... Done something. Seen something. Felt something that to this very moment remained more so infuriatingly elusive that she'd shed frustrated tears all alone in the night, staring up at the hospital room ceiling and giving herself the most painful headaches, a frisson of agony shooting through her chest as she sobbed, and then tried like hell not to.

But it was no less than she deserved.

Her assumption, her sloppiness, had gotten her shot after all. It was inexcusable incompetence had gotten Victor dead.

But that was an internal indictment - the only kind that really counted in the end. Not a single one of the internal investigations that had been initiated said as much of course, or lay blame exactly where she knew it belonged. Words like 'unavoidable' and 'act of God' and 'unpredictable incident' irked the ever-loving shit out of, right up there with 'unbelievably lucky' and 'angels watching over you' and 'nothing less than a miracle.'

Not that she could blame them, the doctors and the surgeons and the nurses. Not really. They'd busted their asses to make it all right, to somehow get that piece of shredded hollow point out of her chest, to close her up One eight of an inch from her aorta, they said. One eighth of an inch away from certain death, bleeding out long before even the fastest ambulance in Richmond would have gotten to her.

"Not a thing Bree, you know that," Michael said, leaning over to caress the top of the black cat's soft head, behind the ears the way all cats like as the motorboat of a purr revved up. A real ginger, her brother, with their father's deep blue eyes, corners all crinkled with a sweet, familiar smile. "I think the big guy's actually started to like me a little. Well you know, after we got that whole 'pissing on my gym bag' thing out of the way the first day."

Bree laughed, though it hurt. "Yeah, he's a little... Ah... 'Territorial.' Something like that."

Michael looked down at his big sister, studying her thoughtfully for a moment. "You don't have to go back to work though, you know. Just, well... Take some time off. Come stay with me and Lyndsay." He laughed, shrugging his shoulders helplessly. "Riddick too. It'll be fun. Hey, watching her break out in hives would make you smile - c'mon now, don't deny it!"

Bree laughed even harder, wincing this time with the pain. "You know you're the best Michael," she said when she could finally catch her breath again, or something really, really close. She'd turned down the offer of the oxycodone prescription, not wanting to let any of that vaunted control slip through her fingers - not even for a drug that could take the edge off this pain. Bree had the feeling she'd begin to regret that choice, somewhere deep in the night when she hadn't been able to sleep for hours. But for now? For now, she knew damn well she had it coming.

"Yeah, you are but no... I have to clean some shit up at work, you know, reports and briefings and all that."

Identifying that green-eyed man. Figuring out what the hell he had to do with Victor's death - and he did. I don't know how, I don't know why, or what the hell he managed to pull off - but I will. Damn straight, I sure will...

"Besides, the minute Riddick pisses on some Prada shoes, falls asleep inside a Coach bag or sharpens his claws on one of those 'real antique' Queen Anne chairs? Yeah, our welcome will be worn thin - and so will yours, for sure. I don't think 'irreconcilable feline differences' is a real thing on divorce papers." She winked at her brother mischievously.
Good bright and beautiful afternoon all! I'd just like to do a quick roundup if we could, where everyone is at for the moment in the story, a quick role call of a sort? Simply to see who anticipates talking with whom, or is in the middle of a post or collaboration - or plans to be? For myself, I know I plan to have Abby speak with Reece, and Pauline do... Whatever Pauline does? ;)
In the very instant Victor's head exploded in a shower of blood and brain and bone, Bree's whole world blew apart.

One moment, she was leaving the casino with Victor, Murray 'escorting' the strange, green-eyed man right in front of them with extreme prejudice. And the next... ?

The next, her ears were ringing with the rifle's retort despite the distance, a giant's hand having picked her up like a play thing and slammed her into the cold brick wall of the decrepit building. The back of her head slammed with a stunning force against it, only the helmet she wore over the balaclava keeping her from a bloody mess reminiscent of Victor's own as his body crumpled to the sidewalk.

Bree slid down the wall to the ground, her legs splaying out before her, leaving her sitting there limp and listless, she thought a little crazily in this whole new slow-motion world, like an enormous, discarded doll. And that is when the pain began to hit, exploding from a pinpoint of excruciating pain into a blossom of white hot agony that spread from her collar bone to her chest, her neck and then to the very roots of her hair. Her left arm simply... Stopped. She could not feel it, move it, her gloved hand lying limp and useless in her lap as she moaned softly.

Somehow the fingers of Bree's right hand fumbled at the straps of her helmet, weakly tossing it to the ground. She snatched clumsily at the balaclava, pulling it over her head and ripping it away from her face pale, gasping. Bree felt like a fish out of water, her every breath torturous, painful and utterly worthless no matter how much she tried to gulp into her lungs. There just didn't seem to be anymore air left in her world.

Wide, disbelieving eyes dipped toward her useless arm. The whole left side of her chest, just below her collarbone, was too shiny, too bright, slick and blacker than her uniform should be... Oh God...

Some small, still functioning part of her brain whispered something about a ricochet, obviously a ricochet from the sniper's bullet through Victor's brain pan. Something about how stupid she'd been, to wrap her bullet-proof vest around the man with only half a head now - and wasn't that going to be a closed casket funeral, hmm? Instinctively Bree shoved the cloth of the balaclava into the bleeding hole in her chest, knowing she had to stop... Stop the bleeding and...

She screamed - or at least she thought she did. The Bree inside her head sure did, the pain cocooning her in a torturous veil. She could sense more than see Murray rushing to her side, ignoring the obviously dead man and shouting something about an agent... An agent down...

The edges of her vision began to blur, blacken, her eyes losing all sense of color, all colors bleeding to dirty shades of charcoal and black - all colors that was, but for a flash of the most intense green eyes she'd ever seen...
Conversation sounds fine to me, especially since I haven't even "met" this Tanner yet? But we do need a good villain, so whoever he is, I wouldn't be averse to it after hearing what you have in notes and such.

As for the plans to take down the crime boss, I really have to pull myself together on that one - I was just more waiting to see how Ethan would enter into working for the FBI in the first place, and taking it from there.
AND, hopefully in before work! Doubtless this afternoon I'll make a gajillion or so edits, but there it is in the main form now, as is! *grins*
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