@Lugubrious Why did I get nothing? I was there!
I think what you've got would actually work fine if you made the location the Ruins instead of the Barge, as in he's 'coming to' in the flowerbed that broke everyone's fall through the Chasm as the fight with the monsters concluded, having been stunned by the fall himself.
By the by, just so you know, I update the whole group on a weekly basis on Sunday nights. We can't afford to wait on every last person before I do so if we're to make progress, so it's possible to miss out if you don't post that week.
>I'm in the kind of mood that one gets after looking at surrealist and dystopian art. Meaning I want to roleplay in a dreamscape where the player characters are lucid dreamers, capable of controlling the dream, who explore and shape the dream they are in and the nightmares that undercut it.
>But I don't want it to be human characters. I want to lean into the strangeness of it all.