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Hey, you know what's funnier than 24? 25.
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Vis' bounty is based on the fact that he murdered a Marine. Killing of criminals, not much attention was directed towards that.

As for Yoki, the crime he had committed is considered quite minuscule compared to other criminal acts. In reality, it doesn't really deserve a bounty. However, the Noble he had stolen from had requested it. The authorities ended up doing as they were told since they can't really deny a Noble of their requests.
After some thought, I've decided the bounty for both Vis (3,000,000) and Yoki (3,500,000).
Sorry for the sudden change.
@Brodz
No reason why you can't. Come up with a CS and lets see what happens from there.
Duthguy
As for your CS, I think there are a few coding errors in the Bounty and Inventory sections. Also, I noticed a few grammatical and phrasing issues, but otherwise its okay. Not doing this just to point out your mistakes, but it would be cool if gave these things more attention than usual. Regarding his bounty, I wouldn't say that much. Probably 5,000,000 or something close to that.

Anyway, character sheet is good to go. Yuki is accepted. By the way, just some things to think about for the future. With further mastery of his DF, he can make use of partial transformations like the one "Phoenix" Marco made use of. And as of Awakened Zoans, we'll talk about that in the future.

Feel free to post in the IC.
After every posts, I'll give you guys an update.

@Duthguy
I'm from the Philippines. So my timezone's like +8. Similar to Hong Kong and Singapore I think. Not sure if that matters though. Will review your CS in a few.
Well. That sounds really interesting. It sounds pretty crude now, not lying, but its definitely viable.
If you need help on the mechanics, feel free to ask. I've got an idea or two.
I-Am-X said
Oh damn, I think that's just as good or if not better than a trait (it even fits in with the fact my picture has 2 swords).Yes! Thank you xD

The immune to rusting and extreme heat would be it's be its only specialties and the name meaning isn't literal?But man, to have such a great sword, exciting. Perfect for kurama. XD

I think Kurama will have a secondary goal now, on the side of attempting to finding zoro and becoming the best swordsman but to collect as many Wazamono err Meito swords!
Yeah, its just a really durable sword.

Interesting goal. You'll probably like this first arc.

thanatosDefiant said
I think the trait is great, especially because it means Rem's physical strength'll be pretty top notch. So thank you! :D
You're welcome man. Thank you as well.

DAWNSTAR said
That trait is perfect for Vis. The development of techniques is going to be much easier now. I am more than certain that our characters will end up in Skypiea sooner or later and when we are there I will have the dial upgrades applied to Vis's katanas. I am going to go with the mist upgrade seeing as this new trait will make it possible to produce the mist and then launch it away with the compressed air. Its physical state would look akin to an arc of moving clouds.
Sorry, but I still don't think that's possible.

According to the manga "Dials based on clouds are rendered useless on the Blue Sea due to the inability of the clouds to survive at that atmospheric temperature and pressure."
But if you find a way to bypass such a flaw, then by all means, go for it.
Before I forget, I planned to give each of you guys a certain bonus for being the first four to have character sheets. Just to show my appreciation for your rapid participation.

@DAWNSTAR - Appreciated the fact that you fixed the coding in your CS too. Add this to the Trait section.

Power of Destruction - Vis is able to transfer the force of a cut over a distance of 5 feet by swinging his sword at high speed, creating a blade of compressed air.

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The distance becomes larger as Vis becomes more powerful/skilled.

@thanatosDefiant - You posted first among the four of you, thus you deserve a reward. For your character's trait, you get this.

Heavy Lifting - Rem is able to effortlessly lift a quarter of a ton and when pushed to his limits, is able to carry object weighing half a ton.

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@Daisuke - Coding in your CS is good but you still didn't edit out Magma Combat. Anyway, you get this or a trait.
Master of Anatomy - Jannikki is well versed in the physical structure and composition of the human body. He can pinpoint certain weak spots and notice injuries, both internal and external, that most tend to overlook.

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@I-Am-X - You were the only one that didn't need to be told regarding the coding of one's CS. For that, you get no traits. You get this instead.

Yamaoroshi - One of the fifty Ryo Wazamano grade swords. It literally means "Wind Blowing down from the Mountain" and is immune to rust and extreme heat.
As of now, no need to.


Chapter I: The Town of the Beginning and the End


It was a cold and mist-filled dawn in Loguetown, a city on the Polestar Islands in the East Blue. The air was humid and moist as glass windows on most of the structures appeared fogged and hazy. Along with this, morning dew dribbled across the surface of plants and various greenery, creating a scenery that embodied both aspects of calmness and tranquility.

At least that’s what most would think.

Mornings such as this one was quite uncommon in Loguetown. With such a sight, most would see this as sign of good fortune or a premonition of prosperity. However, the locals knew better. Every time this occurred, an event of great significance usually takes place; whether beneficial or detrimental to them, that they could never predict.

Suddenly, the spectacle that was Loguetown immediately turned eerie and unnerving as a hauntingly beautiful melody, from what sounded to be a violin, echoed and resonated throughout the island.

However, many of the island's inhabitants were still lost in the realm of sleep thus only a few were able to appreciate and/or rue the melancholic yet captivating tune. But alas, this was quickly put to an end as the music was abruptly ceased. Rays from the rising sun had begun to shine down and pierce through the thick blanket of mist that concealed the town, revealing what actually was taking place unbeknownst to the slumbering residents of the island.

Several ships of varying sizes had docked unto the port of Loguetown with a few others still out at sea; some were simple dinghies, others were grander in appearance, while the rest bore Jolly Rogers. Along with this, numerous suspicious individuals had managed to enter the confines of the city and began to interact with the locals.

Dressed in civilian attire, was a man common in appearance and demeanor. A person that was in no way out of the ordinary and definitely plain as could be. He was quiet as he continued to observe his surroundings, noticing the different new faces that filled his town. He continued to walk, trying his best to remain cool and composed, but it was obvious that he was uneasy and his body began to fidget and perspire at an uncontrolled manner. Suddenly, away from the prying eyes of those around him, he had pulled out a Den Den Mushi from the inner pocket of his coat and spoke.

“Si-sir, I be-be-belieeve the ru-ru-rumors were t-t-true. W-w-we were t-too late. The c-c-city of Loguetown ha-has been i-i-inva-vaded by p-p-pirates.” Said the young ensign as his voice continued to tremble in fear.

On the other end of the line, the initial response of whoever it was the marine was talking to, was a mere prolonged sigh. But soon enough, a proper reply had followed.

“I guess we have no choice then. Report back to headquarters and prepare yourself. We will be taking action quite soon.”

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