JackDLemmy

Naruto Universe Roleplay anyone?

How familiar with Naruto does someone need to be to participate in this?

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@Geyter

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@Geyter

Ah okay. I see what was going on. I was thinking of electromagnetism and you were talking about magnetism. I get it now ^^;

Everything else makes sense too.

I just got out of a full shift and it's late. So I'll edit everything tomorrow (I'm off).
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Thanks for the input (and patience.)

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@Geyter

@JackDLemmy Alright. From what I get from the fruit is that it's similar to Kidd's, but instead of manipulating electromagnetism, it's more of the concept of magnetism. The idea in itself is fine for now.

The nerfs and conditions I was previously taking about would involve it's area of effect (AoE) and on how it's activated.

For it's AoE, I'll limit it to single objects. So basic hand held weapons, cannon balls, then large rocks at most. Charging up an average sized person would be difficult and take a significant amount of time. The stronger you get, the larger the objects it can affect. Eventually you'd get to charge up larger areas such as land.

The conditions I was talking about would be how you would trigger the charge. You'd require physical touch. At present, it would definitely limit what you can do, but that's the point.

A good reference point would be Shiki and his Levitation Fruit. It's very similar to what you want. However, instead of electromagnetism with pushing/pulling, it's just manipulating the things he levitates. The area he effects is incredibly massive, affecting entire islands.

Anyway, that's about it. Physical contact let's you assign a neutral charge. No technique needed. Changing it either positive or negative requires techniques.

Also, what do you mean regarding your mentions on kinetic energy?

@Geyter

I'm sorry. I'm a bit confused by the first part. What did you mean by the concept of magnetism? I could've been mistaken but I thought that an item have a positive or negative charge was what caused electrons and protons to be pulled/ repelled, which was what electromagnetism was? (I haven't really studied much on physics so I'm really curious.)

I'm fine with a single item at the moment, to start with, but would that carry out through the character's advancement with the devil fruit?

I'm completely fine with a charge being limited to small objects to start with.

Requiring physical touch works too.

Well kinetic energy is movement. Normally if someone hits someone else the force of the blow actually disperses equally between the two parties. The issue with that is my character isn't physically strong and so if she were to use the ability, later one when heavier power came into play, she'd pull a deku and her arm would be smashed into pieces. So by adding the stipulation that force moves into the positive charge it makes it so any damage to her would be mitigated. Also put the thing it the neutral charge so she could put it on herself as a way to lower damage taken from blows she hasn't been able to put a charge on.

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@Geyter

@JackDLemmy I prefer this concept, but still needs reworking. Specifically range, area of effect, and conditions to use the ability. Also, each charge would be a different technique. If you don't mind the nerf, I can help you work on it.

@Geyter

I have no problems with the fruit being nerfed and would really appreciate the help. What did you have in mind, exactly for the fruit's limitations?

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@Geyter

@JackDLemmy Mark Mark Fruit.

It seems too vague. If you're going with the idea of assigning objects with "a charge" too create somewhat of a faux magnetism, that would be okay. You should rephrase it as such though. It kinda gives me the same vibe as "Manipulate Separation" that it doesn't tell me what it actually does aside from assigning a mark.

It seems like Color Trap but incredibly powerful since "Various Effects" just means "Anything".

@Geyter

Understood. Ultimately electromagnetism manipulation is what the fruit will be capable of, though that's a way's off. The "various effects" part was just if something else came to mind, but that is a beat of a cheat so I'll remove it. I overhauled the fruit in a way that I think is more clear as to the fruit's abilities and limits.

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@Geyter
Changed my character's fruit. How do you feel about this one?

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@Rai

@GreenGoat I think we can see the flaws easier in our own creations.

@Rai

I know I can ><

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@Geyter

@JackDLemmy That code though. Don't worry about the lack of DF users. Just go with whatever you're most comfortable with.

<Snipped quote by Rai>Surprised me too. Good for Sanji though.

@Saltwater Thief Accepted! You could remove that line under stats saying that you only have 50 points to spend though.

Will start writing up the intro. IC will be up probably sometime this weekend.

@Geyter

True, but I always liked it when there's a good mix in an rp. Just my ocd I guess.
On the bright side I'm pretty much finished with the CS. I picked the Skills, fixed the code, and just need to figure out three more skills. Which I'll be able to add through the work day!

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WIP
Kind of surprised by the lack of DF users. So I'm going to change my original concept for the character's abilities now. So just need to figure out what kind of fruit goes well with a showman ^^;

Beets Lemmon

Name: Beets Lemmon
Age: 20
Gender: Female
Race: Human
Rank: Apprentice

Appearance:


Personality:Beets is an avid reader of fantasy materials, and is probed to flights of fantasy, and many times has trouble seeing the world in moral gray areas.

Beets idolizes heroes. To her the highest peak a human can reach is that of creating hope for future generations. She constantly compares herself to the men and women of her stories whom she wants nothing more than to emulate and often finds herself facing despair, though she'd never admit it, if she feels she's not reaching the marks of those great individuals. The desire to be a hero has also created in her a need for the spotlight, and she will go through great lengths to make sure she's the center of attention. Despite all the bravado, Beet's is highly insecure and fearful of the world. Many times she'd like nothing more than to give up and head home to live out her life comfortably on her family's farm. It's only a mixture of pride and a sense of duty which keeps her going.

She's also an unabashed pervert, and has little to no real world experience.

Background:
Beets had a good life, one of the best. Her parents weren't exactly wealthy but they were better off than the majority of people on her island home thanks to the various properties they owned, as well as a large farm that grew mangos. Beets parents were friendly, loving individuals, who though always well meaning, sheltered their daughter far too much for anyone's own good. Though, despite their best efforts, they couldn't keep every trouble away from her.

It all started with a poor man who couldn't make his rent, showing up to the family estate with old books he hoped to trade for more time. These books were filled with tales of heroes, villains, and monsters. Not wanting to be mean Beet's parents accepted the trade and moved the books into the attic which Beets quickly discovered and absorbed. Little by little she became obsessed with heroes. Though it was always just a happy fantasy until pirates finally did attack and showed her that not only there was evil in the world, but heroes were needed just the same.

When Beet's informed her parents of her plans they were firmly against it, but saw the resolution in the young woman's face, and let her go, but not on her own. They presented her with a devil fruit which a tenant had given them in exchange for a month's rent. They had no idea what it would do, but trusted fate and hoped desperately it would give the girl the luck they couldn't. With a smile she ate the fruit, and with a grimace she kept from throwing it up before telling her parents farewell and heading off to the ship which would take her to where she needed to go..

Skills:
Denka-Denka no mi(charge-charge Fruit):This fruit grants the user the ability to "Charge" an area. Which causes charged areas to change color, with the symbol of the charge at the point of the charge's creation. Currently Beets can only do this through coating a part of her body with a charge, direct contact with an object or by a charged object coming into contact with a neutral object. The size of an area can be increased during direct contact. A charge's strength can be altered by will at any point. Currently Beets is unable of changing a marked area's charge at will, but she can hold the charge passively.
There are three types of Charges:

Circus Style:Beet's own personal martial inspired by various skills observed in circus performers.
Techniques:

Positive(+)-Repels positive charges Attracts negatives. Kinetic energy moves into the positive charge
Negative(-)-Repels negative charges. Attracts positives. Kinetic energy moves out of the negative charge.
Neutral(0)- Zero charge. The effected area does not react with any form of charge. Kinetic energy disperses

Stats:

STR:5
AGI:15
PER:20
DUR:5
WIL:12

Inventory: Plenty of throwing knives

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@Geyter
Question: are the new stats going to be in the cs?