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2 yrs ago
Current Do what I do and write two novels and then have like 4 people read them B)
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2 yrs ago
We've got a certified "Bozo Down" today
2 yrs ago
Also why's everyone getting so pressed about writing perspectives like dude just go write a book lol
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Might want to pick it back up before I put it in my wallet
2 yrs ago
40k fans are like the "Can he beat Goku" guys of Science Fiction
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Literally 1984 by Jorjor Well

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lurking but drowning with school, will see what the future brings


No worries man, just keep us updated!
@Doc DoctorI added more to the response, please read them. Specifically about the 'Best killer-for-hire'
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I'd like for my character to be an American hitman who came to Neo-Tokyo under pay from some bigwig to take down the Jinrai with subterfuge.



The idea itself is intriguing, but there's a few things I want to know. The entire RP will be starting within the NSF, which means all of our characters are highly likely to be a part of said organisation. The NSF itself doesn't take on mercenaries too well so you'd have to find a way into getting them to be a part of it. How do you plan on actually getting him involved? Not only this, but as K9 is a third party group, what do you plan for them plotwise, as there is a huge emphasis, at least at the start, on the Jinrai and NSF conflict?

For instance, being paid to take down the Jinrai seems a bit unreasonable and vague as a task. The Jinrai are a large-scale militarised group made mostly from ex-special forces, nationalist members within the organisation. They aren't criminals per se. For someone to hire them, it'd be very difficult to justify why they'd send them when the NSF are more or less better made for the job. I would like to see a bit more into how you think this man and his American organisation would fit into all of this considering the Prime Minister wouldn't hire people if he has the NSF already.

Finally, if you are keeping him under a third party organisation, which can be fine, then you'd need to find alternatives to carrying so many weapons on hand. Not being aligned with the NSF could warrant massive complications in relations. The Jinrai would be a bit more accepting, but obviously this character is also against them, so that idea is currently not applicable. It feels a bit hard to justify some of the specific things that are left vague. Overall, the quality alone is very good but there are some major power issues I see in this design.

Another tidbit I realised, through an edit, is that there are some rather strange happenings within the character. For instance, him being dishonourably discharged for civil conduct is understandable, but rumours of slaying civilians seems more like something that would warrant a larger punishment than someone going "Go 'ome mate y'fookin' drunk." Personally, not to offend, this character feels like a massive powerplay that doesn't really blend well with the story we are going for. A man who is described of "matching 9/11" isn't really something I feel balances at all, not to mention how impossible he is to apparently catch.

Another way to look at it is that the NSF are an elite unit, yes, but there are likely far more skilled individuals as well. The NSF and Jinrai seems fucked by this character and have no way to stop themselves from a guy who killed an entire room in under a minute. It just seems extremely powerful and extremely detached from the story we actually are setting up, if that makes sense?
I forgot! Anyone still stumbling into this RP, the OOC is up and running!

roleplayerguild.com/topics/180126-neo…

Artwork Originally of Jason Levasseur from Moonlight Apparition, a webcomic made by one Darkhalo4321; all credit given to her.


Name
Ashton Andrews-Hyuga

Nationality
Japanese-American

Age
16, requesting special permission for 'outer perimeters'. If need be, I can age him up to 18.

Sexuality
Bisexual

Birth
2015, Hokkaido.

Appearance
Description of how they look, physically as well as in their clothing. Perhaps choose on and off duty clothing as well for extra pizzazz! This should include their NSF uniform (providing you are still within them at the time of reading this), as well as their non combat uniforms and civilian wear. Later dates when factions can be swapped will obviously have heavy tolls on their appearance. Not only this, but also describe physical attributes towards their appearance, such as hair colour, body stature, eye colour and more to detail their face claim.

Ashton normally wears a resized version of whatever uniform is assigned to the NSF's tech support and cyber security personnel, but favors green-colored shirts and blue jeans as his civilian wear. He has a fondness of the color green in general as it fits with his eyes, and tries to wear it as much as possible.

Physically, Ashton is fit and athletic due to trying to exercise as much as possible when not running firewalls or controlling drones. Despite being shut in a computer room for long hours, Ashton's skin nevertheless is less pasty than expected due to him spending at least some time every day outside or in a tanning room. His hair, however, is relatively messy and frazzled, something he deliberately keeps as one concession to the sterotype. He is also rather short for his age.


Height
5'3.

Personality
Ashton Andrews-Hyuga feels great pride in his achievements and skill, and feels the need to constantly defend his position against those who would be predjudiced against him due to his age and foreign blood. This can come off as arrogance and posturing, but those who stick by Ashton would see that there is a kinder person inside who believes in the NSF and its goals... Albeit with reservations. Due to his precarious social position as a Half-Japanese, he is uncomfortable with Jinrai's existence and wants it to fall. This desire makes him braver than most people his age, but also more cautious at times because he knows he can't achieve his goals through recklessness.

Role
Cyber-security specialist with a side affinity for controlling drones.

Equipment
High-end miniature laptop the size of a notebook, a smartphone, various small electronic surveillance devices (bugs and such), a small pistol and a knife, and bulletproof under-armor beneath his normal clothes.

Previous Careers
Local School Computer Club.

Biography
Born after the destruction of Tokyo to a Japanese father and an American mother, Ashton knew what it was like to have to face prejudice for his foreign links sooner than most, and how sheer ability can overcome said prejudice up to a point. From an early age, Ashton began pushing himself in mind and body, hoping to impress classmates and teachers alike so that even if he was still disliked, he would at least be respected. And it worked. In time, he began to acquire an ever-widening circle of friends, some with Ainu heritage.

The rise of Jinrai was hard on said friends, his family, and himself, with their nationalistic propaganda infecting people who would otherwise be friendlier to them. Despite himself, Ashton felt as though it might be better for him to withdraw from people and become just another 'NEET/Hikikomori'.

That moment passed when he saw just how good he was at the computer, being able to grasp concepts that normally required years of experience and training to learn. Joining the local school's computer club, Ashton dedicated his surplus time to bettering himself further and fending off any attempts to bully him and his friends. He will not retreat dishonorably. He was not a coward. He was Japanese enough to stand his ground, damnit!

The failure of Jinrai's coup and the formation of the newly-formed NSF emboldened Ashton further, and on impulse, he decided to test the cyber-security of that organization. Now having advanced his skills in the theory and practice of hacking in the past few years, Ashton decided to go to Neo-Tokyo to demonstrate to the NSF just why they should hire a kid. Once in that city, Ashton then went to a subway station and guarded only by a small modified floating drone, promptly broke the NSF's cyber-defenses and left conspicuous marks of his presence.

Then, once said presence was noticed, he turned himself in, telling the police that his goal had always been to demonstrate how the cyber-security of the NSF was currently crap and how he can make it much better.

After a few grueling days of interrogation, consideration, and debate, it was decided that the boy was right, and he deserved that job - But he would be closely-watched...


Affiliations
Kaito Hyuga - Father.
Samantha Andrews - Mother.
Various friends made in Hokkaido, both Full-blooded Japanese and Japanese of Ainu heritage.


Relationships [Optional]
This is how they view other characters throughout the story. This will be updated as major changes in their involvement and view of one another is expanded. Most changes will be listed from experiences out of combat, but some can occur from within their combat positioning out in the field. They can become rivals, hating on one another, romantic couples or simply comrades in arms.

Character Theme
Not necessary, but can be used if wished. Just a tad fun.


@LetMeDoStuff


Looks alright mostly, just a few things you will need to add and consider.

First off, a request per se. Could it be organised into a hider? Just makes it easier on the scrolling and organisation and all when it gets moved into the character tab.

Secondly, I feel like a key part of the biography is missing - Was there any relevance to his family and the nuking of Tokyo? Didn't want this to be too long because he was obviously born afterwards, but perhaps that shaped his childhood?
@Letter BeeYour coded one is put in the OOC post



@LetMeDoStuff, Can we have a copy of the Character Sheet's BBCode instead of just an already-coded template?


I'll try to grab you the code in a second/edit it in.

As for me, I finished my CS







Will work on app later


Fantastic work, papa
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