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Ahhh we can work that out still, I was thinking some interaction would help determine partners@Apollosarcher


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Your Character is looking pretty good! Just a two things I noticed/have questions on.
1. You noted under gear in the wasps' explanation about a part of his armor that allows him to watch what they are seeing. Then your armor explanation is on the emptier side. Are there other parts similar to that, that he has. Or can that part do anything else?
2. How does Lars pick out different scents with attunement? Has he trained himself for years to get better with that using his wind attunement? If he has a scrap of clothing can he track someone's based on that scent? Maybe just expand a bit more on that.
3. Also could you expand more on your bio, it just doesn't really seem to explain how he really became a bounty hunter and how he learned his skills fully. Just a bare outline of it all.

Those are all the things I saw! The other gms(@Heckno12@LunarisDaFox) may, of course, see something I may have missed, which they will let you know. But honestly, the character looks quite interesting and great other than those few things. I'm excited to have you in the roleplay! :)

The new school year had officially begun at Beacon Academy. The first years had received their teammate assignments plus their first lesson and the second years had been given a few days of refresher courses. While the first years continued their normal schooling, the second years and up received their first mission assignment of the year to test them. They for the most part would be on their own but a professional huntsman or woman in the area of their assignment would secretly be looking out for them during the time of their mission.

The mission Team BAJE received had them going to the town of Clearwyn which was on the outskirts of the Emerald Forest. Their mission was to take care of the increase of Grimm in the area due to a new gang terrorizing the town. The team was also to report any information on the gang they got along with protecting the citizens from the gang if necessary. They were not, though, supposed to search for or take out the gang on their own. The mission was going to have them stationed in the town for at least five days as it was predicted more and more creature of Grimm were being drawn to the town.


Team's Location:
Town of Clearwyn @ small house town was letting them stay at for the mission
Important Mission Information:
Day 1 of Mission, shortly after arrival






Jasper threw her stuff on the ground by the end of the couch, followed by her swords and quivers before she jumped on the couch, landing lying on it the long way on her back. She let out a sigh as she stretched out her body. "Ahh finally we got here. Nice of them to give us a place like this to stay while we are here." The pinkette commented to no one in particular as she folded her arms behind her head.

The team had to walk to the town from the school, it wasn't that bad of a walk. Only about a days walk, so they had left yesterday and camped out overnight and arrived to Clearwyn about midday. The town's mayor had given them more information on Grimm attacks and sightings before showing them to a small house in the town that the team would be staying in during their mission. That's where they were now. The small house had a small kitchen, small living room, a bathroom, and one room that usually only had two twin beds but the town had switched them with bunk beds seeing as the team had four people.

"Soo... What's the plan for the rest of the day?" Jazz asked glancing up at her teammates with her green eyes, "I personally vote the bar since there is no club." She joked with smirk and a wink at her teammates. It was half a joke and also half serious, she was definitely probably the most 'immature' in general of the bunch when it came to that stuff. Although she would argue it really made her more mature. The pinkette loved her team though, they made an interesting bunch... that was for sure true.
My stupid computer..... I lost the original first post... So I have to rewrite everything. Def won't be as long but I guess we will just have to see once I get started.



to be worked on, just wanted to reserve my idea
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