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I'm not entirely satisfied with this yet, Going to edit it a bit more, But it has the main ideas that I want to make sure are acceptable. In particular the preferred weapon. Let me know :P


I am interested in this if the idea wasn't dropped!
Wintersunshine said
Okay perfect! I love your character! Good job!Everyone is in cafe as the principle is making announcement to meet in court yard to show your gift and a few students have headache and one hs a bloody nose


ok okay here I posted something, hopefully going in the right direction :P
"maybe we should just go home" said Jemal, as he walked away "hold up, what??" Paige ran over to him and grabbed him by the hand "what are you talking about? this is great!" she reached for his chin and turned his head to look at her "just" she wasn't sure how to word her next sentence "accept the help they offer, learn how to use your gift, and once you have mastered it, you are welcome to come live with me again", Jemal looked a little weak however "Ty" she said, it was how she used to call him when they were little "are you okay?", "we should go home, I have a headache" at that point Paige was actually considering taking Jemal home, but then she noticed that his skin began showing burn like marks "no" he appeared to be losing control of his gift again "this is exactly why we are here, we are going to get help", Jemal walked over and leaned on the railings, "ok, just give me a few minutes, I can make it go away" he said as he closed his eyes and sat down.

Paige was an impatient woman, she let Jemal stay outside while she went inside to talk to someone, the moment she walked in the place was full of people, lots of chatter all going somewhere, the court yard she heard someone say, as she walked forward. To her amazement, she witnessed things she thought were impossible, her jaw dropped at the sight of kids playing with their gifts, the show took away her breath, she lost balance and fell backwards against the wall.

Paige ran back outside "The court yard, lets go", she said to Jemal, "but my head hurts" he said, "we will deal with that after" she finished as she grabbed his hand and the both headed to the court yard.
Wintersunshine said
Accepted :)Quick question is there a weakness to his gift? Is it it only affected for how long he can hold it? I love his gift it different it amazing by the way


there is no time limit on how long the virus spreads. if he isn't careful it can spread like wildfire and pretty much cause a global infection. thats why Jemal needs to learn to control it so nothing like this happens. as for weakness... honestly isnt his ability pretty weak as it is? I mean think about it, a person runs at him with a knife, and all he can do is infect him... but that's about it nothing is going to stop the person from killing him because the virus doesnt take effect immediately, it works like every other disease, symptoms first and only then real damage,

anyway I posted my first post, if anyone can play along and help me blend in into where the story is at right now :)
Taking another sip from her coffee, holding the steering wheel with one hand Paige glances at Jemal, who was clapping his fingers constantly against his knee "don't be nervous" said his adoptive sister, but he seemed to have ignored her looking out the window "All my life" he began saying "Alex has spent so much time researching me and my curse, how did sh.." - "Gift" Paige cut him off, "The place we are going to calls it a gift", Jemal looked at Paige long and hard "how did you even find this place? I never heard of it", Paige put her coffee into the cup holder and opened the box sitting between the seats "look inside", Jemal pulled out a letter with 'Waverly Academy' witten over it "I didn't find this place" she said "they found us", picking up her coffee again "or you anyway", A school for the gifted, Jemal couldn't wrap his head around the concept, he grew up with only one reality and never considered what else is out there, "Gifted... are there going to be other kids who can do what I do?" he asked, "maybe" she said as they parked "we're here..."

They both got out of her destroyed red Toyota corolla, she walked up ahead and turned around to look at the horrific dent on her bumper "If only I was" she said as she crossed her fingers "Gifted... I would make my car look as good as new", "or kill anyone in it" said Jemal, causing Paige to sigh as she reached out for his hand "lets go".

they walked up to the entrance of the school, what looked like just another private school and paused, "whats wrong?" asked Jemal, "I never really told anyone we were coming" she said laughing "I guess I was hoping some superman would be standing outside waiting to greet us" jokingly, "you know" she said as she turned to look at Jemal and mockingly said "we were expecting you"...
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