@Entropsy
I like this race a lot, and I'm excited to see more about your character. I'm a little concerned about them being overpowered, because they have a lot of RP-relevant strengths and only a few weaknesses, some of which seem a little too specific to affect the RP or your character very often. You say that they're easy to cripple and not inherently gifted combatants, but this seems contradictory to the fact that they're very strong and agile.
One thing I really like about this race is that you say they're quite anarchistic and typically drawn to less-than-legal lines of work. I think that would make for a very interesting character.
Overall, I'm impressed, though I would like you to be a little more specific about your race's strengths and weaknesses.
I like this race a lot, and I'm excited to see more about your character. I'm a little concerned about them being overpowered, because they have a lot of RP-relevant strengths and only a few weaknesses, some of which seem a little too specific to affect the RP or your character very often. You say that they're easy to cripple and not inherently gifted combatants, but this seems contradictory to the fact that they're very strong and agile.
One thing I really like about this race is that you say they're quite anarchistic and typically drawn to less-than-legal lines of work. I think that would make for a very interesting character.
Overall, I'm impressed, though I would like you to be a little more specific about your race's strengths and weaknesses.