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About me as a player.
When I make a character I consider every aspect of the character—and the context of the universe it's in—from its nature and demeanor, to its ambitions and motivations; and quirks, strengths, and weaknesses. Did I need to say all that? No, not really, but I felt like correctly using 'and' five times in a sentence. The reason I give such consideration to these characters is because I come to RP to for the challenge of being someone other than myself. What I would do in a character's situation does not interest me, and it's not the point. Knowing the character as well as I know myself means I can do what the character would do and really feel the weight of those choices.

About me as an author.
I consider all play-by-post games I play in to be a form of interactive, co-authored stories, where in the characters all play a part; and as a consequence all authors play a part. When I engage in collaborations I try to make my character's goals and motivations as clear as possible to the other authors I'm engaging with, and trust they will respect the game and not meta-game that knowledge (particularly: Using out of character knowledge to make in-character decisions). I've observed that this is the most difficult line for other players to walk and I find myself entering into collabs sparingly with anyone I've witnessed not delivering on a pattern of excellence in this regard.

About me as a person.
I have years of experience in LARP, Table-Top, MUDs & MMOs and more. I've been role-playing longer than the average millennial has been alive, and have played just about every kind of character—in every kind of medium—there is. I've also written a bit of fan-fiction (FiMFiction) and original fiction, as well as served as a serious editor for both. I don't mention my experience to brag. It's just a fact. I'm not being modest either since I don't believe in it. Modesty and Arrogance are two sides of the same coin. Understating one's abilities is just as dishonest as overstating them. Doing either is a sign of insecurity, and a deception perpetrated with the intent to garner respect or sympathy. If I'm starting to sound like a super villain, well, there is a reason why.

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@Liotrent Holy shit dude. A rebellion, massive space battle, protracted siege, and utter defeat all in one post. All expertly done.

Very kudos. Such words. Many impress. Wow.


Seriously though, you got me thinking about the nature of my own race and how space battles just aren't their thing. Pls don't subjugate me.

The Last Free Port:
Tortuga: a day in the life of.


A black cat darted through the interior of this old station. It was hot on the heels of a mechanical rat that winded through burned out conduits and sheered electrical sheathes. Both nimbly bounced through hazard after hazard as the hunter chased its quarry through the closed environment. As predator and prey both rounded a corner leading back into the main hall a flying wrench broke their momentum. In the moment of its passing the rat hunkered low and slid under it while the cat was forced to jump up and backward to halt its forward momentum. It's big yellow eyes glanced up to see the thrower's hand still raised and clench into a fist. "Get the fuck out of here!" Myriam Mackenzie shouted at the cat whom turned tail and darted back into the station's crawlspaces. Brie, the mechanical rat, then scampered to a stop at the mechanic's feet.

Mac scooped up her little 'cheese' and inspected it for damage. Seeing none she plugged it in to a portable battery pack to charge and dropped it in one of the packs side pockets. Quality tools were difficult to acquire in this region of space and she had been required to adapt a series of old multi-tools into one, which hadn't really been a problem until that damned cat showed up. She shook her head in dismay as she resumed her over-scheduled day. Living on a pirate port meant one would constantly run into disreputable characters, and obnoxious stowaways, and she chalked up the black cat to being among one of those two groups.

As she made her way to her next work detail, a large storage room that she was tasked with rewiring to become a state of the art medical facility, she wondered just who had the nerve to get into the business. Medicines were common black-market goods that were bought, sold, traded, and smuggled through this port. She mused that someone was either expanding their business, or cutting in on it, and as a result there would be none too happy to see a hospital open here.

There was, however, a unspoken agreement among these drifters and privateers: don't mess with the chef. As a result of being the one who keeps everything in this shit-hole running, Myriam had nearly unparalleled access to the station and its systems. Not only that, she was very well protected. People like when their things work and, as long as she can keep them working, absolutely nobody dare touch her.

***


The human empire once had a frontier, and on that frontier there was an edge. And on that edge privateers and entrepreneurs built a thriving society that operated just outside the grasp of the human's mighty fists. However, like the humans themselves, as their empire grew so did their reach, and the human's expanse eventually enveloped all of the outlining systems.

Tortuga was one such system. However it was a system that was difficult to control, even today, due to the many inconvenient natural phenomena it contained that limited starship travel. Furthermore in a show of coordinated indigence free-traders and pirates began congregating there as they were pushed out of other parts of the empire. The system also had a wealth of natural resources whose value could really only be assessed in bulk and, due to the political climate, the convoys required to get at those resources were frequently raided.

Aside from the planet-side mining outposts, and the occasional den of iniquity, there were only two major installations of note in the system. The pirate station and an observational research outpost. The tentative truce between the two was about to be disrupted.

***


The governor's assistant was trapped in a conversation he could not escape no matter how he had tried. It had been three hours already no matter which way he explained the situation, the person sitting across the local office's mahogany desk simply refused to accept the reality of her situation. His elbows rested on the desk's surface as he sighed in exasperation. "Look," he said through two hands that rubbed his temples, "Those tunnels are ours, and we're going to go down there."

The Grand Matron of some sort of "Nature's Renewal" cult and, due to some unfortunate circumstances, duly elected mayoral representative of this province. And, she was wholly unphased by his assertions. In fact, there had been absolutely no indication of the amount of time and energy she had stole from his day, and worn out of him, as if she was somehow immune to the obscene frustration that was dealing with her. The righteousness of her cause seemed to be all the invigoration she needed, and it burned through her with endless ardor.

"I have told you, sir, that you are not," Aria Summers said, while sliding a document back in the assistant's direction, "going to set one foot in those tunnels. It would disturb the bones of our ancestors." The document was a claim to religious protection, as a declaration of a holy site, that the local government had authorized and intended to honor despite the fact that it contradicted with the state's mining operations and desires. Not only that, in the last three hours the document had been moved back and forth so frequently that there was some concern that it was starting to wear a hole in the finish of his desk. Though, in all this time it had never been picked up. The assertions of the local government did not matter to the humans.

The assistant's head sunk further into his hands. "How many times are we going to have to do this before you get it?" he asked while sliding the document back for what he intended to be the last time, but every time was 'the last time'. "The central government is not going to acknowledge this piece of shit." he added while loosing his temper a little.

The document was slid back toward the assistant as the infinitely composed Aria Summers stated: "Forever," she coldly stated. It was mostly true and very obvious from her demeanor that she took her religious convictions very seriously. And, apparently, her constituents shared that fervor and vigor as they had been gathering on the street and had not dispersed regardless of how long they debated the topic.

***


The television flickered as the holo-projection came back into alignment after switching from one commentator to another. A banner ran in a ring around a distinguished looking gentleman in a lab-coat identifying him as Dr. Xaith Calhound, foremost expert in simulated intelligence."The specimen is very convincing," he explained, "The infected's memories are leveraged in the same manner as the switch, or a button, in an operand conditioning chamber. However, in this case the chamber isn't a physical box, but rather it is the target's perspective and worldview."

The television faded from the attention of the local bar at the appearance of a more provocative sight. The large shadow cast on the station from a derelict science vessel caught in the suns corona had finally moved as that ship was brought to dock at the station under its own power. More importantly, though, was that the captain of the science vessel was Alalia Wallice, and as she stepped through the station's airlock she asked: "Where is the hospital being built?"

After a few men fell all over themselves to give her directions, and offer her an escort which she allowed, they made their way to the cargobay in question.

A large hole had been torn into the floor of the cargobay. A mechanical rat chewed on wiring while the petite grease monkey calibrated an energy flow regulator. The door had not yet been repaired and was in no need of opening. As the shadow of visitors was cast over her work station Myrim spoke without looking up. "Oh? So this is gonna be your shack?" she asked, "I don't know much about medicine," she added while setting down the flow regulator to turn to face her guest, "but the average human has twelve pairs of ribs. That's eleven places to catch a knife."

An elegant chortle proceeded Alalia's question: "My benefactors are quite anxious. When will this facility be done?"

"Main power should be integrated by the end of the day." Myriam said. Hearing its master talk about its work caused the rat too to pop its head out of the hole and both inspected their guest. Myriam's instant jealousy of Alalia's physical perfection faded almost as fast as she noticed the grotesque nature of the mens' fawning over her. She shook her head and picked her tools back up, preferring to be respected as an equal, rather than desired as an object. "Heads are gonna roll over this."

"Like you, I'm just an intermediary," Alalia said as she nodded in contemplative understanding, "A messenger, or herald, if you will."

"Either way," Myriam scoffed as she and her wheel-rat went back to work, "Don't say I didn't warn you."
@Eventua Pretend to be a civilization and then write about it. Here's the old thread for some perspective and examples

@6slyboy6 If the story is more-or-less the same initial conditions as the old thread, then picking up where we left off may be easiest. In the context of this universe I'm thinking that they were largely parallel and it'll be a good In Medias Res exercise for me.

I'll open my post with a nice establishing shot of the Tortuga System.
Laid Low: Part II
A @bobert778 and @LegionPothIX collaboration.

Ancient Site:
Tower of Tombs

The room was glib and dim. The high vaulted ceilings of the great central hall were etched with distant runes too far to provide light. Moreover the large glass paned windows which told the story of this place, were blackened out by centuries of dust, and sediment. But that was not to say the room was entirely shrouded in darkness as an eerie light emanated from its central fixture: a body suspended in a confluence of earthly magic surrounded by runes burning with terrestrial radiance.

It was there that the man found what had drawn his interest from the surface. A child like figure was suspended with tethers invisible to a lesser man’s normal naked eyes. Though it was just barely invisible to the naked eye, its presence was palpable and its effect clear to see. Weapon wounds were sealing in the robes of the childlike figure as the weapons that made them were being corroded and consumed.

Even at this distance the man’s orb began to lose integrity. He squinted unhappily up at the figure, shielding his eyes as if he were trying to stare at the sun. To test a theory he moved the orb in his hand closer to the anomaly, and observed its light diminish further the nearer it drew; then brighten again when pulled away. He noted it react more to the runes, than to the child, as he waved it about.

“So, that’s how it works,” he murmured, his eyes still squinted as he stepped closer to the figure. This draw of energy had been what attracted his attention to begin with, the gorge he’d crossed earlier one of the many ley-lines that seemed to be funnelling directly into this place. Another step closer to the binding runes and the orb in his hand snarled; rattling softly as its light grew close to dying.

Without giving it a second thought he grabbed the sphere in both hands, twisted the two halves so that the light giving slits were shut, and in an awkward fashion reached behind himself with both hands to put the orb back in his bag. The etchings on the walls still gave off enough glow to penetrate the mire of darkness.

In the moments that the orb was stowed brilliant shafts of light burned out of every opening in the figure. They tightened and refined on the body as wounds closed and momentarily widened at the eyes and mouth as a scream reverberated outward echoing through the large chamber and through the whole of the spire. Then… nothing. No lights. No sounds. The body was unceremoniously dumped straight down onto the hard stone floor, and at the very center of the warded runic circle; whereupon the tide of magic stemmed to a trickle.

Curious to see what would happen, he began offering his magic to the crumpled figure but whatever it was could or would not accept it. It seemed to have stopped drawing in power, but hadn't released any either. Unhappy with the results the man twisted impatiently and marched over to where the cowled figure lie.

“Why do you need so much magic!?” he said and jabbed angrily with frustration evident underneath his wealth of facial hair. His eyes were almost closed at this point, trying to avoid looking directly at it on top of that.

He scowled and clapped his hands together, rubbing them into each other and twisting as a dim green began to emanate from between his clasped hands. As he did so his skin grew darker, his hair longer, and what appeared to be pine-cones began budding from the sides of his head. The glow now a wispy, fluid like substance that swirled between slightly apart palms, the man lifted the shapeless mass of energy and knelt down, shoving it towards this peculiar magic sponge. All that raw energy pent up in one place was a bad thing, and if left to stagnate it would only get worse. If this thing wasn't going to give up it's well of power on it's own, maybe it could be persuaded.

The warding circle flashed violently in reaction to the man’s magic and dispelled it from his hands as he thrust them through. His empty palms struck the figure, rousing it from its slumber, and what first appeared to be a child was noticed as decidedly not one. “Grand-papa, you came back! I’m sorry grand-papa…” the cloaked figure groggily mumbled as it rubbed his eyes, looking up as the man withdrew his hands to inspect the barrier. It hadn’t been the expected result, but after the initial shock faded the man was left with a smile. Slowly his appearance began to return to normal, and the few growths his hair had developed shed themselves onto the floor.

The child’s eyes opened, slowly at first, then widened with surprise when he noted the old man was not Grandfather. He scrambled backwards out of the circle, and backed against some debris. He thrust his right arm up between them, pointing it at the old man like a weapon, and stabilized it with his left. “Who are you!?” he shouted, “Where is Grandfather?”

The man didn’t flinch, observing the humanoid being passively while it recovered from whatever process it had just been through. “Not your Gran-pap, lad,” he chuckled, pushing off his bent knee to lift himself to stand. The wooden creature’s stress seemed to amuse the old man, though his attention had become divided as he’d started scanning the surrounding area thoughtfully.

It was in that moment that Jumper noticed the debris he was leaning against had not been there when his eyes last closed. He tried to remember what happened. He closed his eyes for a moment, his weapon arm still tracking the intruder not wearing the colors, while he pieced it together. He then immediately wish that he had not.

The magical runes in Tiberius’s citadel, however, were all tied together into two competing networks. For this one to go dark would mean that his revivification had drained the remaining arcane energies, or at the very least upset the balance they had had for so many years.

Jumper scrambled up to his feet and dashed at the door, and the man stepped out of the way to allow him passage while his attention was once again fully on the animate wooden boy.

The ley-lines were no longer flowing here because they had been released to resume their natural flow, and so the tower had nothing powering its immortal seals. It was for this reason that the boy ran. There was nothing to prevent the Great Old One’s magic from tearing this stone fortress asunder mote by mote. Indeed even before Jumper could get halfway to the door an ear-splitting crack ruptured the ceiling above and rubble rained from above.

“Well that’s not very good,” the man commented factually, staring up at the cascade of crumbling stonework as it was torn apart by the magics surging in the green glyphs and seals he had walked past earlier. He hadn’t budged though, and watched as the cowled figure dashed away towards the door. “Don’t let the earth swallow you yet, sapling!” he bellowed over the sound of fortress being turned to rubble, large sections of wall falling between him and Jumper causing both to lose sight of the other. Stone continued to pile into the chamber, and while there were no cries of pain or anguish, there was no sign of the man having escaped before being buried alive.

Jumper hurled himself into a full sprint and maintained the pace as he dodged and weaved through the corridors, sometimes skidding through turns, others jumping and kicking off falling debris to clear rifts and canyons that swallowed up the only home he had left. Though he could not explain it this tower had been his home for years and he knew it well. Well enough to escape at least.

As he ran, ancient carved runestone that made up the walls, floors, and ceilings cracked into cobble, before exploding into fine dust, as the ancient subterranean spire was erased from the world for good. He was nearly caught in the collapse, and drug down into the sinkhole that naturally followed, when he erupted forth with the cloud of dust that would serve as the structure’s death rattle.

The sound of thunder could be heard overhead, and though he couldn’t see through the thick smoke and fine dust that enveloped the air he could hear the slightest pitter-patter of rain as the first drops splashed off his cowl. The more it rained the more the particulates were washed out of the air, each mote captured in a droplet and drowned. Carried away back to whence it came, where the water and dust would mix into cement, before settling the ancient rivalry forever.

It was the last of the ancient druidic magic and, before storm’s end, there would be a lake here. Jumper cast his gaze about the massive depression left in the landscape that had yet to fill looking for some sign of the old man. With the conjured storm slowly drenching the forest floor the massive crater began to take on water, mud settling to quickly seal away the all but forgotten tower.

Finally free, and reasonably safe, Jumper collapsed to the ground in a panting heap. Though he looked it, as he imagined that’s what his grandfather would do, he wasn’t as exhausted as his panting and grasping form would suggest.

“So efficient how they planned all that out, eh?” a fairly familiar voice commented, sounding from somewhere seemingly just out of sight. Jumper rolled over and sat up in a single motion. Up on the balls of his feet as he looked around for the voice. “Don’t stay here and drown, sapling! Be safe!” the voice called again, now distant and from somewhere high above. Jumper glanced up to the skyline but saw naught but a leafy canopy backed by dire storm clouds.
First IC on the weekend if things go right.


@Timemaster When you put it like that they sound nothing alike xD.
@6slyboy6 Don't blame me. Star Trek is fucking OP.

@Timemaster I have no idea what that is. Google says its on steam so I might check it out.
@6slyboy6 I could give you the basics but I have no intention of submitting them as a character at this time. The race I'm now playing was designed as a companion race to that one and they're very similar in some ways and very different in others. The main drive of that race also doesn't really fit in this setting, and their origins gives them little to fear from hoomans. Being born of the most inhospitable environment known to man, near the event horizon of a black hole, means their territory is very unlikely to come under fire from the hoomans.

The pants shiting terror part is that they're sentient AI that can become anything, at any time, and are nearly undetectable in nature. Every single molecule of every one of them is monitored at all times, through every moment of their existence, and the data is recorded in one unreachable place: in the black hole itself.

The whole point of that race is to explore the universe in a very Star Trek exque manner, but with a very different approach, still using all the same tools that are staples of Voyager/TNG.

They come into being when a computer analyzes a data pattern for a life it has little to no information on. A holographic model is made and pattern replicated, and quantum linked to a duplicate. Then that duplicate is compressed into a datastream by a transporter and beamed into the black hole for storage. Because they're quantum linked the matter outside the black hole and the matter inside the black hole experience the same phenomenons (even if the duplicate isn't a "person" anymore) and so the recording is made naturally by the black hole as if the matter inside is continually updating.

This race uses this process to explore what it means to be other races as a way to try to understand its creators (who fell into the black hole as they lived on the nearest habitable planet to the start that collapsed). The AI is in command of the life it is stored in and is trained on how to be that life, often by being born into (or changeling-ing their way into) an existing family unit for that species (not all of which are sentient species).
@6slyboy6 I got an idea for a Star Trek themed race that would make these hoomans shit their collective pants. Sadly I don't think it'd really fit here because it relies heavily on technological staples of the show to come into being (transporters, replicators, holodecks, etc).
@LegionPothIX How would someone without free will have the ability to worship someone?


The nature of theology and teleology in the context of its meaning and impact on a hive mind really is something that should be discussed in character if ever we have the opportunity.

Also. I am familiar with the Neurax Worm but strangely I didn't get inspired from there. The Neural Parasite ability of the Infestor creature from Starcraft 2 is the place where I got inspired from :)


I too worked in some Zerg, and Borg, aspects into my race as well as a lot of D&D monster manual stuff. They're the two main go-to's for hiveminds. Well, them and I guess now Unity.

Also. I know my CS (more like nation sheet but whatever, it's kinda the same thing) is sparse. [...] My race was not even remotely close to space travel or guns or anything like that when the Empire came so I don't have much to say about tech for them. Military ? None whatsoever. Only controlled creatures and nothing more.
Only one leader that dubs as all the other important persons that other races have because there is only one "person" that can think in the whole race.
In a way or the other...it's small because I don't have much to write about these things. I don't say that I couldn't (and probably should've) written something more in other places to compensate.


All of this belongs on your character sheet in a more detailed and expanded form. There's a place specifically there for it (History).

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