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Of course all isn't lost, it's nbd. This is just intro stuff. I wanted to give both groups a chance to familiarize with each other so that when I finally merge you all together, you're still on a 'team' in your own head. The details are just details at this point.

We can do a collaboration if that's what Culluket wants to do, but at this point it's so early in the story that it's not of any major importance. You're still exploring your characters and getting to know them. When the story gets going, you won't remember any of this being significant.

Now, in order to force the Knights to interact a bit more, I'm going to have to give them something to do.

This is a task I enjoy having.

Once Culluket posts (no rush), I'll go ahead and post another Knights bit.
Just a quick reminder to please let me handle the pacing of the story. Serona did say they'll make camp there, but give everyone a chance to actually you know, react to that. As well as the prisoner who's being interrogated. Kinda left nothing for Linus to do except make tents. Which I know is probably Culluket's dream post, but hey Tuyev might have had some valuable information that affected whether or not they followed through on their intention to camp.

You could've left it at that question for Amon and it would've been good. I know it seems a bit slow now, but you've gotta trust me. I have stuff in store.

We'll go with this for now, I mean don't edit anything out, but in the future I'd be grateful if you guys left control of the events in my all powerful hands.
The Knights

The Knight was on him before he could so much as blink. Tuyev had underestimated the vigilance of the armored men, just as he had underestimated the size of his head when he tried to peer out for a curious look at the newcomers. Now there was a sword to his throat, a knee on his chest, and flecks of spittle on his cheek as this giant roared some question about elves. Certain that he was about to experience a very painful death, Tuyev wished very genuinely that he had the answer.

At least Tuyev had his answer. No, they were not bandits or elves. They were the King’s men, judging by their prestigious attire and the loathsome colors on that banner.

While he was still stammering out an answer, that blade pressing into the soft underside of his jaw, the Knight’s comrade sauntered up to join the interrogation. His tone was maddeningly playful, almost jovial, but Tuyev could see the hanging flail in the bottom of his vision, and there was no move made to remove the brute pinning him to the earth.

“I didn’t—” The nomad whimpered when he felt the blade bite into his flesh upon the formation of words. “I didn’t do this. I was—was just l-looking…”

A third came into view. A silent spectator to his imminent death. Help me, Tuyev pleaded with the universe. Please. What have I done? How could his existence mean so little to them?

“Yes!” Tuyev broke into a desperate sob, his hands scraping against the rough earth in a vain attempt to back away from the weapon. “Elves! B-burned the place and left! Everyone ran. I… I came back. They left everything behind.”

Produced from his writhing, a silvery object, oblong and curved, protruded from his nomad wrappings. An errant motion from his arm knocked it fully into view. Tuyev apparently regretted this, and despite his predicament, pawed blindly outward to get it back.

“N-not mine!”

It was an elven blunderbuss, recognizable to every man present from their previous encounters with the slender beasts. Floral engravings in the metal made its craftsmanship unmistakable. The wooden handle was iridescent and polished to a glassy shine, seeming to repel every grain of sand. Its flared muzzle was blackened and warped, indicating to the trained eye that it had misfired.

Tuyev could have sold it for a handful of silver, perhaps even a gold crown, but he was sure that that elves wouldn’t have left it behind if it was still working.

Captain Serona fell in beside Kolbe to observe the scene, but left its handling to his men. The weapon proved Falkenburg’s observations: this had been the work of elves. The only question was whether they were close enough on the King’s trail to be involved with him.

“We’ll make camp here tonight,” the Captain rumbled to the scarred soldier. “If anyone else returns: elf or villager,” the nomad received a passive look, “or another pathetic scavenger, we’ll be here to greet them.” An upward motion of his chin bid the two forward Knights to do as they willed. “Find out what this man knows of the attack, and burn that elven garbage.”


The Mummers

The nose of Lothren’s firearm followed the ghostly movements of a young rattlesnake weaving its way from one dry patch of woody foliage to another. He did not break his focus, not even when Juna climbed up beside him to pitch him a question. No twitch of an eyebrow or shift in his posture indicated that he had so much as noticed her presence.

Clack.

Nothing happened when he depressed the iron lever, but he lowered the arquebus into his lap with the satisfaction of a gratified gunman. Juna was finally acknowledged in the corner of his eye.

“It draws nearer,” he murmured. “Every sunset brings it one day closer. Squeezes the trigger so slowly, leaving us waiting for the fatal shot. I don’t know when it will come, Juna.” Lothren lost sight of the slithering snake ahead. It had found a new home in some burrow. “And while I grow mad with anticipation, the human king prattles away about singing.”

The elf turned fractionally toward the firelight at his back. So little live appeared to dwell in the old creature when he was not standing upon a stage. The burr in his voice could echo in a village square, taking an audience by force. He composed body and limb with masterful precision, every movement a dance, every step a promise.

A century of life had left only decades in his features, not so much as lightening a single long strand on his brunet head. But here as he rested, Lothren was barely more than a corpse. Every year could be seen to his fellow elf, and then a few more.

“This will end soon.” Lothren’s dark eyes burrowed Juna. “As will ‘Alan’s’ incentive to help us. He is my key to freeing Ularien. While we have him, we have leverage. Do you understand?” It had been weeks. Alonso’s men must have been searching for him, and by now they couldn’t be far. “The king will not remain ours to keep. When that moment comes, remember that a blade on his throat will stay a blade on someone else’s.”

At the fire, Alan pulled off his hooded cap, leaving his sandy hair in a whirled mess. He sniffed through one nostril while he leaned his head forward to scratch the back of his neck. The scent of his own unwashed person wafted into his senses and for a fleeting moment, he ached for a hot bath back at home.

“We don’t even have to go that far,” he replied to Aust. “It’s not bravery that keeps people from running, it’s stupidity. Everyone believes they’re invincible. That nothing could ever happen to them.” Alan emptied his cup, and then tossed it aside, leaving it to roll in the dirt. He sucked on his teeth for a moment, ignoring an echo of the Knight Captain’s advice in his head. “But something is happening, right this very moment. And Lothren is the only one who’s ever believed me.”

Alan propped himself up on his knees, leaning into the glow of the campfire.

“We can’t be hurting anyone else, it’s not right.” Not that Alan had killed anyone at all. His martial prowess was far lacking, and even when he had attempted to join the fray (if only to help warn villagers to run), a thin hand had held him back. He was left to watch elves burn and frighten villagers, both Viceni and Aretan, herding them westward. “Lothren tells me some people can’t be reasoned with, that they’d sooner die than be chased from their homes. I think he’s wrong. I think he’s just old, and out of patience.”

Looking between Annara and Aust’s face, Alan pretended to be speaking with the characters from the play. It was easier to think of them as heroes rather than violent criminals.

“Promise me no one else gets hurt.” Pain creased his brow. “I can’t bear it. I know what the Ytharien do, but you’re all better than that.”
You can assume btw that Horace was effectively pulled across, in case anyone was wondering!
Thank you for asking. Black powder weapons are in fact elf specific. Because of their nature they're often perceived as magical weapons. The most complicated ranged weaponry your knight might wield is a handsome crossbow—which is perfectly alright. I'm sure their horses are packed for the long haul.

However, sit tight. I had something in mind that you might perhaps take advantage of.
Really impressed with the speed and quality of writing from everyone actually. I've been out of the forum circuit for awhile and I didn't know what to expect when I came back. If you ever want to lose faith in everyone and everything, try finding RP in mmorpgs.

Your post looked fine to me! I really couldn't have hoped for better in general.
I have to comment. Gerald is just so wonderfully over the top. I laughed.
IC post is up! Sorry for length, will try to keep it shorter in the future.

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The Absent King



The Knights



"Nearly all men can stand adversity, but if you want to test a man’s character, give him power."


It was evident the Royal Knights were seldom seen this far from the castle walls in Marion Bay.

The Neratine River drew a lazy trail through the eastern parts of Areta, dotted with flourishing cities closest to the ocean’s coast, where the King of Areta was celebrated and most loved. The Knights were welcomed warmly and offered rooms in the luxurious inns, which quickly became decorated with the king’s colors: gold and blue. Here they would stop for the evening to rest and resupply, before resuming their trek at dawn. Boys waved their wooden words, and ladies their colored scarves.

As the Knights rode further upriver, less of the king’s influence could be felt. The cities diminished into villages, and then into hamlets as the Neratine led them to the country’s border. Here, the Knights encountered less welcome, and instead found more fear and agitation. No one lived this far from Marion Bay to call themselves patriots.

The inns here did not welcome the Knights without prompt. Instead, they were taken by royal decree. Offered assurances of leaner tax collection as compensation, the captain’s men were fed, wined, and housed on the locals’ own coin. If a village lacked an inn, they stayed at the largest house. When the time the Knights left at dawn, the locals breathed easier and traded spiteful curses.

By now, Captain Amon Serona had become specially skilled tracking down the impetuous King Alonso. The boy’s tastes were decadent and spoiled, and though not everyone recognized their ruler on sight, most recalled the finely dressed young man who bought only the freshest fruit, the best cuts of meat, and stayed in the cleanest rooms. Following the king’s trail was as simple as asking after suddenly wealthy whores in the area.

The sun was setting on the Knights’ second week from the comfort and security of the castle. On Serona’s map, the Neratine bent at a sharp angle just a few miles ahead, becoming the defining border between Areta and Vicenna. The King had likely foolishly crossed over.

The acrid smell of charred wood reached them before the carcass of a ruined settlement revealed itself from behind a rolling hill. Startled into awareness, the captain kicked his horse into a trot, prompting his Knights to do the same. Beneath a bleeding sky, their horses took them onto the still smoldering remains of a lonely hamlet.

“Look alive!” Serona called back, finally requiring their capacity as the kingdom’s protectors for the first time since they’d left Marion Bay. It was a lot to ask at this hour, when all of their asses were sore from riding all damned day. “This whole place is burnt! What the devil happened here?”

Half of a blackened waterwheel hung by its axle alongside one of the squat, stony structures situated on the river, large portions. The flames had died by now, leaving only patches of glowing embers. Two nearby homes had partially collapsed. Most intact was a tall barn, accompanied by the dilapidated skeleton of a low-lying fence. The first corpses they spied were two dead cattle, bones picked clean by buzzards and jackals, but no humans so far.

The road was littered with frantic foot and hoofprints, far too many to account for the dozen or so souls who must have lived here.

“All of you!” The Captain promptly stopped his horse and dismounted, leaving it to shuffle and bray in distress outside the hamlet. “We’re to look for survivors. Or bodies. Find out any indication as to what did this and report.”

Despite the clear sky, distant thunder murmured at them from the darkening Vicenna sky. Serona glanced upward and grimaced. It wasn’t anywhere close to the wet season.

“Gerald, your eyes are better that anyone’s, watch for movement. The tracks are fresh. There could still be someone here.” The Captain pushed back his hood. With the sun setting, there was no more need for it. “Falkenburg, those cattle don’t look burned. Find out what killed them. Kolbe… for god’s sake, if you find anyone, try not to frighten them.”


The Mummers



"When a man is denied the right to live the life he believes in, he has no choice but to become an outlaw."


On the fringes of Vicenna, just beyond the Neratine river, a campfire cast an orange halo around a mass of tall, smooth faced rocks jutting up around a tiny spring. The wagons of the Mummers of Merry Andrew had set up in a circle within the sheltered area, alive with ribbons, vibrantly striped canvas, and the sound of jubilant laughter. The wagons were dark, and the theatre troupe was off duty now, but many were still in costume from their performance hours earlier.

Carven into each of the half dozen wagons were artful faces, both beastly and human, opened wide into jubilant smiles, unbridled rage, and overwhelming sorrow. Spry elven forms sat on and around them, as light as leaves on trees, drinking from clay cups or chewing on their share of meat.

Just beyond their camp was a small Viceni village, tucking in for the evening. It was called Muon Pond, and in the afternoon they had welcomed the Mummers and swarmed around their stages in awe. As their opening act, the dwarf had read his poetry, more tender and eloquent than a man like him appeared he could be. Following that was the enchanting voices of the she-elves Juna Hakallerva and Anuwelyn Deydra, producing a harmony few humans had ever heard.

Lothren of course played the title role in their following act, The Aurelian Collector, about a covetous villain who stole the land’s finest women to encase them in gold, preserving their beauty forever. Alan’s role in the play was of his comical assistant, whose fascination with anything lustrous resulted in his constant blundering. (Why must molten gold be so hot!)

The exotic Annara en’Sammat played the Collector’s newest victim, to be rescued by the dashing Aust Galen. An unconventional romance between an elf and a human always drew particular fascination (or disgust) from the audience. Often enough, their closing duet coaxed begrudging applause from the most stubborn spectators.

As evening settled in, the actors were resting and preparing for their twilight assault. Those who weren’t eating were readying their weapons. Archers oiled their crossbows, swordsmen sharpened their blades, and pistoliers tuned their flintlocks.

“Can’t believe the voice on you, Aust.” Alan laughed between drinks. He still wore his hooded cap from the play, but he’d removed his shoes to warm his feet by the fire. As usual, he avoided any and all interaction with Juna, the decided virtuoso of the band. “Almost forgot my lines.” He did forget them. “Annara, you’re lovely but I think you should listen to Lothren’s advice. You’re much too serious. Lady Isabella is a happy woman, it’s why she baffles the Collector.”

Alan glanced over his shoulder at the shape of Lothren, perched atop a nearby rock. No longer animated now that he was out of his role, he’d defaulted to his usual brooding state. No doubt troubled by the fate of his brother. It was evident in the way he aimed his arquebus at the distance, which gleamed in the crimson sunlight.

“Shame what we have to do tonight,” Alan mumbled into his mug. “But you heard Lothren. No bodies this time. No one needs to get hurt. We just have to scare them west in to Areta. Set a few fires, swing a few weapons.” The disguised king swirled his drink. “No need to kill the damned cows this time. Poor animals never hurt anybody.”
Worked for me once I entered the link manually into my browser. Aust really does fit the idea of elves I had in mind, by the way. I know they can be a bit cliche, but they're a classic, familiar element, which makes them easier to work with. Your look hits the mark, while your concept remains original.

I'm going to begin working on the first IC post. The history is optional on your character anyway, FateWeaver, could wait for ideas to build backwards. Go ahead and put your character in the char list. I'm going to set our status as full, but I may still seek other players in the future as the plot develops.

To all players:
Should go without saying, but as a courtesy to myself and the others, please let me know if you've lost interest, don't have time, or otherwise would like to leave the RP. I've left many RPs in my day, so really I completely understand, doesn't really matter what the reasons are. If you like we can even arrange for a dramatic IC exit.

When I put up the IC post, I'll send PMs to all of you with the secret information relevant to your faction.
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