Okay in terms of my thoughts on Peter...
Meticulous details, and lovely character as always--I love the description. It fits both Martin Freeman and Peter pretty well I think. I'm actually super jealous, I can't write visual descriptions the way you do >< I'm like, he has hair. And eyes. And hands. And feet. And limbs. Cuz normal person and stuff. Yeah. And you're like DESCRIPTION~ I don't get it how you do it.
Anyways, enough messing around with weird ways of saying things...
First of all, why must you make adorable characters that break my heart, and then stomp on the pieces? Jaycen had a much darker back story, but it was tolerable because he actually is truly happy with everything. Peter is different. He shoulders everything, both trivial and major by himself, and that weight has got to be crushing at this point. And self-blame on top of that? You're making me cringe right now. It's so sad that he's doing what he wants to do, in the most horrible way. The industry is very vicious, and Peter is the epitome of that fact. How does someone to talented and respected, not get an ounce of what he deserves? Why did he take the worst possible route, and keep his damn mouth shut? I don't care if you can explain it to me, that's something I will both never understand, but still really deeply identify with at the same time. I can't imagine all the pain and suffering that he went through.
I really don't see why he would ever get married to his former wife though. I guess I get it, but I personally see just an abusive dating relationship as more realistic in this case. If she wanted all of his moolah and stuff, I suppose it makes a bit more sense. What I'm wondering is, did they ever go through with an actual wedding ceremony? With vows, and kisses, and smiles and laughter and everything? I'm cringing again, by the way, just by the thought of that. I'm not physically cringing, it's all mental, just to be clear. The public would love it, who doesn't love seeing lavish weddings of famous actors--aside from their fans who want to kill anyone who even looks at them, of course. It would rake in oodles of cash too, wouldn't it?
On the topic of the mother... Who is she? A normal person doesn't just go up to a famous person and be like "you has money and stuffs. I wantz. i'm using you." Is she some kind of high end socialite?
The part about his daughter is beautiful, but I'm also pretty interested in the relationship she had with her mother. It doesn't seem like that mother had any love for her daughter, but did Lucelia have love for her one and only mother, at any point in time? Or was she just an absent mother, who absolutely didn't give a shit about anything but herself? Where was she, during the fights that her parents had?
And one of my first reactions to this was: He's straight? Really? o_o or... isn't he?
I actually have no idea what Peter is going to be like in this roleplay, so I really doubt that I can guess any of the scheming secrets you've cooked up this time. I can't see any direction that you might have planned for him, because I'm still trying to wrap my mind around the entire character in general. I'm still unsure of what exactly I think of him actually. I don't know if I love him, or if I don't. If he was real, and I had a chance to work with him, I doubt that I'd like him--but then again, I think that I wouldn't know enough of him to formulate any opinions. So... I'm neutral I guess? Don't get me wrong, I love him as a character, but I'm still a little hesitant to express any opinion on him for some reason. Maybe I'm just tired.
Finally: Martin Freeman has a significant other, and this made me imagine them in a relationship like this. Q~Q staaaahp, Amanda Abbington and Martin Freeman are perfect together!
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