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Shadowcatcher said
Haru: Hmph. Someone needs to find a new hobby. *cracks knuckles* Why im gonna break his back! He'll never get to-!Me: *covers her mouth* No. bad Haru. No giving away secrets.Haru: *pouts* whatever.

Stop being adorable. >:C
Learning the Boring Stuff
Hisoka Uchiha and Kiyomi Hon-Sato

A collab between Fieryfly and Little Alice


Summary :

Kiyomi heading towards the Hokage Office and spending the day to work with Hisoka.


O-kay.

Since I am not interested in that kind of information, I will just talk about something else that is more of importance to the RP.

Does anybody know where Fox is? Seeing Chou just discarded kind of Mika's orders to drag/carry back Haruhi, Rai is need of doing that. And I haven't seen Fox around for some time. At least not since a few days.
Mika Hayashi
Kirigakure Jounin,
Team 14


''Annoying pest. Fuck. Off.''


The cold words of Mika were spoken as she glanced at Chou. The genin had approached her and had came too near to Mika's likening. It was highly unwise to approach a trained killer that distrusted you. The woman jumped, moving a bit away from Chou and something that was flickering in the light and was moving towards Chou's face. A kunai. The weapon was thrown before the jump to cut and warn Chou that Mika didn't like the fact the girl had approached her and tried to touch her, without any warning.

Landing on a branch, the woman briefly looked to the genin. Raising some killing intent, the jounin scoffed. ''If you want to touch somebody, you can go somewhere else. Fall back in line and do what was ordered. Else I will aim a second more and mark your forehead with a kunai.'' Mika coldly sneered. She found it strange that Chou had tried to touch her without any word or question. It felt out of line and that was why Mika had reacted as such. Further more, it was seriously starting to bother her that Chou was half listening to the orders. The fact Chou had pointed, thus ordered, the other two to kill somebody, was something that had been an annoyance to Mika.

In the opinion of Mika, Chou was getting really cocky and wanted nothing more to beat her up and teach her a lesson. To know her place. However, it wasn't the place nor the time. And if the Mizukage would learn that students were beaten and wounded because they were too cocky, that would mean trouble for Mika. Not something she wished to have either.
Rini Yoto
Amegakure Genin,
Team Samidare


So her new sensei was the Amekage?! Rini stared at him, unable to respond. What to say? Something deep and-.

Hearing the answers of her team members, she almost panicked. Their answers were so good! How could their answers be that great? Was this a set up? A genjutsu? Nervously, Rini's hands went to her shirt and grabbed the end of it. She had to come up with an answer that would surprise her sensei, one that would make her respected and loved by him. After all, he was the Amekage. So she could learn a lot of things from him. But what to say? Or how to say it?

That last question did it. She was on the verge of collapsing now. Opening her mouth, there first came no answer from it. She just stood there, with a slight open mouth, like she was either baffled or just looking stupid. Her cheeks slowly turned dark red as then an answer came out of her.

''Its making me wet.''


The answer was so simple, but then her eyes widened as she shook her head. ''No, I meant. Its making me st-st-stronger!'' Rini stuttered, not able to look up to see their expressions. Staring at her hands, Rini felt like running away. But she already knew what would happen. Next to the laughter or scolding, she would likely trip and fall on her face. She always ended up, falling. And failing. How could she think it would be different if she would become a kunoichi? ''I think the rain is what we need to endure. If the land can endure the rain, we should try it as well. Becoming stronger. I want to become.... stronger.'' The last sentence was nothing more than a whisper, filled with sad desire. Sad desire to not fear the opinion of other people.

Wanting that her own opinion would one day matter.
Kiyomi Sato-Hon
Konohagakure Jounin and Hokage Apprentice,
Team 2


Kiyomi sighed. The first mission of Team 2 was mixed. They had found success with managing to take care of the threat, the giant crocodile. But Leo had been missing out the action. Kiyomi placed her hands behind her head as she walked towards the Hokage Office. Dressed in her Hokage Apprentice garb, Kiyomi wondered what today would bring.

Her orders to her students were to group with Team 7's sensei, Kensuke Nimatsu. After all, while she would attend to her duties as the apprentice of Hisoka, her students would group with Team 7 to ensure that they would keep going on missions and further honing their skills. Sighing, the young jounin dropped her hands and placed them in the pockets of her pants, much in the same fashion as another Hon that was close to her. With a rather calm expression, she came near the Hokage office and looked up to the building. Some thoughts were running through her head, then some memories. First of a little girl with long white hair, trying to impress and surprise a certain Hokage. Then a young girl with long black hair that wanted to keep somebody that was very dear to her close, trying to fill up her free time with him and wanting to inherit everything she could from him, as knowledge and love. Kiyomi blinked a few times with her eyes, almost thinking she could see another girl with a different color of hair walking to the Office, but the goal was unsure.

Shaking the thoughts and memories off, Kiyomi entered the building and was allowed without any problem to the door that would lead to Hisoka's office. After all, her rank was known by the guards of the Hokage Office. Being the apprentice granted her such privileges, but they weren't unlimited. Knocking on the door, Kiyomi would wait until she would be allowed to enter. Brushing a lock of hair back, behind her ear, Kiyomi had the urge to look around. Somehow she always had the idea and feeling somebody was watching her when she was in front of the door of the Hokage.
Mika Hayashi,
Kirigakure Jounin,
Team 14


Mika noticed how her students were doing. The bandits were wiped out and each student was still standing. The eyes of the woman turned to Haruhi. Okay, save it for one. But they were alive and had each blood on their hands. That thought brought back memories of the training underneath the regime of the Fourth Mizukage. Then everybody had blood on their hands. Blood of the ones that were chosen to bleed, by the past Mizukage. A light shiver ran over the back of Mika, but she showed no revelation of her thoughts. ''Thats good enough. We'll leave the corpses as a warning that those who wish to dare to turn into scum, must face Kirigakure when they are on our land. Now,''

The head of Mika turned, looking at Haruhi. The right eyebrow of Mika was slowly raised as she then seemed to be annoyed. ''One of you drag or carry her back. I don't care who do it, but if you won't be able to keep up with me, you two will be punished for it. Now, move it!'' Mika ordered with a cold voice, before turning around and about to go back to Kirigakure. On a not so slow pace.
Am going to post asap, had it very busy.
Though seems that a bad joke is bad. Anyways, time to get writing.
Review of : Rin Yamakaze

Don't have much on the character, other than finding it having Chidori. Then it was confirmed in story that the technique was copied by a lot of shinobi, so I shouldn't be commenting on that actually. But I do have some things to say on the custom techniques in general.

-. Though they look in nice in my opinion, they are contradicting the fact that she has 'average' chakra reserves. Though with better control, you could say that you could use it in a better way and thus in theory enlarge your pool of chakra, I find it a bit odd. Like, ''a spiralling ball of massive Ranton chakra''.

Its a C ranked technique, but then is a technique about forming a 'massive' form of Ranton Chakra? That is a bit odd, because :

-C ranked techniques aren't likely to be nowhere around massive or much in such states.
- Her chakra reserves are just average. Even with a great (thus lower than high) chakra control, she could do this once and then actually be without any chakra reserves left.

Same goes actually with the other custom techniques. Its just that I think you need to look back at the jutsu rank and the way you word them. As I find that for example, the last one isn't really a C ranked technique. Throwing an actual shrapnel grenade that explodes in ''thousands'' of senbons that actually go through a target? Sounds more like S ranked to me.

That is my review so far.
Kiyomi Sato-Hon
Konohagakure Sensei and Hokage Apprentice

Team 2


Kiyomi looked at the big creature before sighing. Making a shadow clone, who would watch over as she would later send a message to transport the animal to another region. To another region where it wouldn't damage the local economy or people in any kind of way. That was better than to kill it here and now. Not that she had a trouble with that, but she thought it wouldn't hurt to not kill something on a mission.

With Hayate already moving, Kiyomi would catch up to him. She placed her left hand on her earphone communicator. ''Leo-kun, in case you hear this. Regroup at the village. We will head to the Leaf from there. I repeat, regroup at the village.'' She said and then nodded towards Hayate. Hopefully they could be back in Konohagakure as soon as they would be able.
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