Little Alice

Naruto : The Rise of The New Generations

Rini Yoto
Team Amekage.

Rini glanced in the mirror. Her eyes were looking at the reflection and frowned. The serious glance caused her nose to wrinkle as she was clearly not amused with something. Brushing a lock of blond hair back, Rini then decided it wouldn't really matter. She was geared up and ready. With that thought, she went to grab her raincoat. In a dramatic sense, the young girl turned around as she got dressed. The coat fluttered by the movement of Rini, who looked with a cool look in the mirror. A smile played over her lips as she found it funny how she already saw herself. High on top of a hill and then...

Falling.

Rubbing her head, Rini got up. She had been daydreaming while walking off a staircase. Getting up slowly, the young girl bite her lower lip. She had worked hard to graduate and today she would be assigned to a team. A team that would be led by somebody that carried the name Ryoku. The same name of the current Amekage. Rini wasn't sure if it was the same man, but if it was, she wasn't sure if that was a blessing or a curse. She knew the rumours that Ryoku was a just man that was reforming Amegakure. Already being part of the Fire Union, Rini wasn't sure if that was a really just move. Maybe he was a harsh and cruel man, only letting rumours spread about him being fair. Some leaders did that. Like the previous Amekage and if she had to believe the gossip, the previous Jounin Commander. The mind of the little girl started to daydream, but Rini bite her lower lip again. No, she had to f-

She tripped.

Not even having reached the door and she had fallen flat on her face. Twice! Cursing softly her clumsiness, Rini got up again. Her cheeks turned red as tomato's as she opened the door. She had the feeling a lot of people somehow knew she had fallen on her face, twice. But with an air of grace and dignity she walked out of her home, closing the door behind her. The green eyes had a flicker of light in them, the glint revealing she was excited to meet her team. No matter how the person would be that would be her sensei. Maybe her team members were nice people?

Deciding to not try to day dream too much, came too late.

''Auw!''

Rini felt the cold, wet stones against her cheek. Embarressed, she tried to get up quickly, before falling again. She fell on back and already could imagine people to laugh at her. But it was worse, they just ignored her. Getting up, Rini tried to act like nothing happened. But a store keeper came walking out. He had a smirk on his face, though his tone was worried. ''Are you alright, little girl?'' He asked. The smirk was still present on his lips. A smirk. Rini clenched her right hand for a moment. He thought she was weak. But she wasn't weak. She was a kunoichi of the Rain.

One that kept falling.

Timidly, she nodded as she looked away. Her cheeks flaming red as she decided to run. Run towards the meeting point. The store keeper grumbled something as he walked out of the rain. The lights of the streets, illumanting the way of Rini almost made her daydream. But she would focus now. Today she wouldn't fall again on her face. Today was a day of chance. Today,

*Splons!*

I hate... This.... so... much.

Rini had almost reached the field. It was just in sight and she could see two persons. What if that were her team members? What if they had noticed her fallen on her face? Getting up, she clenched her fist. A plan formed up in her mind. She wouldn't stutter. She wouldn't shut down, thus not able to show her strength. No, she would be acting without fear and with confidence! With a face, red as a tomato, she neared the person that stood in the middle of the field. Opening her mouth, she then lowered her head.

Instead of saying her name, Rini whispered something that couldn't be heard as normal words. Just some gibberish sound that made no sound. Realizing this, Rini tried to look up again, but failed as she had the feeling the first impression was already a failure. This caused her to just stand there, her head lowered in defeat. Today...

Was going to suck.

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-Blandman

Add any of the GM's and they will add you to the conversation. My skype is : alicehondemon

-Gamer

So far I am aware, the GM team is trying to do that. The rule of when one leaves that we godmodd the character, to work it smoothly out of the story is the same as when one is very inactive. I remember there were some guiding rules to jounin, that worked in the same way.

-Fiery,

I am sorry, will try to post now!

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Attention :

Though I am a bit neutral on it, I wish to remember people that we have the Skype chat or a whole board on the other forum to conduct spam. Know that the GM's have been mild on the first week(s) because the new people were needed to settle down, but remember that some of the GM's aren't fond of spam.

For reasons that they need to fish out CS's or request people to pm them the links. All things that make it just a drag before they can even review. Please use the OOC for IC related talk. And not just the nonsense of : Oh my character is ... A small and civilized discussion is always nice to follow. OOC reasons or posting or more or less tolerated when they are about your condition. As when you're going on a vacation or such and wish to inform the RP.
Think that I am not needed to explain everything in the finest of details, do I now? ._.

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Harumi Uchiha,
Konohagakure ANBU,

A Paper in the sand.

Part II

The watch didn't noticed anything. All what he saw before the darkness crept on him was the desert, in the night. Scratching his chin, was his last act before he gasped for air. He was being overwhelmed and wasn't able to scream for help or to warn the others. Trying to move is arms also became harder. In a rapid speed, paper spread over his body, exerting a tight grip over his body. Like it was a constrictor snake that was trying to crush his whole body. The last thing he heard was one single footstep before the darkness took him.

The same would befall to the other watches. There were three in total and Harumi had little problem to take them out. Taking out a kunai, she looked around. The rustling sound of paper wasn't that loud as Harumi knelt beside the man who had just been overwhelmed by paper. It was seen that he was still struggling at the jutsu that had taken him by surprise. Blood stained the paper and slowly the sand as well. The paper wrapped itself around the kunai, after it had made some room for it. Then as the man stopped moving, the paper moved back to Harumi. It looked like it transformed itself into smaller parts of her as she still was knelt down. With no foe awake, she could conduct her mission better.

A hour later.

Damned desert. Harumi panted. The sun was slowly getting up and she noticed the rise of the temperature. But at least her prisoner wasn't able to do much. Though she let him breath, he couldn't call for help or move. The paper kept him in place as she moved back, out of the desert. ''Just shut up. I don't like this either. You smell of something rotten.'' Harumi sneered. She had lost her patience with the fact the man still tried to break free. It was pointless as she had made sure her jutsu wouldn't fail her. She had after all placed a standard ANBU sealing technique on the captured Jounin. Looking over her shoulder, she was sure that nobody would follow her. How could they?

Dead people can't follow the living after all.

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Mika Hayashi
Kirigakure Jounin,
Team 14

The team was moving and they managed to approach the location of where the the hideout of the bandits would be nearby. The woman looked over her shoulder. The cold tone of Mika was heard as she dished out the orders. ''Its going to be simple. Each of you hide yourself nearby once I have given the order. No questions nor any trouble making. I will lure them away from their hideout and then you three need to ambush them on the signal I had showed before.'' Mika said. She wasn't sure how well her students would follow this order, but she would see soon enough if they were capable of handling a mission like this. Actually, if they were able to handle any mission with taking down somebody.

But as they approached the location, Mika gave them an order. ''Now, hide. You have two minutes to be vanished.'' She told them as she weaved several handseals. The woman with the stern and cold vanished into a summoned poof of smoke. Out of the smoke, Mika was revealed into a more casual set of clothes. It revealed more of her figure, but the cold look in her eyes hadn't changed as she landed on the ground. It was clear that she would lure the bandits with hiding the fact she was a kunoichi of Kirigakure. A quick glance was given to her team, looking if they would scatter and hide as they were told to. Mika then started to jog towards the location of where the hide out would be. Her eyes scanned the surroundings for any hints as she kept listening. Her expertise with the Silent Killing would be her asset against any ambush of the bandits.

Soon enough she heard somebody chuckling. Then some whispering. Leaves rustled, more than should be as there was no breeze. Mika stopped and looked around. The clothing that looked like it was tight against her body made it clear that Mika was breathing faster. At least, she breathed faster, but not because she was scared. She had to give the idea she was scared. It would be like a scent for the bandits to come out and then chase her. ''Wh-Who is there?'' Mika asked, in a wavering tone before laughter erupted from several throats. A bandit jumped out of the bush, trying to grab Mika from her right. It took all Mika's self control to not duck and plunge a kunai into his belly and rip a deep cut, so that his bowels would fall on the ground. More or less she had made a quick 'scared' jump and then started to run. The laughter and noises behind made it clear that the bandits were now chasing her. Making rude jokes and comments about their 'newest prey'. Mika only glanced once over her shoulder, her cold glare as she was looking how much of a distance was between her and the bandits.

Then as she approached the site of where her students were, Mika kept on running. Her eyes narrowed as she suddenly raised her right hand into the air and clenched it into a fist. It was the said sign and a few of the group of bandits became very weary. The most were still trying to catch Mika and a fast one tried to tackle her.

The horrific sound of bones breaking was heard as Mika glared at the group of bandits. The man who had tried to tackle her fell to the ground and didn't move anymore. A hilt was seen in his neck as blood slowly crept out of the wound to the ground. Mika then crossed her arms as she waited for the ambush that her students would perform right in front of the eyes of Mika.

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Kiyomi Sato-Hon
Konohagakure Jounin,
Team 2.

''Not sure. But we can be prepared just in case. Though I suspect that we'll do fine if we keep the contact with each other. So don't forget about the earphones.'' Was Kiyomi's answer. With her back to the others, as she led them, she couldn't see or notice Hayate's glance to her. Unlike him, she had no worries about this mission. Actually, she wasn't worried at all. In case the target would be more trouble than expected, she could call upon a troublesome summoning as well. It was just more of a mission to notice how the team work was going between the members of Team 2. That made her think.

Both of her students had bloodline abilities. Leo had the Crystal Release of the Hasewaga clan. A versatile and very deadly release. After all, Kiyomi had sparred often against Yumi and the latter was good enough with the Release to counter most of the weaknesses. Hayate wasn't much of a different story. The bloodline ability of the Hyūzu was a most interesting one and Hayate had shown he was more than capable of finding ways to also counter his weaknesses already. There was only one problem to both releases of her students.

That was her.

Both the releases of Hayate and Leo were in theory Earth based. Of course, their bloodline ability gave them an unique one because of their clan, but in the end you could put it under Earth. And while Kiyomi had managed to master an advanced release herself, she only knew how to fight against Earth Release. Neither of her students had Fire nor Lighting. Which made it not really easier. While picking up the pace, Kiyomi started to think about how she would train them, when she didn't had the same release. A light shiver went through Samehada, making Kiyomi frown. ''Hmmm.. We should arrive within two hours. Keep up the pace, Leo. Hayate.''

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Its still open and if you have any questions, then you can always pm the Sub GM's or the GM's. :3

Naruto : The Rise of The New Generations

Harumi Uchiha,

The Mission at the border.
A paper in the sand.

Part I

Looking from the top of the tree, the raven haired woman saw the group clearly forming. They were doing what they were tasked with. Going with a patrol to ensure that no Sand nin would dare to cross the border into the River Country, thus into the Fire Union. Harumi thought of the secondary objective of the mission. These past few days she had not notice a patrol of Sunagakure nin. Problem was likely that they were being on their own ground as they knew better than to approach the border of the Fire Union. The ANBU folded her hands together as she began to think. Though she wouldn't be failing Hisoka if she would come without a Sand nin, she knew better. He would likely remember it.

Thinking about how to complete both the missions, Harumi ordered that they would set up camp. She would finish the mission of capturing a shinobi of Sunagakure by herself at night. An idea was being formed in her head as she had an idea how she could capture a shinobi of the Sand without any high chance of a fight. Slowly as the night fell, the company that was under the command of Harumi made camp. It was around ten shinobi that was on patrol. After all, the Sand wouldn't likely dare trying to anger the Fire Union. Not after their last defeat a little while back. It was weakened and not in the state of being able to face the wrath of the Fire Union alone. Harumi waited until the time was right. Making sure that nobody would check again if she was sleeping, she would sneak out of her tent. The group was paying watch to their surroundings, but Harumi knew where every watch was stationed. Besides, the sensor was on the look for unknown chakra signatures. Taking the wager, she made her move.

After ten minutes, she walked up a sand dune. The temperature wasn't that hot at night, but Harumi disliked it here. The lifeless dessert, in her opinion, was a reflection of Sunagakure. Barren, annoying and most of all : nothing interesting. How one would call this barren place home was beyond her imagination, but then again she wasn't sure why those desert rats once had it in their mind to challenge Konohagakure. Likely the sun had burned their remains of a brain away. As she continued to mock the Sand, she noticed some light in the distance. A camp? Now she was highly on guard. Her plan to surprise and capture a nin of the Sand was about speed, surprise and being ruthless. Slowly she sneaked towards the camp. Licking her lip, behind the ANBU mask, Harumi narrowed her eyes. Slowly she formed the handsignal as she performed the jutsu.

It was time to strike.

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Nytefall, this is my review.

I think you forgot a section. You placed skills and traits together. Am not sure if you noticed, but the CS has two different sections now. Skills and traits. Please see some other CS's if you've having doubts what is correct and what not. Other than that, I am actually going to say I am again a Blood Release Kekkei Genkei. Not because I am against the idea, but the way to balance it is a hassle.

That and I find most of your jutsu not really C or D ranked. A D ranked jutsu that enables somebody's blood to melt through metal? To be fair, that would mean its highly corrosive or has a very high heat/temprature to melt through metal. If you would apply that to skin and bone, it would burn right through it. Faster than you would likely imagine. I would suggest to heavily tone the jutsu down. As for the regaining blood while sleeping? I am very against that. Blood that can be used for several things and then be regained like that is not really acceptable in my book. I would suggest to consider why she would need such a release. As I always suggest to newcomers : Think for what purposes you want to use the KG. Only for combat uses? Then better not use it. It will become something dull as you can't really use it for character development and on the long run, it will become not a character you'll enjoy to the max.

But that is my review as a Sub GM.

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Mika Hayashi
Kirigakure Jounin, Team 14

Mika noticed that Rai understood the lesson. Asking such questions would meet an answer from Mika they wouldn't enjoy. Seeing that the other genins stayed quiet, likely not to suffer the same sarcastic reply to a question, Mika kept leading them out of the Mist. The hide out was around a short distance from Kirigakure. Mika wondered why bandits were this close. Before she wasn't sure if bandits were present on the isle with the Fourth Mizukage in rule. But that was likely due him being the biggest bandit, she thought with a bite on her lower lip. It was strange to not fear that she was constantly watched as the Fifth Mizukage was a different story than the Fourth Mizukage. With them out of the village, Mika rose her right hand in the air. A hand that she held open before clenching it in a fist. ''A hand signal. When a leader does this, it means you need to strike. Remember it well. We'll move in when I say so. Those who dare to move before I give the signal will be left to fend for themselves'' Was the instruction of the woman.

The reason why they were after bandits wasn't because she was anxious for some action or because she deemed her students to be ready for it. Even worse, she wasn't sure if they would be sure for a real combat test. But they had shown some things she could be content with. For now she wanted to see if they would listen to orders. Else she would have to drill them, in order to make them listen to orders. Mika however would see what would happen. For now it was just to see how they would perform.