THe only thing I want to comment on is this
Razor-steel blades, reminiscent to scythes, acts as his 'hands' or 'arms', while his insectoid wings, usually lying flat on his back, sprouts out as razor-sharp steel wings when flexed. This allows him to move at a speed unparalleled, while his razor-sharp scythes are said to be able to slice through anything. His parents thought of him to be cursed, which is why he killed them.
I say its OP because I mean a Praying Mantis doesn't have ANY of that and thats just putting the pokemon in the RP which is unfair to use that want to just RP regular animals that have no arms like syches that said to cut through anything. Also that you can move at speeds unparalled is also OP I mean you might as well make everyone a pokemon at this point.
I say make him justa regular Manis with no extra stuff added, I mean Master Mantis in the series was awesome just as a manis and not some pokemon with super sharp claws and speed that can't be matched. Thats just my option.
So if you just make him an actual mantis and ot some killing machiene then i think you are fine really as well as maybe make yourslef less powerful your Kung Fu seems to make you unable to be hit at all and thats a bit unfair . I mean then why should we even have a dragon warrior your character could just kill everyone in the whole RP.
Buzz Kill. No pun intended.
Razor-steel blades, reminiscent to scythes, acts as his 'hands' or 'arms', while his insectoid wings, usually lying flat on his back, sprouts out as razor-sharp steel wings when flexed. This allows him to move at a speed unparalleled, while his razor-sharp scythes are said to be able to slice through anything. His parents thought of him to be cursed, which is why he killed them.
I say its OP because I mean a Praying Mantis doesn't have ANY of that and thats just putting the pokemon in the RP which is unfair to use that want to just RP regular animals that have no arms like syches that said to cut through anything. Also that you can move at speeds unparalled is also OP I mean you might as well make everyone a pokemon at this point.
I say make him justa regular Manis with no extra stuff added, I mean Master Mantis in the series was awesome just as a manis and not some pokemon with super sharp claws and speed that can't be matched. Thats just my option.
So if you just make him an actual mantis and ot some killing machiene then i think you are fine really as well as maybe make yourslef less powerful your Kung Fu seems to make you unable to be hit at all and thats a bit unfair . I mean then why should we even have a dragon warrior your character could just kill everyone in the whole RP.
Buzz Kill. No pun intended.