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The Twelve Labours: General Discussion

Obnoxiously long but this is what I had planned for my story

So this story was supposed to go very differently. It originally had three parts: Ascent, Struggle, Descent.
Things that were supposed to happen include:

Lumina going to the surface with the help of Ulsa's transformation cloak
Lumina meeting Princess Erica, the daughter of the leader of the island tribes
Lumina going to the Iron City, a dark and industrial place.
Lumina finding out that the island tribes hunt Merpeople and have killed her oldest brother. *this is as far as I got in writing*
Lumina running away with the help of Erica.
Lumina and Erica fall in love.
Lumina and Erica fight Ulsa as she comes to the surface to reclaim her seashell necklace, since Lumina failed.
Ulsa was in love with a human: Erica's father. He has the necklace still around his neck from his younger days, and his boat is swept out to sea.
Lumina and Erica fight Ulsa out at sea, Lumina tears the necklace from Erica's father's neck, and throws it at Ulsa.
Ulsa smashes the necklace. It represented her last shred of humanity. It was the only thing holding her back from becoming a god.
She vanishes after zapping Lumina with lightning, which makes her permanently a human, but also a cripple. Erica and Lumina live together away from the tribes in a hut, where Erica tends to Lumina for the rest of their lives.

The Elder Scrolls: Corruption

Still heeeere. Working on something for this right now

The Twelve Labours: General Discussion

A note for all reading my story: ending was soooo premature. I don't know how many words my entry was, but I had around 5000 by the time I realized I wouldn't be able to finish it in time. It was at a point in the story where there was no possible way for me to end it there, so I decided I would have to backtrack and delete a whole bunch and put in an ending somewhere. This is in no way the ending I intended, I had such bigger plans for this entry, but time constraints made it impossible for me to put as much effort into this as it deserved.

The Twelve Labours: General Discussion

Had a plan for a massive storyline but I still have like 4000 words to write and I don't have the time or energy soooooo

TIME TO PUT IN AN EARLY ENDING

House of Night: Wrath of the Gods

@MiddleEarthRoze I had a picture but it appears it was removed from the internet

The Elder Scrolls: Corruption

Lyreia sat in the back of a darkened vehicle, slowing blinking herself awake, before falling back into a deep sleep once more. The stuff her captors had forced into her certainly was strong. Especially since Lyreia had never done skooma before. Her head swam, and suddenly, so did her body.

She was underwater. That was the only way to describe it. Her auburn hair lifted into the air as she floated, revealing her Elven ears. Revealing her shame. She opened her eyes, and was floating in space. Just as suddenly as she had been there, she was gone.

She laid down on a dusty bed of hay in a prison cell, as she was approached by a hooded man. She clutched to her chest a silver box, holding so tightly that her knuckles whitened. She heard the prison door open, and then felt the first of many blows. The cloaked figures were all around her, kicking her like a dog. One of them reached down and tried to rip the box from her grasp as the rest mercilessly landed blow after blow on her body. They drew their swords, and started to plunge their blades into the less vital parts of her, slowly killing her off. She tried to fight, but she could hardly move; a thick fog was over her vision. Out of the fog emerged a dark figure, different from the rest. It raised a glowing hammer and brought it down hard against Lyreia's chest. She screamed in agony as her body collapsed into nothing.

She woke up in the back of a dimly lit carriage, with some kind of makeshift roof built to keep out the light. She groaned as she ripped open her shirt, still feeling the open wound bleeding on her chest. She looked down, and saw instead a swirling pattern.
"What the fuck!?" She yelled.
"What're you doing back there!?" A rough voice yelled, and she scrambled to fix her shirt. The carriage stopped, and footsteps sounded around the side. Lyreia lay in the carriage, breathless, as the back doors opened, and her captor smiled inside. In his grubby hands was a silver box.

The Sunken

Jessica Walsh

Bold, Beautiful, and Lovestruck.

Jessica is a beautiful person, inside and out. She has an obsession with her lover back home, and constantly talks about him. She doesn't take anything from anybody, and won't hesitate to call you out for your mistakes.

Biography

Jessica was born to a rich family, however she was the product of her mother's affair, and she was always shunned for it. In all her years growing up she has become the underdog in the fight for the family inheritance, which will soon be inherited as her grandfather was diagnosed with terminal cancer. She wanted to win the fortune for her and her lover. She will constantly moan about how she lost the game, and how she'll never inherit.
Jessica brought a locket with a picture of her lover held tightly inside.

House of Night: Wrath of the Gods

Mircalla

Mircalla

"I didn't ask for everyone to follow my lead"

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Personal Information

Name: Mircalla

Birth Name:Carmen Kingston

Nickname: Calli

Birth Date: October 29th

Age:18

Sex:Female

Sexuality:Heterosexual(?)

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In The Mirror

In Depth Appearance:
Mircalla is a vision of darkness and beauty. She stands at about 5'8, with a general modelesque air about her. Her hair is a crow's feather black, when you look into her eyes, they are seemingly deeper and darker than the night itself. You will never catch her without makeup on, making her cheekbones look like they could cut through diamonds at any given moment.

Clothing Style:
Mircalla wears black at almost all times, and when she doesn't wear black, she's wearing a dark shade of another color. You won't catch her without heels on, and certainly not with an outfit on that cost less than $1000 at least.

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Delving Deeper

Likes:

• Fashion
• Power
• Being acknowledged
• Books
• Freedom/Independance

Dislikes:

• Being told what to do
• Adult males
• Unnecessary actions
• People who cause drama
• Religion

Fears:

• Men
• Loss of power
• Death

Habits:

• Checking her nails
• Interrupting people
• Sighing loudly while others speak

Personality:

♦ Prideful ♦ Vain ♦ Arrogant ♦ Scared ♦

Backstory:
Will send to GM, and will be revealed IG

Extra:

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Vampyre Information

Mentor:~~~

Timetable:~~~

Affinity:~~~

Familiar:
Mircalla's cat is named Karnstein, and is a slim cat whom you will rarely see. Karnstein prefers to stay unseen, and his pitch black coat makes that simple. You may catch a glimpse of his eyes, one blue and one amber, but that will be all you see before he turns tail and returns to the darkness. Karnstein gives Mircalla a sense of who she can trust, by purring or growling when she mentions a person.

House of Night: Wrath of the Gods

Perrrfect
Will be submitting my CS later today

RPGC #7 -- Loyalty/Resistance Voting AND Discussion

I've read through them all and I will post official reviews on the rest later, but I @vote Firebrand because it fits the themes and I love the story and as a reader that's what's most important to me.