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so are they all meeting in the great hall and then going to dinner or is dinner at the great hall. i think you may have said it somewhere but im currently getting over the flu and my mind is scattered.


Dinner is at the Great Hall. Sorry if it was ambiguous.
IC thread is up!

The OP is a little shorter than I would have liked, but I wanted to keep it ambiguous what everyone else was doing. Feel free to either go to the Great Hall, or already be there, as you prefer.
Gisela knelt before the altar of Naram-Sadai, a richly-decorated stone table carved with saints and supernatural figures. She wore a checked blue and red tunic, a sleeveless white doublet with a goose of goldwork thread embroidered on the breast, a shoulder-length ermine cape, white silk stockings, and a pair of pointed leather shoes. The chapel was mostly empty but for herself, Vulmar, who was standing a few feet behind, and a pair of Royal Guards who waited patiently at the door which led to the palace yard. The chapel was fairly small, and was lit by the last dying rays of sunlight which passed through the beautiful stained glass. A riot of color was cast helter-skelter across the flagstones that made up the floor. But Gisela was too preoccupied to notice the visual display before her.

She was praying, or at least that's what it looked like. Mostly she was just contemplating her activities over the last few days. The day before yesterday she was officially crowned, an event which coincided with the Feast of Saint Clovis the Lawgiver. Much of the city had turned out to see doddering High Priest Pius anoint and crown the new monarch in the Old City, as did the nobility of the Crownlands. Most of the next day she accepted fealty and homage from dozens of lords and ladies of every description. Today she had inspected the Royal Guard, had a brief audience with Lord Mayor Tomas and Metropolitan Razo, and then received the fealty and homage of her recently-assembled regency council. And between all these solemnities, a thousand feasts and a million babbling conversations. Or, so it seemed to Gisela. She was exhausted, not to mention stuffed with food, and were it not for Vulmar guiding her through every obscure ceremony and point of etiquette, she was quite certain she would have collapsed into a swoon before her coronation was even over.

She was unsurprised, then, when she heard her chancellor whispering at her.

“If it pleases Your Grace,” he said softly, leaning over her. “we should make our way to the Hall, now. Your Councilors should not be kept waiting.”

One more feast, Gisela thought wearily, and it's over. Things will be some manner of normal, then. At least for awhile, she hoped.

“Aye, my lord,” she replied, rising to her feet. “I am finished here.”

The young Queen bowed her head slightly toward Vulmar, who gently placed Ruby Crown of Viexmeur on the royal head. The gold and jewels glittered dimly in the gathering darkness. As they then made their way toward the door, the pair of guards lifted their poleaxes and followed after their charge. As she walked across the courtyard, Gisela briefly stopped to consider the shrine that stood on the grass. The slab had been there since time out of mind, and Gisela had heard it predated the construction of the palace around it by more than a century. Naram-Sadai, god of her fathers, crowning Clovis, her ancient forebear. After a brief reflection on religion, she continued walking toward the huge keep that made up most of the palace. Crossing the threshold into the vestibule, she strolled toward the stairwell before taking in the Great Hall.

The places were set on the dais for herself and her councilors. The central seat was accented with gold, and behind it was a banner bearing King Childeric's own personal arms. Artisans were still working on the replacement. She noted with satisfaction, however, that chairs had also been placed Sir Aldrich and Lady Valericka. Though neither were technically members of her Regency Council, she trusted them both and very much intended to include them in business of state. The food was not yet in evidence, however, and Gisela considered that she might not be so overstuffed as she though. Perhaps she could eat, a little at least.
ALSO, edited the char a bit, gave him some counter magic with a fancy, very fancy new weakness. Also: Holy order.

Should I replace Montisle with that?


Go for it, if you'd like. Sir Samael (should a paladin be addressed as sir? I've always thought so.) should make an interesting addition to the Council.
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I like it so far. Conditionally accepted.

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Hmm. I definitely like the character. I'm actually a little surprised no one else came up with a crusader-type already.

Fiat voluntas tua.
Aye. The geography I made up for Pridania doesn't match the map at all- not unless the island on the shown map has at least... five different states on it.

And I'll also have to revise my character's history, considering that now there's no borders to have raids and wars on. Just open sea and nothing else.


Well, the island looks to be more than half the size of the area occupied by the Foronian states, of which there are several. I imagine there would be space enough for other polities. Also, there's no reason to suppose the western fringe of the map gives way entirely to empty sea. There certainly could be more islands to the west.
Where did this map come from? I have to redo several bits I wrote about both my character and Pridania itself because... well, I had no idea there was a map, until after it popped up and it conflicts with everything I wrote with it.


That's my fault. I should have thought to put the map somewhere in the OP so someone wouldn't have to skim through several pages of OOC discussion to find it, and I should have read your sheets a little more carefully. I didn't even catch the parts about geography.
I will be withdrawing my interest from this RP with awesome potential. I've been forced to reconsider my available time with regards to my history exams. Have a great one!


I suspected you might be dropping out. Thanks for letting me know.
Okay everyone, I think I'll start working on an OP for the IC thread over the next couple of days, and should have it up by Saturday night. This should give our last couple players a chance to finish up their character sheets.

I'm planning on opening the action just after everyone has sworn homage and fealty to the High Queen, since making everyone act out a ceremony like that would take forever. There'll be a dinner in the Great Hall after that, which should give all the characters a chance to introduce themselves and get acquainted. The actual business of governing the realm will begin the next day.
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So with magic you said normaly they do hand movments and mutter unknown words. Would you be okay with the tribals useing like songs or poems with dance to cast spells. Maybe even have it so multiple priests can aid another priest in casting a spell, can see a big fire with many of his people danceing around and singing while one casts a spell.

Also was woundering if you would be okay with kamahl bringing about 25 of his people with him, about 10 priest and 15 Hunters so they can better learn the culture and expand the horizons of the Clan within the kingdom... [-Snip-] Maybe have the crown lands prepared for this and for the duration created a semi-permanent living area just outside the outer walls of the city, set up kind of like wooden walls and a few wooden buildings but mostly room for their tents they can have their own guards so no one stole their stuff. I'm sure the last thing the kingdom would want is a bunch of pissed-off Barbarians breaking down doors searching for their stuff LOL.


Yeah, I think song and dance could very well be a method for spell-weaving. Kind of like DnD bards.

As to retinue sizes generally, I'm not going to lay down any specific cut-off but try to keep it reasonable. To your 25 specifically, I think that's perfectly acceptable. And quartering them outside the city walls in their own little hamlet is an excellent idea, since that's exactly where the civil government would want to keep them. I'm sure they'll find 'Kam Town' perfectly to their liking. Some of the bolder townsmen might even visit to trade.

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I like it, but there is a small issue. The CS should have as many weaknesses as strengths listed. I counted three advantages under your 'skills and abilities' column, but no corresponding shortcomings. If you throw some weaknesses in there, you're in.

@OfWindAndRain

Good weaknesses. Accepted!
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