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"Ronald... of the Gilgamesh Federation? Is that some branch of Fenrir that I haven't heard about?"

The soldier wasn't surprised by the mispronunciation of his name, what with the gas-mask, but the rest of what the girl said raised yet another question. Said question being 'what the devil is a Fenrir?' Judging by what she said, it was some sort of organization. Furthermore, given her ignorance of Gilgamesh's existence, she was either uneducated, or from a place entirely outside the Astragius Galaxy. The former seemed unlikely, but the latter was preposterous. Then again, so were aliens and absurdly oversized swords. Deciding that strange was the word of the day, Ranald figured it was better for his health to just roll with the punches.

"Whatever. Here, let me get that for you, Ronald."

Besides, he had more important things to attend to at present. Like freeing his arms, for example. Calmly complying with the girl's instruction to relax his shoulders, the soldier simply waited for the matter to be over and done with. Thankfully, that blade of hers was sharp, and cut through the chain in one go. With his hands now unrestrained, Ranald took a moment to stretch, relieving the stiff feeling in his arms. Much better, now I just need to find my gun, my AT, and a way off this rock. But first.

"Thank you, ma'am. Now, I don't believe I ever got your na-"

Before he could finish, the pilot was rather rudely interrupted by a series of explosions, followed by the earth violently shaking. Despite Ranald's best efforts to stay steady, another spike of pain sent him tumbling to the ground. On second thought, finding some painkillers first might be a good idea.
Due to turning around, Ranald hadn't so much as caught a glimpse of the phantom entities prior to their departure, which was all well and good, really. As for the pilot's attempt to catch the girl's attention, it had succeeded, albeit with some unexpected results. The girl spoke to him, and it was in a language he could comprehend, although her accent was still distinctly foreign. Better than nothing, I suppose. But, her phrasing and tone of voice... is she scared? Maybe it's the pilot suit?

No matter the reason, the girl had asked Ranald a question, and he was obligated to answer. Turning to face her, Ranald revealed his own face, still concealed by the admittedly unsettling helmet/gas-mask of his suit. Trying his best to sound non-threatening, Ranald spoke up.

"Yes, very much so. My name is Ranald Colbert, I'm a soldier of the Gilgamesh Federation. As you can see,' Mr. Colbert turned slightly to indicate his manacled hands,'I'm in a bit of a bind at the moment. Help would be much appreciated."

While Ranald's words were muffled somewhat by the gas-mask, they should still be comprehensible to most folks.
Finding the source of the noise took less time than he initially thought it would. Shortly before Ranald reached the end of the cell block, a very large thing promptly smashed through the wall at the far-end, sending the pilot stumbling backwards. After recovering from a fresh burst of pain, he took a closer look at the thing in question, completely mystified by the entity.

Is that an Armoured Trooper? It's certainly big enough, but I don't see a camera anywhere, and the design doesn't look like anything from Gilgamesh or Balarant.

Hang on, what the devil is that?
The soldier had just taken notice of the writhing worms within the thing's joints, which indicated that it, or perhaps they, were alive. While it wasn't particularly frightening (piloting an AT will have that sort of effect on you), he was intrigued. Assuming it wasn't some sort of top-secret military hardware, the creature may very well be a newly discovered species. Was it sentient? Could it communicate? Did it know a way off this rock? How likely was it to brutally murder him? While the latter two questions were the most important to him at present, Ranald had countless questions regarding the creature.

His eagerness to observe the supposed extraterrestrial was cut short, however, as an unfortunate(?) chain of events took place quite rapidly. First, something struck the alien and sent it tumbling backwards, causing it to fire off a shot from the vaguely gun-shaped appendage on one of its arms, striking the ceiling. The weapon demonstrated an impressive degree of destructive force, as it caused the ceiling and a solid chunk of the hallway around it to collapse, burying the creature in rubble.

Guess I'll have to settle for looking at the carcass. As Ranald wandered over to the extraterrestrial's resting place, however, a fresh sight caught his eye. It was another human, a woman, from the looks of it. While her attire was a tad odd, it hardly stood out, especially when said lady was wielding an impossibly massive sword with apparent ease. After the AT-sized alien, this was almost normal in comparison. Almost being the keyword. Ranald shook his head, using the pain to remind himself that this was all very much real, before considering his next action.

Talking may not work, as the girl looked foreign, so she may not even understand what he was saying. The gas mask hardly helped in that regard either. Hand signals were out of the question, so that left an age-old method: body language. Kicking a rock towards her to catch the girl's attention, Ranald followed it up by turning around and pointing insistently at his now visible handcuffs. Here's hoping he didn't come to regret this decision.
Having done a spectacular job of playing dead for quite some time, it seemed Ranald's body wanted to shake things up a bit. Namely, it wanted him to wake up, preferably now. When Ranald did so, he opened his eyes, whereupon he bore witness to absolutely nothing. Or, to put it another way, complete and utter blackness, as far as his eyes couldn't see.

Am I dead? The PR fluid didn't go off, and the last shot I remember hitting the AT grazed the head, so what got me?

As his train of thought ground to a halt, Ranald finally noticed a key indicator that he was alive: his heartbeat. While he was still curious as to how he survived, that matter could wait. For now, he'd focus on getting his bearings. Thankfully, his inability to see was not due to blindness, but rather a complete absence of proper lighting in the room he was in.

Once his eyes adjusted, Ranald was able to make out his general surroundings. He was outside his AT, still in his suit, lying face up in a sparsely furnished prison cell. Mr. Colbert's arms were bound, and his gun was missing. Nobody else seemed to be around, but Ranald could just barely make out the sound of something in the distance. Might be the wind, faulty piping, or if I'm lucky, someone else. I should investigate.

However, the moment he moved to rise, a piercing pain in his head sent him right back down. It seemed he didn't escape that last battle entirely unscathed. Taking it much more slowly, Ranald eventually drew himself into a sitting position, followed by the soldier shakily rising to his feet. Once he'd steadied himself, Mr. Colbert walked up to the cell door, and gave it a tentative nudge. Bizarrely, it was unlocked, allowing him to make a fairly swift exit. For a supposed prison, the security was awfully sloppy, suspiciously so. Sure, the place was abandoned, but someone had to have brought him here. With any luck, investigating the noises he'd heard would lead to whomever was responsible.

Thus, Ranald set out towards the source of the racket.
Name: Ranald Colbert

Universe: Armoured Trooper VOTOMS

Canon or OC: OC

Appearance: Face. Physically, Ranald is a lean and athletic man, with a build that is well-suited to his line of work.

Age: 33

Personality: Mr. Colbert is a soldier, and thus does his best to remain calm and level-headed on the battlefield. Panicking would only get him killed very quickly, especially when piloting an AT. However, in situations where his life isn't at stake, Ranald is far from unsociable. In fact, he can be rather chatty.

In addition, after suffering a head injury, his memory is a bit spotty, particularly in regards to his military service. He recalls enlisting in the army and later joining the Red Shoulders, but none of the specifics of his tour of duty. He knows a man by the name of Colonel Pailsen was his commanding officer, but not what sort of man he was.

Abilities: Ranald is fairly proficient in regards to piloting an Armoured Trooper (a.k.a. Vertical One-man Tank for Offense & ManeuverS, or VOTOMS), as is expected of a former member of the Red Shoulders. However, he is far from the best, and wouldn't stand a ghost of a chance against a Perfect Soldier, for example.

In addition, as a result of his incredibly lethal line of work, he's picked up a basic understanding of first aid. While he's no surgeon, Ranald can treat minor injuries, and if they're beyond his ability, at least stabilize them for a time.

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Faction: Presently Factionless, most likely to join up with Shocker+ or the Sentient Milieu.

Background:
Name: Ranald Colbert

Universe: Armoured Trooper VOTOMS

Canon or OC: OC

Appearance: Face. Physically, Ranald is a lean and athletic man, with a build that is well-suited to his line of work.

Age: 33

Personality: Mr. Colbert is a soldier, and thus does his best to remain calm and level-headed on the battlefield. Panicking would only get him killed very quickly, especially when piloting an AT. However, in situations where his life isn't at stake, Ranald is far from unsociable. In fact, he can be rather chatty.

In addition, after suffering a head injury, his memory is a bit spotty, particularly in regards to his military service. He recalls enlisting in the army and later joining the Red Shoulders, but none of the specifics of his tour of duty. He knows a man by the name of Colonel Pailsen was his commanding officer, but not what sort of man he was.

Abilities: Ranald is fairly proficient in regards to piloting an Armoured Trooper (a.k.a. Vertical One-man Tank for Offense & ManeuverS, or VOTOMS), as is expected of a former member of the Red Shoulders. However, he is far from the best, and wouldn't stand a ghost of a chance against a Perfect Soldier, for example.

In addition, as a result of his incredibly lethal line of work, he's picked up a basic understanding of first aid. While he's no surgeon, Ranald can treat minor injuries, and if they're beyond his ability, at least stabilize them for a time.

Equipment:



Faction: Presently Factionless, most likely to join up with Shocker+ or the Sentient Milieu.

Background:
Not bad at all, in fact, I've been wondering for quite a time why Mr. McCool hsn't been used in any official works, given how much Typemoon loves their Irish Servants. That said, I have a few points to make.

- His parameters are good, for the most part, but with an E rank Prana stat, his NPs would be very hard to use, unless he has a master with a very huge reserve, or is willing to dwell in soul eating. I advise to either raise this and lower one of the others, or increase the cost if his NPs.

- Given that his first NP isn't something meant to be able to fight or have any other special characteristics I think that it should better left as a kind of summon spell that he's able to do (like Medea's skeletons).

- The shield is ok, but a NP (just give me a range and targets) like that should have a High cost, since it's a wide area effect that can tip the scales of any fight.

- The Spear is good the way it's.

- The last NP is actually more complex, since it dabbles in Rider class expertise (summoning Heroic/Mystic beings), but since I've already seen official things like that on a Saber servant (Sakura Saber) and it's not particularly OP, I'll allow it as is. Though, here's a catch, you have to chose between either the shield or the horn, both would be overkill, IMO.


-Noted, I readjusted his parameters.

-Valid point, I'll just move the dogs to the Skills section.

-(Addressing the third and last points) I think I may have done a poor job of explaining how the shield works. Essentially, it's just an extremely loud noise, akin to a thunderclap. It would temporarily disorient anyone close to the origin of it (unless they have very good hearing protection, or they're deaf), creating an immediate, but brief, opening. Since Fionn is comparatively slow by Servant standards, he wouldn't be able to use this to dispatch multiple people effectively (unless they're all standing right next to each other, which is highly unlikely), limiting how effective it is offensively against more than one bloke.

Also, since it's just sound, the effect would drop significantly with distance, so while it can be heard from incredibly far away, it wouldn't help all that much against someone attacking at a distance. As for range, I'm not 100% sure on how it's quantified in Nasu terms (do the numbers represents metres, feet, yards, the length of Hulk Hogan's moustache, ect.), but I'm guessing the maximum effective range would be much smaller than how far the sound can travel. As for targets, I guess 17?

But if that's still too much, I suppose I'll drop the shield and keep the horn.
WIP, now I just need to get the personality section done.

Dibs on the one with the pointed stick, i.e. Lancer.
Edward Evans

Before the bartender could answer Mr. Evans' questions, one of the bargoers decided to do so himself. Well, he only answered his second question, but it was still quite helpful. Just as Edward was about to thank him and head for the station, a commotion regarding bounty hunting sprung up. A bloke named Snow had been killed by a 'witch,' and his bounty had been switched over to a man whose getup vaguely resembled a grasshopper, called the Masked Rider. Well, glad to see I'm not the only one out there traipsing around in a silly outfit. Anywho, I'd best be going, Robert probably broke one of the pumps again.

Unfortunately, when Edward moved to rise from his seat, he heard a table flip, followed by time slowing to a crawl. Then, precisely one second later, it was back to normal. Upon turning around, he immediately took notice of two things: a hideously deformed abomination, and some kind of mechanical bat monster. Despite the former being vastly more threatening in appearance, it seemed to be focused on dealing with the later. That, and talking about toasters and crime-blood.

With that in mind, Mr. Evans briefly considered leaving the problem to the meat mountain. Then he recalled that he could shoot lasers from his hands, and nearly slapped himself. All this guy could do was slow time for a second at most. Even if he turned out to be more than he could handle, the muscly monstrosity, along with the others who seemed to be joining the fight, could back him up. That, and it was a nice excuse to figure out what else he could do. Thus, the blue-skinned cyclops decided to step into the 'ring', just as a barrier of wind poofed into existence.

Raising his hands, Edward pointed them, palms open and forward, at the bat creature. Now, I managed to fire these by accident. So how do I do it intentionally? Thankfully, it was actually quite simple. Once he focused on the idea of firing, the suit seemingly did the rest. Now, while he was prepared for a pair of thermal beams to erupt from his hands, what Mr. Evans did not expect was for a third beam to fire out of the suit's 'eye.' Fortunately, while his sight was obscured, it was for a mere moment at most, and only in the centre of his field of vision. I'm going to have to adjust to that.
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