Well Mulder, I was thinking the mini-sun would be a red dwarf which is the smallest and lowest burning. I guess calling it a moon isn't correct, the idea was that its orbiting Andromeda close enough to affect temperature and some other things, but not close enough to scorch and burn everything. Maybe calling it a moon is wrong. I'll reword it to just be orbiting rather than a moon.
Just reread it. Sounds great! Hopefully, I'll be able to join when the real roleplay rolls around.