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@Ink BloodRoughly 10-12 feet.

@goodmorrowtouNo putting yourself down, they were solid posts and we enjoyed them! have confidence, man!
@ShienvienBut hehehehehe.

Monster kills.

More like Monster's Kills.

@AshganLooks good, I like the idea of obtaining memories from certain monster kills. Will have to implement that!
@goodmorrowtouAlright, looks good. Thanks for the edit. Feel free to jump into the IC when you are ready.

B e a s t i a r y

LAMENTOR


S t a t u s
ALIVE


L o c a t i o n
The Broken Crypt




Certain legends from the Mortal World speak of such a creature that supposedly guarded the gateway to Purgatory; originating as two, separate elite guards of some unknown God who was charged with the absolute defence of the underworld, his two protectors - after centuries of restless onlooking - are said to have fallen in love and in turn conspired to kill their creator so they could be free together. This malcious, ancient, unnamed God uncovered their conspiracy to be together and promptly put a terrible end to their dreams and their heresy.
The two were supposedly fused together in some abhorrent ritual, their eyes ripped from their heads and encased within great cages of stone, their tongues mutilated and burned so they could not share a word for the rest of eternity. As the final punishment, they were finally cast into some dark, hellish land to suffer for forever. It is said that they have since been driven mad by the lashes of time.
This is how they have gained the name that is feared so widely. They are said to lament every moment they rebelled against their God.
@ShienvienAh, sorry.

So age disparity is not something I had originally considered, but in case of your character I feel it would be somewhat appropriate if you required such a device. Feel free to implement something like this if it helps you.
The real waking memories would be a good thing to have as a reference, I read through your memory sequence like four times when you first posed the sheet, it melted my eyes. :)

@Dark JackOh, how I enjoy perfect. You don't see many well-played psychopath characters nowadays.


M o n s t e r E n c o u n t e r e d

L A M E N T O R






From the deep it emerged, once veiling itself in the inky darkness drifting from the depths. It's sleep had been disturbed by the clamour of reckless wanderers above, and the sudden movement of one from below? Humans, no doubt. Numbering three, no more, no less. The lamentations had grown louder between their first incarnation and the hasty attempts of a hunter helping his prey; the two above forming a rushed alliance to escape unmolested from that tomb of ancient creatures most foul.

Whatever came forth to consume the three uncouth wanderers had been, if only for a moment, hindered by a smaller creature; somewhat akin to a vulture of the tombs, scavenging certain kills that did not belong to it. A puppeteer beast: animating the remains of some long dead cadaver to strike forth at the Hunter, to drag him to the depths before losing it's grip and slithering back into the deep darkness... and into the maw of the Lamentor. A screech of inconceivable horror echoed through the darkened halls for a singular moment as, somewhere in the blackness, the Puppeteer's body was torn asunder by a fiend more abhorrent than it. Then – silence. For a brief moment there was nothing, not even the incoherent rambling of the advancing Lamentor.

"Something's coming," whispered the wounded man, somewhat prophetically. His fear was greeted by the resumption of the maddening babbling and the clockwork tapping of some nightmarish legs. Then, in the thin light that poured from the upper entrance to the tomb, it caught the light for a repulsive moment: two heads encased in pyramidic cages of what seemed to be stone, fighting each other with silent lashes of forked tongues as though they sought control of a singular body independently. It's titanic frame seemed to have been forced and bound together from two separate pieces, lashed together with thick iron bands and rotted, ancient wrappings. It swiftly glided back into obscurity, only faint wisps of it's ragged clothing stayed stationary for a short while before they too trailed off after the beast.

"Memory memory... Sing fire... Hide secrets... Madness. Madness. Little men... Friends in the night... A third. A third approaches. How... Very... Important..." it whispered, slowly...
@goodmorrowtou Hey, I almost missed the sheet you posted. It looks good, but could I make a small request that you do a small edit of Dempsey's 'Memories' section to be a little less... colloquial dialogue. I enjoy characterisation through unique speech just as much as the next guy, but I had a little trouble figuring out just what was going on. Also, i'd recommend a few more memories; they tend to not stick around for too long. Other than that though, your character is pretty much ready.

@Laue Still good though ;)
I was too afraid to as that very same question ;) If you see anything specific that needs to be added, let me know.
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PMing NewSun about this cause I had an idea- but either way, Prince will be introducing himself after the newest time jump.


Indeed. Churro has already explained to me how he wishes to introduce his character so we have something to work with from here. I'll keep the time skip, I figure we can post retrospective dialogue and actions if anything was dying to be said.
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