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We'll have to see if Laue is up for posting this weekend, and it's down to whether Atomika and Churro wish to do a quick post about their escapes. If not, i'll do a little setting-prompt to set you up for what your characters will be facing without the Turncloak on your escape path.

Also, note to all:

I missed out a critical line of dialogue in the Turncloak King's last speech-thing. I've edited the post, but I advise going back to the last section and re-reading just so that things go smooth.

@SirBeowulf@Ashgan@Ink Blood I know of the situation Ink is in with school right now, and you're lucky to be in your separate arc to not slow others down, but I don't want you guys to feel stranded and unable to take part because of his current situation. Is there anything I can do to get you guys going again, or are you happy to wait?
@OneEyedChurroOh, you clever cookie >:)


Both still stood firm, for, to them, what had seemed like hours. Neither gent really knowing why, but simply doing so as if by some unspoken rule. It was only with the sudden blanketing of shadow that either tore their eyes away and began to survey the environment.

To Riley the darkness was unsettling, regardless of its abruptness it almost appeared to be...pulsating and writhing about them. Far-off, distorted voices howled throughout the wood, and a stampede of bizarre strides grated against the gravel, unseen to Dempsey.
His right arm rose shakily in the direction of the fellow man. In what seemed a futile attempt to bridge the eight foot gap between both. As he did this he was turning his head about trying to follow the encircling movement, hearing taking up the slack where eyesight now fell short.

Pick on the other hand was only distracted by the light for a moment. His gut twisted as his mind made a connection almost instantly to the one thing that had changed recently, and so his attention became fixed on the shadowy stranger before him. For a moment, Pick thought to light the lamp on his head but instantly thought better of it as he remembered the last time he’d tried to see in the dark. The sound of his guts spilling onto cold stone echoed within his mind and he shuddered, still refusing to remove his eyes from the stranger. “Puzzle piece,” he muttered, a mix of pleasure and disgust in his words.

In a serious and stern voice he muttered just loud enough for the other to hear, never letting his head turn from the direction of the noises. “We are being stalked. Do not pick up tail and run…”.

Riley paused for a moment before speaking again in the same tone, “This...thing is not too small, take your spade in hand...then slowly get up against my back.”

He was acting on old instincts, a mental muscle which was still very taut. As memories grew clearer again both hands slowly but surely made for the two daggers sheathed behind him. He took one upright by the grip in his right, and the other flipped to the blade, taking a stance as if ready to hurl it. Initially this movements where not all his own but as clarity returned he remembered the sort of man he was and still must certainly be.

Pick listened to the man’s request, a grin now spread across his face as the aching in his back began to flare up again. “Yeah, so you can kill me instead of whatever’s out there. Right?” he accused, his breathing becoming uneven once more as he took his shovel in both hands. Pick lifted the shovel over his head as he prepared to cave in the man’s skull, ready to strike him down for being stupid enough to turn his back in expectancy of cooperation. Before he could swing though, Pick’s eyes caught a glimpse of the tangled mass he had in arrogance mistaken for part of the trees. He’d become frozen, shovel still over his head but eyes fixed on where he had last seen movement. Whether the thing had become still or moved fast enough to now be part of another shadow Pick had no idea, and nervously swallowed as memories of the last thing he’d met in the dark continued to flood back. “Okay. Okay puzzle piece, for now you have my back,” Pick muttered, eyes darting about fearfully as he turned around so he felt a pressure in his ribs. The handle of the tool in his back pressed lightly against the bare flesh of the other man, pushing the tool at an odd angle which elicited a grunt of pain from the larger of the two.

Riley omitted a soft growl, "Good to see you're hearing reason. No sudden moves, keep your senses sharp.", still facing away from him.

Muttering. Muttering. The two had begun to see some sort of reason, to unite against that which would be their killer. But the beast was not a hunter of opportunity, and would rather strike it’s foes in a moment of zealous fury than wait for them to show fear and to run. Swiftly it strode between the umbral shapes of trees cast upon the dirt, twisting between light and dark inwards to the centre of the dead arboreal circle - where the two men conspired to survive. They watched.

It watched.

Both knew of the others’ presence.

And for a moment, there was silence.



Quietly, it edged through the murk. With one spindly and unimaginably long arm that had been furled between folds of dirtied flesh, it struck to the side to distract the shovel-holding man before dashing forward to strike the other.


Dempsey heard the assault long before it was seen; the dirt kicking up behind its frenzied lunge. Moments, precious moments taken to judge the direction, cogs beginning to slowly gain momentum in his head. His body was twisting left, before he even knew it, as the arm wound up in preparation. The man at his side was blindly swinging now, far off enough to not bother Riley's movements, but still haphazardly. A stone cold gaze met their attacker's; if there was enough time to think, he would've thought about how ghastly the creature was. Yet there was not.

"EeeeerrRRRRGGHH.", was the only thing to leave his throat. In part to sheer mindless frustration and also due to having to force sore muscles into movement.

Riley's comrade was just coming to the realize their enemy’s new route, slowly turning his head. Eight...nine...eleven...some uncountable number of eyes met two eyes, both filled with a different sort of fury. The beast was extended to deformed arms towards his torso, trying to disable Dempsey, but the left arm was a few seconds quicker; launching the dagger in full force careening for the main body. It quickly cleared the two meter wide distance well before the abomination could. Riley watched and waited as seconds ticked by ever so slowly, formulating contingencies and counter attacks to be used on a seconds notice.

Within seconds the beast was upon the faster man, who had impaled the beast through the rib with a small blade which had brought forth a small torrent of thick, black ichor which did not quite seep due to its viscosity, rather it bubbled forth from the wound, consuming the hilt of the dagger almost entirely. But this was but a flesh wound, one that would do little to subdue the madness and hunger of the creature that was upon them. Using its full force in the realisation that it had lost the element of surprise, it crashed into the assailant, slashing and stabbing with all of its wicked limbs in some attempt to rend the man into slivers. It was far larger than he, and would be nigh on impossible to push it from his body unassisted as the two exchanged torturous blows. If nobody were to aid him, he would surely be killed…

But he was not alone. The beast did not care to consider the second man.


To anyone person not versed in fighting, the scene would’ve been that of something alike to a frantic dance. The one on one battle was not long lived but was quite the rare sight. Riley could barely throw himself to keep up with the beast as his ally stood frozen by the sight for some moments. The creature in its full stature was at least a few heads taller, and nearly as fast as the worn down man in his prime. He twisted about the ground maneuvering around the beast’s thrashing appendages, while occasionally parrying off an arm with a quick swipe by his right hand blade.

He turned to the dumbfounded fellow, “OI!”, he looked back to the monster, then back to Pick, “By the lor-”, he dodged left of a shooting limb, “HELP ME KILL THIS, LAD!”.

Pick’s mind swam, the tangled mass of shadows before him bringing back the most unpleasant of memories. It was the shadows, all this darkness belonged to the creature and they had broken one of it’s rules. They wouldn’t tolerate rule breaking- no, if you did one thing wrong that was it. It wanted them dead- they were dead- they…

Pick screamed as the fear in his belly boiled up through his being, charging forward and shouldering aside a set of grotesque flailing limbs. They paid no proper mind to him, moving almost independently of one another while the majority of them focused on the puzzle piece they had bellow it. “IT’S MINE!” Pick screamed, grasping his shovel tightly before driving it upwards into the creature’s side. He’d hit a sweet spot; the shovel dodging bone and pushing through the horrid mass of flesh like it were soft earth as hot ooze bubbled from the massive gash. The spade was gone, inside the creature, and trying to do something helpful Pick tried using this leverage to push the thing off or away. The creature’s life blood spat from the wound with the application of the force, splashing out over Pick’s arms and onto the ground as he desperately tried shoving the thing off.

-

”Pock!” came a voice from afar, lost in some hazy shadows that obscured the source of a familiar utterance. ”Prack, are you there?” it called out frantically.
The beast wailed and thrashed in pain as the black lifeblood poured from multiple gashes across its central mass. Slashing, slashing, striking, punching. But it seemed to recoil from the voice every time it pierced the night as though it struck the beast like an ethereal blade. Its resolve weakened under the heavy presence of the Hermit’s voice which now seemed to echo with the raw power of elemental thunder.

”Pick!!” he called once more, emerging from the darkness, his gaunt frame accentuated with thin slivers of light that danced from dewy reflections of the black sun from the dampened mud underfoot. His undeniable shuffle advocated the truth of his presence, but upon laying his eyes upon the brutal scene before him, his entire demeanour changed…

”Foul beast, lay not your hands upon these men!” he cried with a fury unbeknownst to those he sought to aid. The voice he shouted with was not one associated with him normally, instead taking on the form of a much more youthful, intimidating man. It rumbled and shook the rotted trees, and the air seemed to shimmer in response to him. His walking stick glowed dimly, washing away a thin field of the darkness with a dull, dusky amber light. The beast that was upon the younger men was flung from its position of power, as though it were swatted away by a much stronger, unseen force, slamming against several trees, smashing their rotten trunks to pieces.

When the beast had been slung away, Pick’s shovel had almost gone with it and in an effort to hold on he was dragged forward a few feet which left him stumbling to avoid falling flat on his face. “Edge pieces,” he gasped, rolling his shoulder to be sure it hadn’t popped from it’s socket while the one hand that still held the shovel clenched. The black ooze squelched between his fingers, running down the length of his spade and onto the cold, dead grass beneath it. “Corner pieces are important,” he murmured, thoughts beginning to haze as he looked on towards the creature which was now softly illuminated by the light of the Hermit’s staff. It flailed wildly among the bed of shattered bark that had been created for it, many of it’s limbs working to try and right itself while a select few grasped tenderly at it’s open wounds.

Riley stood there as the beast writhed about on account of the elder’s presence. In the minute that the beasts attention had been averted from ripping him a very fresh new one, he had simply observed it, almost totally unfeeling. But as he watched it squirm, an animalistic rage had welled up inside him. To tell truth he would normally never be too crossed with a beast like this, it wasn’t anything personal he guessed, just a bloodthirsty ghoul acting on instinct. But his rage seemed far off, miniscule, it was anger directed to his own frailty, weakness. He wanted this thing dead. He needed this thing torn asunder by his hands alone...he needed to watch it squirm under his blade. Thoughts of shoving aside the old man and lunging for the final blow came to mind. His features tightened, a blood thirsty scowl bearing the tiny canines of man stretched down to his chin. Eyes shrank away under the furrowing brow; his face showing signs of a return to instincts. An energy unlike any before reinvigorated his body; he felt taller, stronger, keener, and hungrier than ever in his natural life.

“Bloody- fucking- mess, this is,” Pick groaned, trading the shovel between his hands as he tried to shake off what blood hadn’t yet dried over them. For the moment he ignored the man he’d been sent to find, looking towards the hermit and smiling for a reason that wasn’t hilarity for the first time in what felt like an eternity. “Thank you. I should have said so earlier, but thank you,” Pick told him, believing still that all this was mere delusion. Whatever mental trap he’d fallen into, inside this world that defied possibility, Pick believed perhaps escaping only required the right pieces to fill in what was missing. The hermit was one, an edge piece, like those on a puzzle that you always find first. This other man had a part to play too; otherwise, Pick reasoned, his mind wouldn’t have constructed such a character. “It’ll all fit together,” he breathed, his words nearly inaudible even to him. He felt relieved, and now that his mind had time for other thoughts Pick’s attention was drawn to the other man who’d now noticeably tensed. “You okay there, puzzle piece?” he asked Riley, placing his free hand upon the man’s shoulder.

The voice of a kins-men...a hand held by reason, Riley remembered what he is and what he had always been. Hunger shrank away, leaving him with only the exhaustion. Riley’s entire body relaxed as his senses came back to him.

Slowly he nodded his head, “I’m..aye yeah I’m alright.”, turning, he looked to face the other two members of this small triage. “I s’pose we should make way from here then? If it is a ,“we” ,then?”

From there, the Hermit shuffled from the dark, the illumination of his staff fading back into the gnarled wood. He seemed to have returned back to his old self, not one wracked with some arcane power of the most eldritch kind.
When it was visible, he pulled a crooked smile, his sparse teeth forming a somewhat heartwarming grin.

“Hello young’uns!” he cried. “It looks like we should get going! Shall we make haste to the canyon? At least before the Spider awakens again from its slumber?”

“Gladly,” Pick replied, his joy having faded as his mind once more became occupied with the riddle of this land. Despite the ache in his back and the vice on his mind, he was still feeling somewhat better though. As the hermit started his shuffling once more, Pick began to follow after, feeling lulled into a sense of compliancy that allowed him time to think. Briefly he looked back to be sure the man they had retrieved still followed, but otherwise let his eyes rest on the invisible path ahead. I never really liked puzzles, he thought to himself, huffing in displeasure at the thought.



The Turncloak could not remember, for one reason or another, why the star hanging there, so lonely, captivated him so. Even amidst the chaos that encapsulated the scene so rapidly and without warning, he took more than a few moments to watch the darkness swirl across the star, like a drop of ink dropped into clear water. It consumed, devoured, swallowed the light. Just like that, they were plunged into darkness. It was a familiarity that the Turncloak did not wish to recall. He had died once when the light had begun to turn. He remembered that much. But maybe once in a time where he was not of this land, he had died whilst the sun had fallen just below the horizon; shadows marking death. Shadows.

Death.

He furrowed his brow, still unfeeling to the situation unfolding around him. He stood there like a bulwark as the trampling of hooves and crashing of rocks sounded closer and closer by the minute. Screaming, growling, hungering.
He had always felt like his memories had been on the tip of his tongue, a half-remembered dream whose content was but a single prompt away. And perhaps this darkness, surrounded by so many, would be the prompt he so desperately required. he closed his eyes, squeezing them tightly shut as if to cast away the chaos, if only for a moment so that he may clear his head for what was about to come.

A cloak flapping in the wind of some highland plain… At a sunset. Darkness falling. Beside another.

”I give myself to you…”

His voice would sound. He knew this.

“Until the end of time.”

“Are you sure,” she asked. “T-t-“

"͏̲͎͎̗T̨̮͇̹̣͚h̨̙͓̦ḙ̩͚r̬̤̖e͖̬͔͓͠ i̠̳̦̪̙̲̦s̹̖͉ ̺̲̩͉̤̯̫n̻̗͍o̶͎̤͔̠͈ ͉͍̱̯́ǵ̠̮o̹̰̠̠i̪͖n̲̯̹̺͝g̴̯̠ ̱̳̀b̰̙̺͙͖̹͔a̹͙c̳͇̬̥k̭͖͇̦"̪ ̤̘̠̺̣͕͓

͔͍̤"̘͕͚͈͠D̴͖o̷̯͓̺̱̠ ̴͔̘͕͖̭͍̰y̬̹̩̰͘o̥̻̮u̧͖͔̺͈̝̺̜ ̹̩̹̭̬̝r̘̗̹͍͡ͅe̱͔̻̟̖ͅn̨̦̪̙̘ou͚̭͝n̟͖͇̝̞̮c͢e̲̘͓ ̛̪̗̳̥͔̬y̦͎̝̜̝͟o̢͇͚̬̹u̘͚̮r ̖̹͖̖͉͓͢ͅK̴̮̤̟i̝͇̰͕͇̝͞ņģ͍̦̹̳̖ ̞̰̖̥̲̻̺f̜̞o̺̳̖͜r͓͟ ͔͙͚͇m͓̞̥̹͉͈̻e̟͜?̮͓"̺̳ ̨

”I do” he had said, and then… nothing.


No. No. This was not right. This memory was not his.

Think. Think!

"DO YOU RENOUNCE YOUR KINGHOOD FOR ME"

"I DO"


He opened his eyes, the chaos now flowing all around becoming once more a part of his mind. But it all seemed to flow so slowly, as though his epiphany had overshadowed the the relatively insignificant matter of the Turning Light. How could this be? Was this memory his? This memory was his. He cast the doubt away in his mind, for a false memory and a real one felt different inside one's self. It was like a puzzle piece missing from his mind and his sanity. Everything had become clear. The mountain. The mountain. The key.

For him, this was not to be. But the others could have a chance if they were to be set on the right course. Maybe they would be the ones to break the cycle. Loyal subjects and kingslayers alike, those Men and Women who were to break the flow of eternity and death, to break free from the encroaching darkness. He knew what had to be done. He would not see them all die. Not here. Not now. The Blood Golems had arrived.

They snarled with inhumanity and evil, blazing down the valleyside walls from the puzzled haze above. They were huge and fearsome, unlike the weakened and frail empty men of the land. Their arms were adorned with vicious weapons of bone, sharp as razors. The fury in their vacant, black eyes spoke verses of their intent to use them. They circled the group as only pack hunters could, their heads lowered and their jaws slick with saliva, hanging open in expectance of the meal to come. The Turncloak King raised his halberd, stabbing it into the ground as a sign of defiance, and unbuckled a yet-unused shield from his back. He raised himself to his full height, and step forward from the group, whose panic was evident in the face of such brisk danger.


"You must leave this place!"
he cried to those he had gathered.

"Do not trust the Hermit!"




"Find what I have lost."
he shouted even louder, urging them onwards.



"Go!"

"GO!"


"Find the Crown, find your way home!"


He turned his head to face the three Golems now threatening his life and those who had followed him to the canyon. He raised his blade, and brandished his shield.

"Tell me, creatures of the Empty Land...


Which King do you serve?"
@NightrunnerEpic hour-long google searches. I just search what I want, don't find it, change a word, don't find it, change another word and hopefully find it. It's a very drawn out, contrived process that makes me want to die. But thanks!

Yes, I can't wait for some holy sweet murder. Oh god. I can't wait.
The Anuriite Basin

Jungle Depths - Wrecked Turret

-Pvt. Areffon Warder-







Shit. Shit! Was the first thought that came to Aref's mind. It had all seemed too easy, too quiet. Why would he lull himself into a false sense of security? Stupid. Stupid. But maybe it was just a technological malfunction. Maybe it was just the scanner picking up the motion of some solitary bird rustling though the canopy. Yes. That seemed plausible, and it wouldn't even be the first time it had happened. His mind raced with possibilities, denying the very real possibility of hostile contact in hopes that if he believed it hard enough, it would not come to be.
The others had heard the piercing beep, too. Fords almost shit himself, and the rest of the team lowered themselves into the undergrowth to conceal as much of themselves as possible. All but the sergeant, who calmly severed radio contact with high command and slowly but steadily made his way to the wrecked turret as a means of cover.

And then there was silence. Just for a moment. Where the empty wind funnelled through the winding verdancy with bellowing cries to emphasise the eeriness of the alien world, and where the gently wafting of unusual leaves above made Aref a little calmer than he had been. He lowered his rifle and took a moment to stare at them; dancing, swinging, twirling to the rhythm of the wind. Hypnotic. Mesmerising. The wind was growing stronger, stronger still, and they seemed to lean away from each other, as though in fear of some greater event.
Aref had seen this before. He had never wanted to be a soldier but he knew the signs when he saw them.

"Incoming orbital insertion!" he screamed to the squad who were content to not stare longingly at the leaves, the only telltale sign of the drop.
"Take cover!"


And then, just as quicly as he had noticed the first indicator, the sound erupted through the jungle. A screaming, wailing screech like no other, the sound of steel repelling the force of the entire atmosphere opposing it, the terrible howl of some godforsaken skyborn demon crashing and tumbling to the ground. The leaves shook and the trees rumbled, the men could feel it in the ground, Aref lost his footing for a brief moment as the rest scrambled to lay prone to avoid such a thing. And then came a dirty streak of fire, scarring the air with black smoke that lingered for far longer than its creator had.
After that - a crashing sound. The sound of crushed branches in the distance. Then the rumbling stopped, the sound stopped. Just as abruptly as it had begun.

The sergeant poked his head around the frame of the turret, demanding a role-call to see who was hurt. Fortunately nobody was, despite the wounded ego of Aref for falling flat on his behind during the shake. He didn't think that anybody had seen him, thankfully.

"Sounds like a crash landing, sarge," Beric piped up. The sergeant nodded his head.

"Probably come to secure the area themselves. Fuck," he muttered to himself.

"What if they have support?" Fords asked, somewhat erratically. He was scared. Probably for the best, Aref had thought.

"Preemptive strike, lads," the sergeant replied. "We've got no choice. Those drops don't come in alone, so I reckon they'll be packing some-"

He was interrupted by the muffled, shrill screeching of one of the native beasts. And then of gunfire crackling. A scream. A dying scream, perhaps. And then the dying scream of whatever warlike creature had come across the crash-landed party.

The men looked to each other uneasily. Aref felt that familiar nausea in his belly. He keeled over, clutching to his gut as it provided him some mild relief from the discomfort.

Fords looked down at him, and then back at the sergeant. "Don't say it, Sarge-" he protested.

"This is not a fuckin' democracy, Fords," he reproached, turning to face the soldier aggressively. "We're going in, and we're killing every last one of them before they kill us,"

Aref couldn't hold it in any longer, and vomited across the forest floor.

---

Once more they weaved through the forest after Aref cleaned himself up. This time, however, they moved with purpose and intent. They were the hunters, not rightened animals waiting to be hunted. They had the drop on the enemy this time, the sergeant had said. He would not listen to any other plans. He was determined to eliminate the hostiles before they had a chance to react. Aref hated days like this. Hell, he hated this. He hated being on this godforsaken planet with these godforsaken people, killing people that he didn't even know. He had no gripe with them, no real reason for doing what he was doing other than he was told to - forced to.

He thumbed the barrel of his rifle. It was loaded. Primed. Ready. A tool built for killing. Made by the lowest bidder, and for what reason? To secure an area of alien jungle that a hundred years prior, every nation was happy to go without knowing it even existed.

"Fuck," Fords whispered, holding his hand flat to signal that the squad should hold tight. "Fuck fuck fuck," he whispered again through the comms.

For a moment, Aref was confused. Why were they stopping? But when he mustered the courage to lift his head to look forwards rather than down, it became clear. They were right there. 'Hostiles'. Hostiles who were on their knees in grief. One of them was crying, and another was consoling the affected. 'Hostiles'.

"Jesus..." Aref mouthed to himself.

The rest of the men scattered into the trees as to not provide the enemy with a direct line of sight, instead concealing themselves in bushes and leaves, the barrels of their guns all aimed on the grieving 'targets' ahead. He dropped to his belly, doing the same but with no intention of firing off a single shot. Evidently the others did not feel the same, as when the very quiet voice of the sergeant through the intercom requested that they were to fire weapons free, the jungle came alive with flashes of light from their rifles.

Aref just lay there, though, sobbing through his helmet, his weapon staying cold and passive. He wasn't sure he could watch as bullets whizzed through the air. He didn't want to guess how many people were about to die.



Kol'Khen, City of Gods

Vanericko Sector

-Mjr. Aiden Reson-







Aiden Reson had not necessarily always wanted to be a soldier, like a great many of the Venusian forces on Anuria, but unlike some he had grown to love the life. He joined before conscription was implemented, doing it mostly for the money and the glory at first; never really believing in all that quasi-political crap that the government spewed in their propaganda campaign, but if anything were to reel in the girls, being a veteran of a great interstellar war seemed like a solid way forward for him. He had always been a bit of a meat-head, a grunt, a patriot. His family could trace lineage back to the original Venusian settlers and back to those who took initiative in fighting for their freedom from Earth. And hell, Aiden was not about to let long-dead 'wrinklies' have all the glory.

When he actually spent time on Anuria, however, things changed for him. It became less about patriotism, and he cultivated a real and very true desire to help the native population who were unable to defend themselves. It became not about him, but about them. About protection and aid. This realisation led him to request a transfer to Ceres Company several years into his tour; the company that existed to defend native interests and, primarily, the defend the sacred site of Kol'Khen from other, more aggressive initiatives from other, more aggressive nations.

And today was his lucky day. He hadn't lost his desire to fight, he merely complemented it with a strong moral code and virtuous intent. Apparently the EFS, the so-called 'Omegas' had come out to play. Command wasn't sure of their intentions, but if their actions within the last few moments had been indicative of it, then Aiden was fairly certain they were going to do their best to present themselves as gods to the natives.

"Damn, that's shit is fuuuuuucked" he cried to Lt. Teron, standing on the opposite gunnery-point to him. He had to scream his lungs out, as the wind lashed past with astonishing ferocity. "Still!" he shouted once more "Gotta love riding shotgun on Dropships!"
Lt. Teron smiled at Aiden, personally unable to gather the strength to call across the thundering hull of the vehicle. The two often leaned out of Io class Dropships, finding freedom in the wind through their hair, and adrenaline in seeing the battlefield below.

The ship was accompanied by a Callisto Class gunship, some of the best support High Command could offer at the time; brimming with guns and missiles, energy weapons and shields, that thing was not going to go down easily, and Aiden felt a whole lot better with one of them flying by his side. Their objective was not far, perhaps a minutes flight further: one of the temples housing a wealth of sacred native artefacts and, importantly, a statue of the God Vanericko. They had received anonymous intel that that was where the EFS planned to strike - the information was like a godsend, with exact coordinates and all. Back at camp the men had joked about having a guardian angel. Fitting for the Holy City of the natives.

The plan was to shock-and awe the intruders from above, forcing them out of the temple before gunning them down and dropping soldiers to re-secure the temple for the natives. It didn't seem hard to pull off, and Command was even willing to donate a Callisto Gunship to the cause.

Aiden smiled at his partner as the dropship began to slow, as the wracking wind began to die. They were slowing, and they were slowing fast. Aiden didn't have a single moment to make a snarky comment before the Callisto gunship, in all its armed glory, sped ahead of them, unleashing a torrent of what could have only been hellfire upon the temple below.
Well I had originally planned to introduce them as an alien species a little later on, but I get the impression that some people envisioned / assumed them to be Humans that colonised Anuria upon discovery. I had to really figure out which route to go down, so any input would be valuable and appreciated.

Sorry, random double post.
Well I had originally planned to introduce them as an alien species a little later on, but I get the impression that some people envisioned / assumed them to be Humans that colonised Anuria upon discovery. I had to really figure out which route to go down, so any input would be valuable and appreciated.
Fantastic, i'll get to a response to Sigma soon.

And a note to all, i've moved the Current Events to a titanpad linked in the OP. This is so that both Skepic and I can edit it with new information as it happens. Feel free to check it out as often as you need to keep up to date with the most recent events on Anuria, but I would ask that you refrain from editing it directly without the consent of Skepic or I. MUCHO GRAÇIAS, team Anuria!
@ShienvienWell you write well, so I like you. Did before and still do, so we can be done with this topic post-haste and continue our foray into the unknown.

But you do raise some interesting points, mostly ones concerning the nature of characters you play, and it might even be a wholesome topic of discussion to consider. I'll leave this one open if anybody wanted to continue the conversation in that direction, but other than that i'd like to think that we all avoid treating somebody different based on gender, and it's just a fun fact that will be essentially forgotten in a few days - in the nicest way possible, of course :P.
Hey hey, just going to pipe in from my phone at work. I will note at the moment that I have not had the time to completely read through your NS, @WanderingRebel, but I will offer what I have on the subject.

While in general I agreed with Skepic and the others' evaluation of the sheet regarding the flaws, I find myself a somewhat lenient God in this situation because deep down I know that we're all going to have our forces horribly murdered, regardless. Now of course it is bad form to explicitly say that any force in an NRP is the best in any aspect, I can appreciate the miscommunication is presented writing style for the application. I too have fallen into the trap of attempting to write a NS as a propaganda piece in the past and it is a truly difficult thing to do, especially without appopriate graphics and such, and as a result I would warn away from that style this time.

I think what we failed to address isthe fact that your sheet is actually [i]really, really[\i] cool, so bear that in mind. At the end of the day it just needs some reworking in specific places to make their power a little more ambiguous. There are no strongest nations in this universe or the conflict would have been over long ago.

Anyway, that's my input, I'll continue when I finish the sheet when I get out of this hellish work I hole.
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