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What makes you think that she was written to like it? Were there any indicators?
She's written to fall in love with him, so the tropiness isn't hurting her at all here.
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She's written to fall in love with him, so the tropiness isn't hurting her at all here.
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Hmm.. well, for one, it depends. Maybe that situation doesnt work for you, but how does the main character feel about it?
She was written to like it. But that's just bad writing.
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Hmm... how so, if I may ask?
It's all just far too obvious and has no amount of subtlety. Why even have a love interest if he exists to do nothing but prop up the main character?
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The deuteragonist setting things up to make the main character look good. Maybe it's intentional? And act of love perhaps?
Maybe. But it's done poorly.
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Oh? is it intentional?
Which part?
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Interesting. How is he too helpless?
It’s like everything he does is a setup to make the main character look good. He never solves the main problem himself. The formula is getting boring.
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Hmm? How come?
He’s a little too helpless, and the buildup for his love interest with the protagonist is far too obvious. She’s a much more interesting character.
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*gently places my hand on your shoulder, looking to you*
Pretty good book, eh?
*Turns the page*
It’s not bad. I don’t like the deuteragonist very much, though.
*breathes a short sigh, and teleports to FB's castle, walking in*
*Sits by the roaring fireplace, reading a book*
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