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@Vita: edited my character's longsword material.

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To the regards of weapons, why does he need so many?

For his character, what particular weapon type would he wield?

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Bluebe123 said
Don't the Gods predate the Pecklirr and Yuclok?Yeah, 752 would be pre-medieval... Unless it's a newer calender/system... (Think, BC to AD)

True, true.

I have to ask, where did you guys get the inspiration for the world for this RP?

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To add on to what Patriarch said, those weaknesses don't just have to be in the form of a combat deficiency. It could be a glaring flaw in his personality that would lower his disposition with the other party members.

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One suggestion is maybe span the years out. Make the world feel a little older. 752 years isn't that long at all. Maybe have a race the predated the Peckliir and the Yuclok.

Your average Orc, Elven, Dwarven, Barbarian, ect Roleplay! Please.

@Empath: What if the plague you were talking about turns people into undead after they die? Let's say 3 days after the victim dies, they come back as a undead warrior?

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@Exodus: Another name for that class could be Champion too. Just a thought.

@Vita: So is my character accepted?

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VitaVitaAR said
Hmm. Only thing is that the more likely race to try and break through the Veil by force is orcs/goblins, though there might be some less pleasant humans.

I edited it again. The humans who tried to break through were bandits and marauders, and I also mentioned the Orc/Goblin raiding parties.

Just a quick question, what are the views of the humans of Velt towards the High Elves on the other side of the Veil of Tears?

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@Vita: I edited Va'laran's backstory. Hopefully it fits better with the lore you added.

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VitaVitaAR said
@Exodus: Going to give you some time to find pictures, but the bio seems mostly fine. I do have a question, though, why is he called a Warlord? It's a little misleading, I'd go with something like "Tower Warrior" because of his shield.@TheRider: Okay, um, there's some things here now that I've got more time to think out my response.I'd really have liked if you discussed vampires with me beforehand, I do want everyone intending to bring in a new race to do so. Shadow manipulation is also rather vague, and while I said backstory is optional I'd like to know what this promise he made is.@NobleArchangel: Okay, most of it is fine but there's one glaring thing that I am sorry is not yet in the first post. High Elves probably do not fight one another due to the origins of the Veil of Tears. At the very least High Elves beyond the Veil don't.I'm sorry, I'll be getting up an entry on why very soon.

Alright, I was drawing inspiration from the Ayleids from the Elder Scrolls. A lot of times the Ayleid city states would fight amongst themselves. I have nothing to go by in terms of lore so that is what I fell back on.