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"I'm afraid I don't know very much about the agricultural conditions of the northern lands, so any statement I may make will not hold much truth concerning the matter."

"Very, eh..nobly put.

Dalsarad had to admit, though was only now just realizing, the girl sounded very educated. If he recalled, she hadn't mentioned receiving any. Did Lords often educate their maids? Dal seemed to recall some acting as teachers or wards for lower nobles, but he'd assumed those were already educated elsewhere. Maybe she had picked it up from her parents- maybe they were educated. Perhaps there was some schooling program for the working class that Dal's parents simply had no desire to send him to; certainly seemed reasonable, given how much his father wanted him to work each week. Dal made it a point to ask the young rider about it later.

"Where's your family, then? Why aren't you traveling with them?"

Bit of a sensitive topic, but Dalsarad wouldn't ever make progress towards getting over it if he didn't talk to anyone about it.

The farmboy cleared his throat, "Well, my fath-"

"Why haven't you been enlisted in the militia?"

Dal's teeth clicked as he slammed his mouth shut; felt his heart melt into his stomach. His face flushed red with a multitude of feelings- anger among them. Had the young rider eluded that he was a deserter? That Dalsarad had chosen to be on this caravan instead of giving his life defending his home?

He looked back towards Lea- her knuckles were turning white from clenching the reins, and she looked tense. Didn't try looking at Dalsarad. Maybe she hadn't meant to say anything, but that didn't make the question hurt any less. In truth, the young man was unsure of what to do. He was left flabbergasted at the suddenness of the question- he wanted to yell, cry, and not say anything all at the same time. Dalsarad clenched his fists as hard as Lea was her reins.

"I'll, uh.." He trailed off, not quite sure what he was going to say. Didn't like to say anything if he wasn't one-hundred percent sure of it. Besides, she didn't seem to be listening, anyway. He simply patted Lea's horse's head a few times and moved a little farther up the caravan.

Dalsarad was a few carts ahead of where he had been when he finally came to and noticed the tuft of smoke the others around him seemed to be perplexed by. A pair of littler ones near him- couldn't have been older than ten years of age- were gossiping as to what it could be. One mused it would be the Varyan Emperor burning at the stake, while the other simply assumed it would be a campfire made by other travelers, akin to the caravan. At some point they both looked up at Dal- perplexed perhaps by his armor or sword- who smiled back at them. The caravan was reaching the crest of the hill now, and the two young ones were excited to see who was closer to being right.

"Oh shi-" Dal caught himself; there was little ones near him, after all. The grim cavalcade came to a halt. Before them was an overturned and burning wagon- its contents (But not owners, thankfully) were strewn about the road.

Well, in all technicality, one boy was certainly closer to being right than the other.

Dal moved to the front of the caravan, taking the scene in. He unclasped his shield and held it in his left hand while the other nervously hovered the hilt of his saber. The guards were convening, but Dal noticed some of the youth were making their way towards the overturned wagon. That could prove very problematic, especially if the offenders were still around. The last thing Dal- or anyone, for that matter- wanted would be for someone to be captured, or worse.

It's okay, I was tired of feeling safe here, anyways. He thought to himself as he followed behind two others- one boy and one girl. The boy sported some knightly-looking plate while the girl was dressed much more lightly. The latter suddenly stooped to search a pack from the less fortunate wagon.

"Woah, easy with the sticky fingers." Dal took a swipe at the pack but missed as he didn't want to stop moving towards the wagon. He caught a small glimpse of the girl's face- she was older than he thought; was probably closer to his age. As was the boy, whom he addressed next after jogging a moment to catch up to his horse.

"Don't see any bodies. Dunno if that makes me feel any better."

I'm gonna get working on a post, as well.

Porsted.
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If Opeth and Turisas had a baby.
Hooray! I'll have an application up tonight, might PM you some questions between now and then.
@innertt I've only read The Name of the Wind, but I agree, the system in that series is interesting.

Brandon Sanderson is another author who does a great job of making interesting magic systems in fantasy, but I think his are all a little too much for what we've been talking about.

But yeah, I like where this is going. Really subtle and mysterious.
Thanks!

I do need to ask how everyone feels about magic. I'm not a 100% in favor, but if it's subtle, I am not 100% opposed either. Reason for bringing it up is that I got asked about it, and I wasn't able to pass judgement entirely on my own. So, I decided to ask here. Anyone that can give me some invoice?


I'm with you, and kind of lean towards the more subtle-end of systems when magic is involved. Though personally, I've always liked it when magic serves a practical purpose as well. I guess the example I'd throw out would harken back to my ol' Totem days, which I'm gonna link in a second, once I go dig it up. God rest its soul.

EDIT: Found it. Something akin to what we had in that has always been my favorite type of system.
Very interested in this as well.
"Alright. I was born in a western area of Edessa, actually. Mihtmód, you know, where the Lord Bryne and his family reside. My parents were both gardeners, working in their household. When I was seven, my elder brother was taken to the capitol, to find work. I begged my parents to let me follow, and when I was twelve or so, my mother and I finally journeyed to Arrvern. I lived with my brother for a year, before I was old enough to- to work. I then moved into the castle, and I've worked for the last few years as a scullery maid."


Dal actually hadn't heard of Mihtmód, but he had heard Lord Bryne mentioned a few times in his various travels. Never saw the man nor where he lived, but Dal personally didn't admire men or women who clung to titles- and if a maid still referred to him as 'Lord' after all that has happened recently, Dal took that as a sign. Come to think of it, there was an absence of Edessan gentry that Dal actually did like. He often wondered about such a predisposition- perhaps he subconsciously picked it up from his father, the pinnacle of a working man.


"Funny you say that, my mother was a gardener, too. Even taught me the trade."

The two were silent for several moments; Dalsarad absorbed himself into listening to the footsteps of the horses and chewing the grass stalk in his mouth.

Lea broke the silence again: ""Are you planning on becoming a farmhand, then, once we reach the north? Or are you going to pursue something else? Is the earth there very hospitable towards the crops you've tended to here? Sorry if I seem ignorant, I am unaware of the customs of farmers. Is that grass you're chewing a custom of yours as well, or is that just a personal habit?"

Dal chuckled, "No, no, it's just a habit I picked up from my father. He did it to keep from biting his lips, though, which was a much nastier habit. Started when I was younger 'cause I wanted to be like him, I guess."

He spit out the grass stalk to the side of the road. It was starting to remind him of his father, and Dal didn't want to think about him right now. There were numerous more pressing issues than worrying about something he had no control of- it's not like he could stop and turn around at this point, no matter how badly the young man may want to.

"As for what I'm gonna do when we get to the North; hadn't given it much thought. Obvious choice for me would be to become a farmhand, yes, but with the Varyans and Orcs south of us who knows what they'll do. What I'd want to do is earn enough wages somehow to buy my own little plot of land, find a woman I love, and settle down on my own farm. Live my days out in quiet peace."

Dal caught himself- he was starting to get a little off topic. Clearing his throat, he continued.

"But to answer your other question- I'm not sure what the soil there'll be like. Haven't been this far North before. I'm sure it couldn't be too bad, though. I mean, they gotta grow something, right?"
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