@Wade Wilson A few things, mostly nitpicking:
-a 21 year old no way had a wife and two kids, and was a physicist, he's just too young
-30 minutes is pretty exact for a torture limit
-The ability to take down three people at once is impressive, but lets try to keep this not a 100% thing.
Otherwise, it's good, if you fix those things, add it to the list!
-a 21 year old no way had a wife and two kids, and was a physicist, he's just too young
-30 minutes is pretty exact for a torture limit
-The ability to take down three people at once is impressive, but lets try to keep this not a 100% thing.
Otherwise, it's good, if you fix those things, add it to the list!