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@Wade Wilson A few things, mostly nitpicking:
-a 21 year old no way had a wife and two kids, and was a physicist, he's just too young
-30 minutes is pretty exact for a torture limit
-The ability to take down three people at once is impressive, but lets try to keep this not a 100% thing.

Otherwise, it's good, if you fix those things, add it to the list!
Looks great Dreaming, go ahead and move it over

Just some thoughts for what I might do with Jim, not all of these will happen, maybe none of them:
Probably going to be some kind of meeting with Viole over expanding Jim's territory
Was Jim the one who killed Lucia's husband?
Lance and Jim butt heads once one of them gets too close?
Sam's new gang poses a threat to The Wires?

What does everyone think? I'm gonna start the IC post in the next day or so.
@End Here use the header functions, its [ h1 ] etc. (there are 1, 2 and 3, they center it and each larger number is a slightly smaller font)
Wow, nice job everyone!
@HekazuAh I see, alright, leave it as is
@bluetommy2 Nice job, looks good to me
@The Narrator As I said, all characters must be over 18, otherwise, it's good
@Athinar Excellent, you're good
@FantasyChic I like it, all good here

Please move your applications to the "characters" section

We're waiting on Wade and Dreaming for their characters, and then we should be good to go!

For the Map:
Sam Parks will be placed close to the park, in the industrial zone
Aleksandr Kain will get a small spot in the Residential Zone
Lance Vitanza will be given a large portion of the port, not bordering Jim (yet)
Adam will be given a section of the residential zone far from our other two residential occupants
Scarlet will be given a spot in the Port
@Wade WilsonNice job using the split personality to get yourself lots of traits ;)
Is there anyone else who needs to post before I or Athinar interact with the dead for the first time? (I assume our characters will survive uninfected? Maybe wounded but not dead?)
Ah, so they're just "whatever I can think of" basically? And you didn't answer whether you'd like me to include this info or not in my character sheet.
Would you like us to put info about the baby dragon that chose our characters? Cause I'll need some more info on dragon types, appearance, etc. for that.
Sounds good. I think it might be better to keep all relevant stuff in this thread, and just give it headings to distinguish it, but I'm open to whatever.
@Kharons Progeny Bravo, I love it. Welcome Aboard, move it into Characters! EDIT: I'm actually quite jealous of how nice it is, and mad at myself that my own character doesn't have as detailed a backstory, though I suppose yours needs it more than mine, though I may add to Jim's a little later.
@Hekazu I like it, but his power seems a little OP, could you explain how it's not too dangerous?
@Athinar Flesh out the history a bit more and you're in.

When you two fix yours, i'll put you on the map

@dreamingflowers Looks good so far, can't wait to see the history

@The Narrator Are you going to fix yours? or should I count you out?

WE NEED MORE GANGS PEOPLE. We only really have two so far, though I think Hekazus character will get one pretty quick
(Also, dont' worry, there will be NPC gangs too)
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