Okay added my characters. : )
rambling: No rush, take as long as you need.
Act: Looks good so far, but could you mention some of his flaws to balance him out a bit? I'm a fan of character development and flawed characters so anything you can add will give him some nice depth. Also I don't really understand his reasoning for going to Saint-Vienne. Is he fleeing from the police? Burying the bodies there? Looking for another of his attackers? As for the sword, I don't want anyone to start off with weapons, but you can have him bring it with him, he'll just need to be separated from it as soon as he enters the town. It can go missing, or he can fall asleep in his car and it's gone when he wakes up, ect. He'll have a chance to get it back later in the game.