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9 yrs ago
Hi Everyone, due to the dangers of rugby I'm now in hospital so I'm not going to posting for a few days. Sorry if I'm letting anyone down!

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I'm afraid I'm in the same kind of boat I'm doing my GCSE mocks And Mr DofE so I will be unable to post for a few days
alright i gave you a little opening. feel free to post now.


Thanks.
LI walked from the heli, it had been a long flight form the UK and I was slightly diorentated. Looking around at this huge complex made me feel at ease I picked up my rucksack and made my way of the pad. As soon as the heli took off I was greeted by a man, he yelled
Hey you you new guy! Leo Renton I presume?”
I inspected the man,by the looks he wasn’t the highest of ranks,must be here to collect me I thought, I replied:
“Indeed,just got of the plane.air traffic is a pain nowadays”
“Welcome to Fantasy Island,” he said shaking my hand I’ll take you to where you need to go"
He took me through the doors and into the main building by the looks of things.; Here we are someone will come get you soon, nice to meet you by the way.” he left leaving me leaning up against the wall.
I think I'll wait until a better opening for me to jump in
I believe I've fixed all of the grammar mistakes on my CS.
Name:Leo Renton
Age:21
Appearance:Leo is a tall stocky man and he has a tanned smooth complexion. He Has blonde hair in which he wears in a flat cut except for a fringe which covers his right eye.he'll normally wear a black t-shirt with camouflage combat trousers.
Weight:80kg
Height:6ft 4"
Gender: male
Country of Origin:UK

Hope this is okay :)
Fixed thanks for pointing them out. I think I've corrected them all. I have also changed the enhancements. Also i do apologise for missing out the sections, I work on a word document and then post it so something must've got lost between copy and paste.
In your post you were still accepting, is there still a space?
Hope you don't mind another, this looks really interesting so i would like to join in.



Name:
Leo Renton
Alias:
Prophet
Age:
24
Personality:
Leo is a quiet, collected, astute man. Leo isn’t the most sociable man on earth but he will not avoid a conversation. Leo normally pauses before he says something as to think about what will be the after effects of saying such things. Leo will always be assertive of his situation his eyes are normally darting around the area scanning looking for vantage points and exits.He will always go for a stealthy approach than a guns blazing This is because he was trained in the art of stealth.Leo hates people who abuse their powers it is his objective in life to hunt down all the people who abuse their money and power.





Skills:
Leo is trained was trained in hand to hand and ranged combat by the mercenaries, they said it was essential for his survival out in the field.
Gear/Equipment/Weapons:
Leo wields a Customised compound Barnet cross bow with flashlight. Leg mounted silenced M22 pistol Gerber LHR Combat Knife and fibre wire.

Enhancements:
During a mission Leo was captured, by his target who wanted to know who hand hired him during this torture; they burnt his muscle fibre so he was paralysed in his right arm, and gave him a dip into some molten iron. After being saved he undertook extensive surgery. Leo had multiple problems he had motor neurone damage to his right arm, reactions times were slowed and most of the muscle fibre was fried. The company said that he was too good a soldier to lose. So they used stem cells to repair the broken down muscles but it grew them back larger than ever. The paralysed arm was replaced with a bionic arm which can lift 3 tonnes, his senses were replaced by a robotic sensory apparatus equipped with a movement sensor and a HUD, To match his upgrades he was given a SRS2 (Stealth and Reversal Suit 2) this allowed him up to 7 minutes of invisibility and is able to create a smoke screen for a quick escape.

Bio:
At the age of 20 Leo joined ‘Shadow Company’ , a hit man style, group of mercenaries who went on missions around the world to eliminate people of a client’s choosing. Leo lost many friends on these missions and it made him the quiet and self-dependent person he is today
Leo slowly made is way up through the ranks of shadow company, and It was on his 50th mission when he had the incident. When he had the implants he was moved to his own squad and given the call sign: Prophet.

On his 134th mission when he realised ‘Shadow company’ was employed by a rich business man who killed any who opposed him. After this information was revealed to him he decided that it was his duty to the world to stop him. After failing to convince his old squad members he realized it was up to him. When it came to kill his target he cut communications so he could talk to the man and find out the location of his employer. There was no way he could kill this man straight after finding out this secret, by the looks of things he had only one option.to go rouge. After a week of going rouge he had narrowed his search to one location; the man’s villa.

When it came to disposing of the man he didn't want to do it straight away at first he wanted to find out why he did it. Upon asking the man said: “For power my boy. The world be in turmoil if no one had power, don’t you understand that?” he replied by a swift knife to the jugular and the words: “No”.
Leo wanted to leave his old life behind and so he left his SRS2 next to him with a note saying:’good luck using this I took the power core it’s useless now.’
After this he ran as far as he could to a new place to call home.

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