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don't worry, I just updated my CS post with Tritus! A dumb, young male who will certainly try to keep things balanced.

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@KorkoaYou're in, glad to see that Jessie might finally have some time to spread her wings

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beware the almighty Citricut, master of lemons and razor-thin flesh-wounds

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@BluetommyAccepted!

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To balance things out a little, I might be calling it for characters soon, but not without leaving you all with another character of mine to help balance things out just a tad bit everyone’s looking good so far!

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@Royaletutor59looks great! As for names... diamondback? Steelback? Not quite sure on the name. We’ll workshop it.

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Don’t worry, I took that into account. David’s powers can still proceed as normal, though he would have been one of barely a handful of metahumans alive at the time. Especially regarding time powers, things can get really weird.

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@unicorgioh yeah, did you not read the info? People just started getting Superpowers about three years ago. A large majority of the population has powers in some way shape or form. Think like Hero Academia.

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For starters, having two characters having powers originated from Aprico’s tests seems like a little much, especially given how close they resemble one another. Maybe expand a little more on the Venom side and less on the spider side? Maybe her power from The Boom wasn’t discovered until she got hit with a stray bullet from a stolen prototype weapon?

As for skills and unsuited skills, anything not science related? She seems pretty athletic, so maybe dive deeper down that route?

I don’t want to tell you how to make your character so they’ll fit in, otherwise I’d just write them myself, but I want to help you get an idea to help make them stand out among other similar characters

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@unicorgiAfter a bit of debate and looking over your cs, while your character is certainly interesting, they're just not what I'm looking for here. With your character being in the mix, that would make a third techie without a lot to differ them from David in terms of unsuited skills.

The use of camouflage and minor shapeshifting is pretty cool, but its the backstory that kind of sets me off.Also, the spider motif is something I'm really shaky on since I'm already doing that for Fringe. Would you mind working at your CS a little more before I say yes or no? It's got potential, but could you work on it to make them more different than the other accepted characters?