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Pixiiboo said
Just looked at some of the other profiles and his magic is basically one spell for another character.Eugene is f*ccccccccccccked :D


Well then.. Maybe you could beef up the power? Like he doesn't need to touch them, but just has to focus on them when he can see them? So the floodgate for his power would be to concentrate on something. You could still have him be in a constant state of confusion though, because you could say that giving his attention to something will leak memories into his head, but when he really focuses he gets the whole thing. I reckon that'd be a bit more usable for this RP, but what you want to do is fine :)

And Wire wouldn't negate it.. Its just that he has a lot more memories in a shorter timeframe! It'd be like reading the memories of a guy who's very old, only he isn't. And most of the memories will just be his thoughts. So that could be confusing..

EDIT: Oh, and forgot to say that I'm pretty darn impressed by how much thought has gone into him. I've RP'd before on a different site (it wasn't specifically designed for it, but whatevs) and I can see that people freaking stress the details here! And it's awesome!
Pixiiboo said
Name: Eugene Colburt
Codename: He’s new to this “superhero” thing, doesn’t have one (poor guy)


Holy crap, him and Wire would be the best freaking partners.

And is there a limit to his ability, or is his limit just being normal physically? How much time does it take to sift through memories? Does he get all their memories at once, or just the ones that he needs to access at the time? Is it harder to read from an organic than an inorganic? Does the age of the object/organic in question make it harder to read their memories because there are more memories attached to them?

Some things to think about? I like this guy!
MrDidact said
That all sounds good but then why would he be in it? Oh just the whole desert nerve enhancing thing.


Well, why would he be in it? Hmm.. well, to work! He doesn't have a civilian job, and he doesn't really want one: being a part time 'vigilante for hire' is much more difficult.

And the desert science team was dissolved when they ran out of funding. It wasn't a madhouse of science, it was a just very unorthodox (to actually get funding) and so inefficient. They didn't mean to work on super soldiers and the like, just cure incurable diseases and whatnot. You could say that a few prominent scientists had their origins in this group, but I didn't want to build a human conspiracy around his origin. Only Wire himself and his associate Gem would be aware of his ties to the project, and thats fine. It makes him less of a lynchpin, and more of a tangent.

And if there was a conspiracy to his origin, it definitely wouldn't be based in the mortal plane.... But thats nothing to worry about too deeply :P
MrDidact said
Quiet Thinker, It's a great sheet there are just two thins that need expansion. Why would he go to America and join the League? And you could expand what this whole project is.


Ah, I should probably state that he just doesn't trust that the league will end well: to him its a powder keg of sudden power and inexperience and he does not want to be affiliated (aka responsible) for what they may end up doing in the future. That, and just a general fear of being responsible for others puts him off. He's his own boss. And there is work to be had in America.

And what do you mean by project?
I can't wait to join this RP. Looks like a lot of fun, and is really nicely fleshed out.

Just need to wait to get my char approved ._.
Pfff... Everyone knows that the best form of society is a dictatorship.

Shame it always ends badly.
Arty Fox said
Unusable character ideas: A super hero who can literally punch you into next week. Like you're fighting against them and then they punch and suddenly you're in the supermarket with a trolley of groceries. What has happened? What did you need to buy? what did you not need to buy? Confusion and questions ensue D:


I want that as a graphic novel, and it would be freaking hilarious.
Name:


Codename: Wire

Age: 28

Gender: Male

Place of Birth: England.

Affiliations: Gem, a 25 year old woman and prodigy programming engineer. She has been his closest friend for 9 years and assigns him his clients. Her whereabouts are known only to Wire.

Occupation: "Private investigator"

Appearance: Wire wears a dark-silver steel helmet that covers his whole head. It's only prominent feature is the eye hole, which measure from his eyebrows to the tip of his nose and consists of a single black one-way bullet-resistant visor, but it has numerous scrapes and small dents in it. He wears a black leather jacket, with a dark grey nylon inlay, sleeves and hood, which he leaves unzipped over a dark green and black brandless short wetsuit (as in it doesn't have elongated sleeves or legs). He wears a pair of black trousers which he tucks into a pair of black boots that reach halfway up his calf muscles. He wears a pair of dark green and black gloves. On his back he carries a duffel bag to keep things he may need for a job in, including his two titanium gloves.

He stands at 6 feet and 1 inch. He is Caucasian, and has brown hair and light brown eyes.

Powers:
- Reconstructed Nerves: His nerves send signals at the speed of a wire. On average that is 300 000 times faster than a normal human nerve. This has had a variety of effects on him.
- Radically Variable Time Perception: For reasons unknown to him, when his brain recognises that it needs to react to something (as in, when he focuses on a task or object that will require quick reflexes), his perception of time will slow as much as it needs to. For example, if someone was about to fire a gun at him, his perception of time would slow much more than if he needed to catch a ball that someone was throwing to him.
- Time Stop: Also for reasons unknown to him, when he overrides his breathing reflex and consciously tries to breathe, his brain slows his perception of time by as much as it can. It is unknown how much it slows it, but time in all regards appears to stop, and he cannot move a muscle. He can simply watch and think. He has gained a mastery over this ability in his years with it.
- Limit Breaking: [i]Also[/i[ for reasons unknown to him, the limits that the brain usually enforces on his muscles has been removed. This means that he can use 100% of his muscle power if he needs to, but at great cost to his health.
- Resistance to Telepathy: While his current thoughts can be read if he is not altering his perception of time, while he is at Time Stop, his thoughts are unreadable as they are happening so fast. Digging into his memories is inadvisable, as the strength of his nerve signals can cause some feedback.
- Nerve regeneration: He cannot suffer permanent nerve damage.
- Remarkably Fast Learner: This was a skill that he gained with the rest of his powers. He wonders often if this implies some untapped potential.

Skills:
- Proficient at Hand to Hand Combat: With pinpoint accuracy he can attack weakpoints and dodge blows. He can even soften blows by leaning into them the instant they make contact with him.
- Peak Human Physical Condition: As simply walking can train his muscles if he wishes it, he has quickly gained incredibly strong muscles and cardiovascular strength.
- Hacking: In his time with Gem, he has picked up a few tricks.
- Problem Solving: His brain is very logically wired, and he has all the time in the world to think things through. And the more that he has, the less time he seems to need to..

Equipment/Resources :
- The only weapons that he uses are a pair of large titanium gloves; a memento of a lost friend. With them he can punch as hard as he wishes without risking damage to his hands.
- He has a titanium mask that he uses to hide his identity, and is equipped with a radio/phone and voice scrambler. It gives a very metallic sound to his words.
- He does not have a large amount of funds, but earns enough to live in relative comfort.
- He has a short range emp emitter which requires a special disposable core for each use. When it goes off, it can completely fry electrical equipment in close proximity to it, and shuts them down if they are within a moderate range.
- He has a makeshift portable computer, about the size of a smart phone but much thicker. It has all manner of ports to connect to all manner of different outputs and inputs, and is used primarily for hacking and taking digital information. It is made from smartphone and computer parts, and is far from waterproof.
- He had support from Gem for most of his career, but it is unknown what their current relationship is.

Weaknesses:
- Electricity can be particularly dangerous for him. As his nerves give little to no resistance to currents, shocks that make it through his skin pass straight through him to ground. This can mean that if he is hit by an electric shock, he may not even flinch as he can counter the spasms as it passes through his body; especially as it passes through so quickly. However, if it passes through his heart, he is at serious risk of death from even a small shock.
- He has all the weakness of a normal Human, as the only thing superhuman about him is his nervous system. This also means that when he utilizes his superhuman strength by using the full potential of his muscles, he will cause damage to himself in doing so. This also means that the reaction time of his brain is vastly superior to the reaction time of his body.



Psychological Profile: Wire is a character who is very difficult to read. They always seem as though they are in control, but that is only skin deep. For what it's worth, he has a warmth to his character that is difficult to dismiss, despite the distance he keeps himself at. He always carries a watch.


Stance on the League: Wire does not have much trust in the league. He firmly believes that it is doomed to end in catastrophe, or at least attract catastrophe. He would rather not be affiliated (and in extension, responsible) for such a "powder keg or power and inexperience."
I've had him for a while, but never fleshed him out quite this much..
MrDidact said
Quiet Thinker, I didn't catch your post earlier but welcome to the RP! It'll be nice to have you. What kind of character are you aiming for? We can group-think an appearance that fits, after all pictures are not required. And I partially updated the threat, but still waiting on some of the players who haven't posted. No rush, just a reminder.


Thanks man!

Well, I've got everything else typed up, but if I can just do a description then that'd be cool. The main features of him are a steel helmet that covers his whole head that he wears, along with a pair of steel gloves that are moderately sizable. I just don't know what else he would wear, other than just a basic hooded jacket, trousers and boots..

If thats all I need for a description though, then I may as well just post it now.
I have a character that is pretty much good to go. I just don't have an appearance yet...
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