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Altim



T H E L I G H T O F W I S D O M I S R E B O R N
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The release of death was less like a sudden, climactic end.

Nay, life's end was more a sweet, subtle sort, a graceful fall into bliss—not unlike falling asleep.

The last thing Altim remembered was the sight of ocean-like, blue eyes and the feeling of warm, calloused hands. Those beautiful eyes and those diligent hands burned love one final time into the man as he passed from that world into the one that transcended it. In the company of his lover and his closest friends, Altim died a happy man in normal circumstances, for gone were the adventures and heroics of his past. His companions buried him respectfully at his request near the Holy Temple of Wisdom, where the man so saintly and wise took his eternal repose, and there the gods accepted the legend into the afterlife.

Clothed in white robes, he appeared in the infinite expanses of heaven and became a mere observer of time's passage. For a while, that felt right, but as the years drew longer and longer, Altim struggled to stay content with his posthumous disappointment. Not for he was impatient or entitled, but on merit of something... peculiar. There was truly something, something amiss, and after each century had ran its course, that fact became more and more apparent. The scholarly fellow came to his conclusion one night, when he gazed upon the stars that had danced in celestial splendor. The world around him grew gradually darker and colder, and Altim watched powerlessly as one by one, the burning lights in the godly sky were slowly doused. That malign entity wrought its sinful holocaust throughout the stars and brought each to its knees.

A mighty pang in the hero's heart signaled the fall of even Faerthus, the Wise, and tears stained Altim's sainted cheeks as he wept. Not even he whose wisdom was infinite could escape murder at the hands of the wretched creature. Yet the slaughter brutally continued.

Until the last god fell. Then there was nothing. All hope was lost.

A short moment of silence followed, and suddenly the world around him was damp. His eyes remained shut, but he did not need sight to know that his clothes were dripping wet and that the cosmic sensations of the heavens had been replaced by cold, timeworn masonry. His brown eyes flew open and made contact with a ceiling that seemed familiar to him to meet a relief carving, made by the hands of a famous sculptor whose name was lost to time. It depicted a scene of what were several men stricken in fear before a great light from within the forest. Vines had since grown over the carving, and although they partially obscured the text etched into the gold edges, one could still read what it had said:

Behold! That mighty light which illuminates the world is Wisdom.
All Virtue, Love, Peace, and Knowledge is enriched by it,
and from His sacred forest, the mighty light of Wisdom emanates.


Altim jolted upright in alarm and consternation. What was this? He sat in the middle of a clean pool of water. Behind him was what appeared to be stone double doors, but they must not have been doors since the space between the two slabs was very obviously closed. Outside the alcove in which the fountain lay, the room extended into a long hallway, at the end of which was a similar set of stone slabs, which comprised the true exit to the room. In the middle of the corridor, the ceiling raised to a glass dome, partially covered in overgrowth, from which light illuminated the building. The stone of the dilapidated structure had numerous cracks in it that moss and grasses sprung forth from, and the roots of a tree, in one place, broke through the ceiling in a hole that was packed tightly with dirt.

This, Altim understood, was the temple of his god, the Holy Temple of Wisdom. But how? He thought that he had died, but mysteriously enough, he felt whole. He was alive, with all of the needs and wills of the flesh. A quick look around himself gave him the answer. The state of the building was evidence enough that a whole era had passed since his last memories. Nothing was the same. At the time of his death, the temple was maintained ardently by Faerthus' disciples and Altim's students, but clearly it had fallen into disrepair.

The legend himself stood and walked across the cold, dusty floor, and he approached the door at the end of the hallway. He placed his hands upon the threshold and struggled to push the doors, but eventually the heavy slabs of marble and concrete gave way, dirt and pebbles falling onto Altim as the doors parted the soil that had blocked them. The forest outside was more or less lively as it was when he died. The birds still sang to the others, the leaves still swayed in the breeze. The temple itself was buried underneath a hill, atop which a large oak tree stood. Below the boughs of the tree, an elderly man sat. Altim's emergence from the temple stirred the new High Priest from his meditation beneath the oak, and with one eye open, the Priest asked, "What are you doing, young man?"

Altim raised a brow and pointed at himself questioningly.

"Yes, you."

The man seemed more confused by the Priest's affirmation. He was not young. In fact, he was certain that he was 137 years old if memory served right. But his body begged to differ. A quick glance down revealed that Altim wore not white but the same clothes he wore when he was a young man uniting the lands of Cynderia. "What happened to the temple?" asked the now young Altim from the foot of the small hill.

"Nothing. What ever are you talking about?"

"Nothing? The temple looks old and neglected. Its masonry is cracked. And its flame! Its flame is extinguished!"

"Of course it is old, young one. It was built in the years after Ansur established Ansus, and it is sixty-one thousand, twenty-three years since then."

That made Altim's eyes widen. He thought on it. "But is it not only fifty-eight thousand years since then?"

"What nonsense do you speak of? Surely, you are not two thousand years old!" The Priest spoke as if he were speaking to a blasphemer or a heretic. "Else you would have known the face of Altim, who saved this land from peril!"

"I am Altim!"

The Priest had a mixed look of disbelief and amusement. "You? Altim? You look nothing like the man! The true Altim was blond and had blue eyes. You have neither!"

Altim stomped his foot indignantly and scaled the hill. "Show me to Altim's violin," he demanded, a determined and fiery look in his eyes.

"And why should I do that? Your fingers are hardly deft enough to handle such a delicate instrument," the elder snappily replied.

"I need it," Altim emphasized. "And if you take me to it, I will best you with the truth of His Wisdom."


C H A P T E R I

A I M L E S S


There was little more than a blinding light and a searing pain as Ansur gave himself to the central pyre. This is where his journey would come to an end, after a hundred years leading the last people through the treacherous Northern Passages and fending off all manner of horrors: a construct of wood and tinder. It seemed poetically fitting that the world could not bring him to his knees so he gave himself willingly to the embrace of death. He dared not look back upon the faces that had gathered to bear witness to his final moments, as he could not stand to see them shed tears on his behalf. He knew they would be happy in this new land; happy and safe, and under the guidance of all the Gods that had promised him safety for his kin.

The flame was roaring, burning hot, crackling in its intensity, yet somehow lacking. It was an empty fire at the centre of a grand hall of polished marble and columns of pearl, an empty fire that hungered for the soul of a hero to be complete. The presence of the fire would ensure that this new land would not suffer the same fate as the last, a warding light to fend off the end.

Ansur smiled as he often did. He had done his part. Mankind was safe, and no longer had to flee. He looked down at his hands as they began to flay and bubble. His furs had already turned to ash around him. Despite the violently bright flame engulfing Ansur, his vision grew dark and narrow, before he could see nothing at all, and could only faintly feel the burning anymore. He dropped to the ground, his legs unable to support his weight; he just lay there for a moment in silence... waiting for the pain to end.

Ansur did not notice the transition from life to death. To him, it seemed as though it were simply an extension of his rest. One moment he could feel his body crumbling, and the next he felt whole once more. All he could do was lay there, engulfed in shadows, unable to move. His eyes cracked open after some struggle, and he could just make out the night sky, framed by the great rings that hung in the heavens. He watched for some time, not knowing what this realm beyond life would bring. He watched for years or for hours - he could not tell which - counting the stars that shone in the otherworldly void. He could see some shine brightly, but some simply faded into obscurity, and, curiously, some simply vanished. It was as though something were extinguishing the stars themselves. And then he felt cold, as though somebody had extinguished a nearby campfire, leaving him to shiver in the darkness. Then there was a voice... a presence. A whispering. An endless lament that felt like fire in his mind, madness given form. It was speaking to him. Speaking. Speaking without hesitation or end. It was such an empty and hollow voice that he knew despair now reigned in whatever realm he had come to. It spoke with such anguish and despair and fury and anger all mixed together that Ansur knew this place was now Godless.

His eyes snapped open, only to sting as if sand had been rubbed into them. He gasped for air but only got a lungful of ash. He jolted upwards, coughing violently, splashing up clouds of ghostly white powder. He rubbed his burning eyes and took a moment to catch his breath. He squinted. What was this place? A great hall of crumbled marble and columns of faded pearl? Vines grew over the dilapidated ceiling, and mould and moss crept up the walls to meet it. It was vast and empty, but somewhat familiar to him. He looked at his legs and hands to find them buried in a great mound of ash, as though a fire had been raging in his very place for thousands of years if not longer.

Ansur forced himself upright, dusting off the ash and stepping onto the uneven tile surface. He looked up and he looked around, the familiarity with this place burrowing deep into his head, bugging him like a relentless insect.

There was a window on the far side of the chamber, not a decorative one by any means, but an aperture through which a thin sunlight filtered through. Without it, the chamber would have surely been pitch black. The place could have definitely used a fire or two, he thought to himself.

He hurried over to the window to catch a glimpse of the outside world to get his bearings. It took him a good few minutes to reach the far side of the hall. As he stepped up to the window he could not disregard the inscriptions lining it, though they were faded and difficult to read, he could make out the words:

'This chamber, dedicated to Ansur, the founder of Ansus, stands eternal in his memory. May we all strive to be like he.'

Ansur frowned. Surely, this could not be!

He leaned to glimpse out of the window. From his vantage point high above the surrounding plains, he could see two suns beginning to set, and great rings of light stretching across the zenith of the sky.

He was back?

"Halt!" Shouted a stern figure from the other side of the room. The voice was strong enough to shake the foundations of the chamber and surely stop any lesser man in their tracks. "You are in violation of the highest law of Ansus, in the name of our father Ansur, you have trespassed upon holy ground. You will submit or you will be killed!" it screamed.

Ansur turned to see a string of heavily clad soldiers filter in through doorways on the far side of the hall, all adorned in gold and silver, encrusted with jewels of the most beautiful incarnadine red. Each soldier bore a cloak gilded with gold leaf thread and a blade forged to the highest quality. But admire them as he may, it was only a mere moment before they surrounded Ansur, blades pointed in his direction, all stern and poised to kill at a moment's notice.

"Ansur?" he asked.

"Do not speak the name of our forefather in vain, you rat. Tell us how you got in here past the guards." one demanded.

"Tell us or we are authorised to use lethal force upon you," another added.

"Trespassing upon the Bastion of Light is a crime punishable by death!" yet another noted.

The Bastion of Light. His own design. The place he created for his sons and daughters to guide them through the darkest of nights. He was in Ansus, and had awoken in the specific place he had given himself to death. But the fire was... out? It did not even glow with embers or show the afterglow of a flame. It was stone cold and dry, out for some time. Ansur had awoken in a mound of his own ashes to an end he did not understand. Why was he back? How was he back?

"Speak!" demanded one of the soldiers, thrusting his blade forward, coming dangerously close to Ansur.

"I died here," he said softly.

There was a brief reprieve from the scrutiny as Ansur's answer took them off guard. They lowered their weapons for a second before raising them back.

"He's fuckin' with us," said one of the guards as he lunged forward with his blade, raising it overhead in an attempt to bring it down on Ansur's skull. Ansur sidestepped away with grace and elegance, leaving the blade to clash with the crumbled floor tiles, sending a mighty, resounding echo through the hall.

"My name is Ansur, and I died here." he repeated again and again, each time becoming more frustrated with the ignorance of the soldiers. Every time he said so it seemed to strengthen their resolve to kill him, though try as they might, they just could not lay their blades upon him.

"My name is Ansur!" he shouted one last time after dodging another stroke of steel. "I am the Forefather!" He latched onto the blade of one of the assailants, gripping the sharp of the weapon with bare hands, and yanked it from the grasp of the soldier. There was no blood, no scratch, nor any visible marks on his skin from disarming the soldier. He masterfully weaved the blade above his head, using it to slap away the incoming strikes before stabbing it into the hard floor tiles with such force that the blade would stand on its own, trapped there between the rock. A mighty shockwave followed the piercing of the tiles, sending each soldier's blade spiralling to the walls of the chamber and knocking each man to their knees.

It looked like they were bowing to him, and no man dared to stand up once more. So they knelt.

From their vantage, the soldiers could clearly see the artwork on the chamber ceiling through the thick overgrowth: an illustration of Ansur in his glory, furs adorned, hair as wild as ever; a spitting image of the man who had just brought them low. Could it be...?

"Ansur...?" One of the soldiers asked, tears brewing in this eyes.

"Stand, you are not in danger here." Ansur replied.

And the soldiers did, one by one, raise themselves to their feet. They kept their heads bowed and did not say a word.

He looked back, and then once more at the soldiers.

"Why is the Great Fire extinguished?"
@FantasyChic: Don't worry, you're not late at all! I'm just getting this thing on the road and restricting applications, so nobody gets bored and I won't get overloaded with new, unexpected applicants.
@Guilty Spark: The event could have happened somewhere around when Daen lived. That would be convenient since it divides PA in half.
@Guilty Spark: That's true. The problem arises when we try to find an event that is significant enough to justify another calendar after PA.
@Guilty Spark: What do you mean by that?

Also if people want to work their dates into the history, feel free to do so.
Yup! This doesn't mean you have to say the date like that in your character sheets or in character. It's just easier to keep track of the lore this way. See my edit to my previous post.
There is no 0 AT or 0 PA, just like there is no 0 BC or 0 AD.

Ansur lived 60,000 years ago. Let us consider Ansur's death the end of humanity's journey, and let us consider Ansur's death also the final event marking the foundation of Ansus.

Let 1 AT be the year when this event happened. Let the year after that be 1 PA. AT and PA function like BC and AD, respectively.

Therefore, the year at the time of the roleplay would be approximately 60000 PA. This means that Altim died in 58063 PA, and Daen lived around 30000 PA.

Edit: In the roleplay, of course, it would be customary to say "thirty thousand years after Ansur walked the Earth" or describe the date relative to previous events rather than say "30000 post Adventum."
@Corvidae: Crow and Altim describe two aspects of myself perfectly.

I think I'm going to make a better system of dates. How about, instead of saying x years before events of the IC, we say x years after the end of the people's journey into Ansus? So we have: post Adventum or PA, which means "after the Arrival," and anno Tenebrarum or AT, which means "year of Darkness." I think it's pretty obvious which time periods they describe. This way we can more easily date events and provide an accurate timeline. Thoughts or suggestions?

I don't know about hours, days, or months, considering the planet has two moons and rings. How would we define those? Or should we just use Earth's measurements?
@Corvidae: Would Altim qualify as a sufficiently helpful homosexual?

@Dextkiller: Holy moly, Jesus take the wheel.
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